Take one step
In front of the other
This is it
Why do I bother?
What I’ve took on
It seems to be stronger

Want to give up
Tired of this Feelin’
Want to give up
To others concealin’
If I give up
Other lives I’d be stealin’

What is left?
Am I still a good brother
Who gives a shit?
My mind’s so cluttered
If I was gone
Would it even matter?

Want to give up
Tired of this Feelin’
Want to give up
To others concealin’
If I give up
Other lives I’d be stealin’

I want to run away
But not on foot
If they understood the pain
Would they rip out the root?

If I give up
Is it really a sin?
If I give up
I let this thing win
If I gave up
Other lives I’d be stealin’

Whoa! That's really heavy stuff bro. Several lines really hit hard. I love it. But always know that you're not alone.

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Originally posted by B-Ri:
Whoa! That's really heavy stuff bro. Several lines really hit hard. I love it. But always know that you're not alone.

Thanks bro, and thanks for the last few words, it helps and same to ya.

amazing job
jason.
i feel this song.

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i feel this song.

Thanks so much steve, that's a pretty cool thing to say.

I agree with everything Brian and Steve said. It is a very heavy song, and very good. I really like it Jason.

I Really like this as part of a song i think more could be added as it is a little short for a song no disrespect meant i think its very heartfelt and is a very meaningful start keep up the good work

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Originally posted by PlayingTheHandImDealt:
I Really like this as part of a song i think more could be added as it is a little short for a song no disrespect meant i think its very heartfelt and is a very meaningful start keep up the good work

It's actually about a 3 1/2 minutes long when I sing it and thanks E!

I guess you don't have a Myspace music page do you, Jason? But it would be awesome to be able to listen to you play and sing your songs, though. I know we'd all enjoy it.

oh thats cool i didnt realize it was 3 1/2 mins guess it just looks short when it written out so on that note good song man

I don't understand, even written out, how this song is short.

I dunno bro i guess its just me i didnt mean any disrespect i think those are some great lyrics not trying to piss anyone off

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Originally posted by PlayingTheHandImDealt:
I dunno bro i guess its just me i didnt mean any disrespect i think those are some great lyrics not trying to piss anyone off

No bro, it's all good and thanks!

fuck.

thats really all i can say. i feel it. i live it.


i understand.


cmon, get it right..... make it right..... its alright.


love you bro. NEVER give up.