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Unbidden
The sound of a thousand piercing gazes threaten to overtake me restless I wander through the night I can hear you dreams in my heart devoid of the pain my racing thoughts somehow won't be contained confusion of a new light sinister is the goal I can't seem to grasp the meaning of it all keep this in mind as I dream tonight and therein lies a love unbidden |
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This looks a lot more like a poem (and a good poem!)than like the lyrics of a song... I can see it's very heartfelt and I'm impressed! Good job!
--------------------------------------------------------------- "All the demons in my head won't leave me, I know, I can hear them..." -A Flat- |
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Thanks...it is actually a poem...one of these days I'll take the time to figure out lyrics...there isn't a place to put poems I figured here was the most fitting.
thanks for taking the time to comment I really appreciate it. |
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you're welcome... it was a pleasure for me to read it!
--------------------------------------------------------------- "All the demons in my head won't leave me, I know, I can hear them..." -A Flat- |
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