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So down that path you chose
You were taken by the hand
Taught what you should do
And told to never understand.

Only if your joy is right
And you falter when you sin
It will all be a memory
You'll never have a chance to live again.

If he; read the red on which read:
'Bring us back yesterday'
To flick your wings off our shoulders
And make up what you want us to say.

While taking in the only part
Of something you've never said
It's never been clear where to start
But it's always where we begin.

So take it in, take it in, take it in
And hide it so well
So that it's the only thing you know
And you'll forget before you have a chance to tell.

This is really good!
Just this one line confuses me:

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If he; read the red on which read:

Too much "read." Maybe the last word you should say "said" instead of "read." idk jus my two cents for what it's worth.

Great lyrics as always, E. Haven't seen any from you in awhile.

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Originally posted by Candiss:
This is really good!
Just this one line confuses me:

quote:

If he; read the red on which read:

Too much "read." Maybe the last word you should say "said" instead of "read." idk jus my two cents for what it's worth.

The whole damn thing confuses me, haha.

And yeah I understand what you mean about the 'read'. For some reason when I was writing I thought of "read the red on which read" and had that stuck in my head. But read the red on which said works a little bit better I think.

Thank you both. I had this one for awhile, but I don't like it, because it was the one and only song I've ever done that I just wrote down shit that really didn't make sense, it was just the first thing that came to mind. But if it works, it works =P.