She never says a word
but that sweet smile of hers
tells me she wants me

She will not refuse me
though, she knows I'm using
her, she doesn't mind

And she lets me take her
her body, I savor
oh, she is my savior

She's always on my mind
but she's not hard to find
when I need release

She fully understands
the demons in a man
hell, she leads them on

She is such a faker
an evil heartbreaker
and I am the payer

Though, sometimes, I hate her
and in rage, I stain her
she still smiles and stays here

'Cause she is my savior
and she is my slayer
but it's just on paper

Dude
amazing job!
i like it alot

Thanks Steve, I really appreciate it.

Brian, you are the man. This song is absolutely awesome.


I want to make a Seether-esque harder song with it, haha.

Thank you so much E. I really appreciate it.

And yeah, if you ever wanted to put a tune to this, that would be great. And the fact that you 'kinda' compared this song to something Seether-esque...that's a hell of a compliment! =)

hell yeah, really like this one brian. and can definitely hear the same thing E mentioned going with this song

Thanks so much H. I really appreciate it.

These lyrics actually have a weird story behind them. A guy came walking in the store awhile back to buy a bottle of wine. He already had a sack with him, so I assumed he had been walking places. He dropped the sack and a Hustler fell out. I didn't say anything because he was embarrased enough as it was. He paid for his wine and left quickly. And awhile later, I got this scenario in my head. A disturbed, lonely man has a porno magazine and he's completely obsessed with one girl in it. He loves her because she always gets him off, but hates her because she's not real and because he could never really have a girl that looks like her. I wouldn't write it in a mocking judgemental way because in my late teens and early 20's I had an unhealthy porn habit. Haha. Seriously. But I got over it somewhat. But anyway, I knew I could write the song in either two ways, vulgar and somewhat humorous, or dark and subtle. I tried dark and subtle.

So basically, this song about mental illness, porn, and jacking off. Haha. I hope that doesn't lessen anyone's opinion about it that liked it.

^wow. i actually love it even more now knowing the back story.

awesome song man

So E, are you gonna make a song out of this or what?

So, I was fucking around playing some Seether shit and I came up with 3 riffs that completely tied together in verse/chorus/bridge formats. So, I played it with this song, and I absolutely loved it.


So, needless to say, I have made music for the song, and have the melody for the words, and this song is pretty much done, at least for my version of it.

I don't know when I'll be able to record it though. Hopefully next month I will be able to get what Harrison has to record with, and I can record all sorts of shit.

But in the meantime, I still love this song, so I'll definitely remember how to play it, haha.

^Wow...just wow. That is so awesome. I would be so honored if you record it E, and put it up somewhere. You can't imagine what a huge thrill that would be for me. Thank you, E. =)

Yeah, I really really like it. And it's extremely Seetherish, but I really didn't rip anything off from any song, so it should be pretty cool.


And I'll record it as soon as I can.

Nice E, can't wait to hear it

I love this as well especially hearing the story behind it!

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Originally posted by Σ·Rðçk:
Yeah, I really really like it. And it's extremely Seetherish, but I really didn't rip anything off from any song, so it should be pretty cool.


And I'll record it as soon as I can.

That sounds so awesome. I can't wait to hear it. Again... thank you E. =)

And thank you so much J. =)

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