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Yesterday, I was smiling
and yesterday, I was trying
to be what you want me to be
And I was giving all my heart
to just somehow play the part
so, you would think better of me
But now, although, I still smile
inside, my heart will soon cry

*Chorus*
'Cause how quickly I can fall
faster than anyone
And I can't even crawl
with all the damage done
And though, I gave my all
it's still not enough for you or anyone
It takes me so long to climb up
but how quickly I just fall

And now, the rain is pouring
I'm hurt but you're ignoring
the mess and agony I'm in
'Cause the lie that I was living
it did not make a difference
you just see the nothing I've been
and the nothing that I am
and will be until the end

*Repeat Chorus*

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I really, really like this one. But I would suggest you take out the last 2 lines. I think "you just see the nothing I am" is the perfect ending for it.
 
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Brian
great work with this one and by the way what are you some kind of writing machine, i thought i wrote alot. keep it up


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Thanks Tiff and STAINDNY. I really appreciate it.

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I love this one Brian and yea some kind of writing machine!!!


"Sometimes the weak become the STRONG"
 
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Thank you Jason. I really appreciate it.
 
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i like this brian , i have not been around for a while so gonna go check your others out now , good job
 
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jon
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hey brian, good job! i like this one.
 
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okay i know this post s old but its my favoroitest
song of yours


i know someday you'll have a beautiful life, i know you'll be a star
in somebody else's sky, but why
why, why can't it be, why can't it be mine?
 
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Dang Steve...you are just TOO nice. Thanks a bunch. I REALLY appreciate it.


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