This one still has some work, I think. There are a few iffy spots... but here goes. Not sure on the title, either.


A woman with nothing to lose,
There were two, she had to choose.
It seemed oh so simple,
But now she is gone from the right one.

A man who was fighting the pain,
Felt there was nothing to gain.
It seemed oh so perfect,
But now he's alone again.
Chasing the dream again.

Now we are here,
Every thing's clear,
You fucked with me, you're done with me.
The thrills of this world
Can't last forever.
So why should we be here at all?

He sits by the phone on the wall,
Waiting for someone to call.
He seemed oh so lonely,
His only friend came from the bottle.

And she has dropped off the earth,
Which shows what the poor man was worth.
It seemed so predictable,
But that doesn't help him now.
He chases the dream all the way down.

[repeat chorus]

Why should we be here to fall?
Why did I meet you at all?

This woman, she lives with her choice.
But when she hears its voice,
She knows he's the wrong one,
What's done is done.

Now he's alone in his bed,
Her choice, he can't accept.
He asks, "Should I wake up
To live this nightmare again?"
Chasing the nightmare again.

WOW! This was fucking awesome, H! Seriously, I think this is my favorite song of yours, which is saying something. The lyrics are so moving, I can only imagine how good the recording will be.

Once again, amazing job H. 5 stars. And 'The Dream' is the perfect title for it, IMO.

What B-Ri said.

Damn y'all responded quickly. Thanks fellas.

Just bumping this one back up, H.

Your computer still not like it should be? I just ask 'cause it'll be great to hear this one when you're able to.

Yeah....still no computer unfortunately.

dude. amazing job
kinda blown away by it
great job

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Originally posted by steve!:
kinda blown away by it

Absolutely. I've read this song a bunch of times and I'm still in awe of it.

And H, that's kinda sad about your computer. I guess we all got spoiled when you were recording all your new songs right away, haha. But yeah, I know I said it already, but definitely looking forward to hearing this one.

^thanks steve, and thanks again brian

H, that is one hell of a lyric bro. Second verse definately my favorite...story of my life. Great job man.

holy shit this is awesome. i can kinda relate too from the girl's perspective (as in having to make a choice between 2 ppl)..kinda in the same situation but i don't want to fuck with anyone's emotions like the girl in this song obviously did..great job tho! you're really good at telling a story with your lyrics..

hey you guys got to this while i was gone. thanks a lot zak and candice, i really really appreciate it.

Wow, I really like this one H!! It's an easy one to read to (if that makes any sense) Great job!

thank you sir.

man i wish i could record this. its going to be powerful. very powerful. its not all bad that i can't record though...because as time goes on and i keep messing with it, parts just keep getting added. i just hope i don't forget them.

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Originally posted by hbp0819:
man i wish i could record this. its going to be powerful. very powerful.

Man, I can totally believe that. I seriously love these lyrics. Like Steve said, the first time I read it, I was blown away. And as powerful as the words are, I can only imagine how amazing the recording will be. So...HURRY THE FUCK UP, FLAFFY!!! Haha, just kidding...sorta. =) But yeah, man, we're all anxiously awaiting this one H.

Question? Who is Flaffy?

^^haha thanks brian.

and danny, how have you not figured this out yet. i am the flaffy.

Care to explain? Lol. I caught it on a couple of posts and was like who the hell is this?

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Originally posted by hbp0819:
^^haha thanks brian.

and danny, how have you not figured this out yet. i am the flaffy.

And HELLO!!!!!!!! Flaffy!!!!!!! hahaha

That's REALLY great!! I like it....


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