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Unbidden

The sound of a thousand piercing gazes
threaten to overtake me
restless I wander through the night
I can hear you
dreams in my heart
devoid of the pain
my racing thoughts somehow
won't be contained
confusion of a new light
sinister is the goal
I can't seem to grasp
the meaning of it all
keep this in mind
as I dream tonight
and therein lies a love
unbidden
 
Posts: 108 | Location: Minnesota | Registered: 16 November 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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This looks a lot more like a poem (and a good poem!)than like the lyrics of a song... I can see it's very heartfelt and I'm impressed! Good job!


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"All the demons in my head won't leave me, I know,
I can hear them..." -A Flat-

 
Posts: 1790 | Location: Italy | Registered: 10 January 2007Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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Thanks...it is actually a poem...one of these days I'll take the time to figure out lyrics...there isn't a place to put poems I figured here was the most fitting.

thanks for taking the time to comment I really appreciate it.
 
Posts: 108 | Location: Minnesota | Registered: 16 November 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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you're welcome... it was a pleasure for me to read it!


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"All the demons in my head won't leave me, I know,
I can hear them..." -A Flat-

 
Posts: 1790 | Location: Italy | Registered: 10 January 2007Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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