just a quick song i did up. Its my attempt to pull my ass out of what is being discussed in the song. tell me what ya think ill post the rest when its all done

Do you know
what we all feel?
the pain that sits atop our shoulders
and forces us to kneel

the timeless struggle that we all brave
also you must, to see another day


GET UP youve got the whole day in front of you
24 hours, to discover what lights the fire to pull you through
Dont bother, with what you dont approve, the greatest thing? tomorrow's always new

You'll find us being cherished
or grieving over memories that have perished
we always forge our own path through, come upon your dreams, and youll escape too

The timeless struggle that we all carry on,
you must find the will to live, or you will soon be gone.

GET UP youve got the whole day in front of you
24 hours, to discover what lights the fire to pull you through
Dont bother, with what you dont approve, the greatest thing? tomorrow's always new

move ahead to whats in store, or you will be where you ended before. right in your room of despair, with your back against the door.

you must find the will to live, or your life will soon be gone.

That's really good. I like the whole subject of it...just the fact that it's about perseverance, and trying your best to not let bad things that happen really get to you. I have a poem that is somewhat similar, as far as the subject goes. It's called "Hope".

Hey its a great concept some clever ideas but i think its more like a story than a song ya know?there's a few too many lyrics try shorten it down a bit so that people can remember lyrics and understand what your saying(thats if its a fast song!)hope you dont get offended by what i said its just some advice that ive learned. can you believe i actually went to a college called the rock school!!ha ha!!its gas!i went for two years and they were the best two years of my life.i graduate in november.

bah. ez to remember lyrics are kinda boring. but thanks for the advice :P

i did this one up real quick, it does need some work though. in the sea or the pages are better in my opinion. i dont know about games though.