Hi everyone. I've read a lot of stories on this board which have inspired me to right my own. The chapters are quite short, but it's all part of the build up of the story. It's called "Lovers Or Friends". I hope you enjoy it. Here it is:

Lovers Or Friends CHAPTER 1

First I’ll explain how me and Tip know each other. Well him and my brother Marcus have been boys since as long as I can remember. They always have each others back and see each other like everyday.
Me and Tip aren’t that close but we’re cool, we have the occasional convo but that’s as far as our relationship goes. Anyway it was Friday night and after a long night of celebrating Marcus’ birthday at D-Spot (one of the hottest clubs in town) I waited outside for Marcus to give me a ride home like he promised.

Tip: (Leaving club with a bunch of hoes)
Dee Dee: Ay Tip, you seen Marcus?
Tip: Oh yea, He left ages ago with the twins.
Dee Dee: That prick! I can’t believe he left me! How am I supposed to get home?
Tip: Chill lil’ mama I’ll give you a ride.
Dee Dee: Naw, I can see your busy (looking a the girls waiting on Tip)
Tip: Don’t even trip, they can go on without me
Dee Dee: You sure?
Tip: Yea, I can’t just leave you out here. Your Marcus’s sis.
Dee Dee: Aight, thanks. Getting in Tip’s car.

~Car Ride~

Dee Dee: I’m lovin’ your new video, it’s real hot.
Tip: Really? Well how bout’ you be in my next one?
Dee Dee: Me? You serious?
Tip: Yea wit the way you were dancing tonight.
Dee Dee: (laughs)
Tip: And you fine.
Dee Dee: (kinda blushes)
Tip: So you down wit it?
Dee Dee: Of course, I’d love to be in your next video.
Tip: Good. Whats yo number? (giving her his phone)
Dee Dee: Types digits.

~Nearing house~

Dee Dee: We’re here. I still don’t believe your serious. But I guess I just gotta wait and see. Thanks for the ride. (leans over and hugs Tips)
Tip: No problem shawty. I’ll call you wit the details.
Dee Dee: Aight. (getting out the car)

Please bump it and leave a comment if you liked it. More is coming soon.

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This message has been edited. Last edited by: Icare4u,

u doing good boop keep goin it grabbed me so like i said keep goin

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Originally posted by tootie:
u doing good boop keep goin it grabbed me so like i said keep goin

Thanks, I appreciate the support.

its good so far keep writin bump bump

are you gon keep goin i like the stories com on what happened when yall got to the house.....invite him up com on somethin we wouldnt expect put dro in it com on gurl