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i see it says lyrics so thats what these are. lyrics for a song. I wrote it about a half a year ago at a place called Job Coprs. i met a kid there named nate noel. this kid has amazing talent and could probably get himself signed but unfortunately a problem with cocaine got him removed from job corps and no one has heard from him again. I wrote this song for him to write accoustic guitar to, but he never got it.

subject matter is the end of a struggling relationship.

The Pages

What a way to go out
like a grain of sand torn from its bedding
Amidst an indistinguishable backdrop of the blue
So alone, at the same time too close
amidst the freedom he strived for, yet still is dreading

Everything has a beginning and an end

In these pages, of history swept aside
I look back, and dont understand why
You and i, we could never get it together
Now i stand here alone and weathered
Soon ill be forgotten, broken and tethered
to the life in these pages

She looks up to the night sky
And wonders why he had to go and die
just to be replaced with a shell of the old and no soul of its own
She never wanted it to happen that way.
wishing that, he could have just stayed.
Now defeat sinks in. time she spent spinning the tale
Is blown away, in a dark and stormy gale
The only thing left for her to do
is shut the book, and start anew

In these pages, of history swept aside
I look back, and dont understand why
You and i, we could never get it together
Now i stand here alone and weathered
Soon ill be forgotten, broken and tethered
to the life in these pages

A year has gone by
Where once was destruction, corruption and expulsion
Is now the spark of nature striving to reclaim what once was lost
Trying to cover the scars of a war not forgotten
The war where both parties, paid the cost.

In these pages, of history swept aside
I look back, and now i understand why
You and i, we could never get it together

Everything has a beginning and an end

copyright, 2005 Wink

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speachless, they say I write good stuff but that was fantasitic


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wow, tht was amazing. You should copyright that before i steal it lol
 
Posts: 2079 | Location: Manchester UK | Registered: 24 June 2005Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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ok its copyrighted. thanks! some of my other stuff is not on this level...ill prolly post some more when i start revising the rough drafts.


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damn smilies. nah its all good, if ya wanna take it, just give me credit. it took 4 years of pent up sorrow and anger to write it. i guess it wants the credit more than i do :P


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and how exactly do you go about copywriting something....



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I've got more wit, a better kiss, a hotter touch, a better fuck,
Than any boy girl you'll ever meet, sweety you had me.
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Right now he's probably slow dancing with a bleach blonde tramp,
and she's probably getting frisky.
Right now, he's probably buying her some
fruity little drink cause she can't shoot whiskey...
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beats me. i thought it was magic :P


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m8, your gona have to pm me and tell me how to get it copyrighted so people dont knick my stuff, lol


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i actually have no idea.


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np m8


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