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In this world,
Content with who I want to be.
Lost the girl,
But I think there's many more for me.
And in this place,
Nothing can ever bother me.
I breathe it all in,
And exhale my sins, so it seems.

There's no point of origin,
And no destination in sight.
An eternal ride,
My mind's creation, I fight.
All of the wrong things,
Give me sensation tonight.
It's no wonder you left me,
In my creation called life.


Fall asleep,
A dream puts me right back with you.
Wake back up,
Feel alone but that's nothing new.
I create,
A world that puts me inside of you.
I inhale my pain,
And blow it away, so it seems.

There's no point of origin,
And no destination in sight.
An eternal ride,
My mind's creation, I fight.
All of the wrong things,
Give me sensation tonight.
It's no wonder you left me,
In my creation called life.


I fight to get away,
Struggle each and every day.
I wish you could lead the way,
But it's my fault, I've created it.
How did it get this way?
Don't follow through with what I say.
I thought you were here to stay,
But it's my fault, I've created it.


There's no point of origin,
And no destination in sight.
An eternal ride,
My mind's creation, I fight.
All of the wrong things,
Give me sensation tonight.
It's no wonder you left me,
In my creation called life.


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The same things you're thinking might make you feel better,
The same things that probably got you here.




My Music:
http://www.myspace.com/hbp0819music
**Updated 9/28/08**

"You're a dumb fuck but you got a good head on your shoulders."
- Lefty

 
Posts: 8509 | Location: whee NC | Registered: 29 November 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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Another good one. Can't wait to see what you do to this in song form!


One thing I have to say, I want to see you stray away from the Verse/Chorus/Verse/Chorus/Bridge/Chorus format.


Not that you shouldn't do it EVERY time, but on songs, try some different shit. Maybe no bridge? Maybe pre-choruses and shit.


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Harrison's Theme Song
"It's Harrison!
He stalks you at night!
If you don't have morning wood,
Something's not right, it's
Harrison! Ohh, yeah!"
 
Posts: 1513 | Location: Olathe, KS | Registered: 10 June 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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Wow, H. ANOTHER awesome song here. Very, very sad. ..and of course, amazingly written.


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I'm no meteorologist but I'm pretty sure it's raining bitches.
 
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Those lyrics are so f'n awesome H! I love it!!! Also can't wait to hear it =)


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"As always should haves where I'm going
There's always could haves where I've been.
Anywhere but here,
I wish I was anywhere but here."
-Aaron Lewis
 
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Thanks guys. And E, my last song wasn't in that format!


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The same things you're thinking might make you feel better,
The same things that probably got you here.




My Music:
http://www.myspace.com/hbp0819music
**Updated 9/28/08**

"You're a dumb fuck but you got a good head on your shoulders."
- Lefty

 
Posts: 8509 | Location: whee NC | Registered: 29 November 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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great i like it alot
can't wait to hear it


i know someday you'll have a beautiful life, i know you'll be a star
in somebody else's sky, but why
why, why can't it be, why can't it be mine?
 
Posts: 1126 | Location: SAN ANTONIO, TX | Registered: 09 November 2007Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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thanks buddy


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The same things you're thinking might make you feel better,
The same things that probably got you here.




My Music:
http://www.myspace.com/hbp0819music
**Updated 9/28/08**

"You're a dumb fuck but you got a good head on your shoulders."
- Lefty

 
Posts: 8509 | Location: whee NC | Registered: 29 November 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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Fuck Harrison, this is great, one of my favorites by you!


"Sometimes the weak become the STRONG"
 
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thank you jason.


----------
The same things you're thinking might make you feel better,
The same things that probably got you here.




My Music:
http://www.myspace.com/hbp0819music
**Updated 9/28/08**

"You're a dumb fuck but you got a good head on your shoulders."
- Lefty

 
Posts: 8509 | Location: whee NC | Registered: 29 November 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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