I thought I was like anyone
just trying to find something
But even with all I have done
I am still here with nothing
I could ask why a million more times
but I know now there'll be no answer
All this failing has taught me the meaning
of living and dying forever

*Chorus*
And now, I am thinking more
that my life's been like a bridge
where I have crawled back and forth
from hope to hopelessness
And even when I fall off the edge
I just cannot seem to drown
and I always end up right back here
So, I might as well just stand in the middle
and just burn it all down

I see now that they all were false
the eyes that smiled "come on in"
It was a game that I had lost
before it even began
But I used to buy that fucking lie
the chances of more brand new days
But it's just growing old and turning cold
if you're living and dying this way

*Repeat Chorus*

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Brian, another good job. :P

^ i agree i like the song alot

Well, thank you so much Milla and flingchow. I really appreciate that.

Amazing job, Brian. I really love the chorus. It's perfect.

Thank you so much E. I always appreciate it.

The chorus is amazing..wow..nice job

damn man you have such a talent

Thank you so much Candice and H. I really appreciate the nice comments. =)

This is one of my favorites, bro. Great job.

Thank you so much Kyle.

Okay Brian, now THIS is my favorite!! You just get better and better...INCREDIBLE!!!!

Well, thank you so much for the big compliment Jason.

In fact, a big thanks again to all that commented on this one. I'm surprised it did so well. I'm very fortunate and thankful that people still comment on my stuff.

Hey man, I love the symbolism you've got going here, but I've got to say, you're meter is off. It's too irregular for me to see putting to a tune, well, not without some serious compression and expansion.

Thanks for the comment Hellsvenom. I also appreciate your constructive criticism.