What do you guys do when you get stuck, I am forever getting stuck and always have trouble expanding on ideas, so any advice you can give me would help a lot, I probably have about 30 poems/songs lying around because after the first verse or two I get stuck.... this is what I am currently working on and AH HA, low and behold, I get stuck once again... s.o.a.b.


How does it feel?
Lovely I'm sure
Ashley, Kayla, Samantha
To hell with their names
As long as you can toss them around the bed
Having them as your ragdoll for the day

What was that girls name?
Who cares, **** em' and forget them the next day
It's easy to do, just you being you
How many b***hes have you had?
Did you forget to count?

i usually call up ex girlfriends and get them to bitch at me. brings all the old emotions into sharp relief.

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Originally posted by I just wish I was back home:
i usually call up ex girlfriends and get them to bitch at me. brings all the old emotions into sharp relief.

too bad my ex doesn't have a phone because he is a bum.

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Originally posted by I just wish I was back home:
i usually call up ex girlfriends and get them to bitch at me. brings all the old emotions into sharp relief.

wow, like that, lol

I duno realy. truth is I used to go on chat rooms, and can get everything there, its like a soap opera but real, its great inspration, lol. but I also get stuff for anger and shit that has heppened to me

yeah. most of my material comes from high school. the worst 5 years in my life. *shrugs*

i usually just start ryhming with a word thats gonna be in the first line, and keep rhyming until i find a word that fits, or a word that doesnt rhyme but would be much better.

i usually set a structure up, like a sentence describing what i want to get across in that verse/chorus. and then write down primary emotions or thoughts about it. try it it might work.

all of my stuff dont rhyme, it just gets the point out there, im still at skool (going collage now) 16 years of life and the last 4 have been hell for me, thats why I thought ot my self "I have all these fealings that are being put into words and songs, i have to put them down2 I never thought it would get this far, but when you see kids you age and younger drinking, smoking, taking drugs and getting laid, it fucks up the world, I aint done it, I dontdrink, take drugs etc so some of my stuff seams weird sometome, but people like it, am im happy for that