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Head down
Trying hard to concentrate
On nothing at all
Oh, please, my God

*Chorus*
This life and love
This pain and hate
Please, get away from me
Please, just let me be

Head down
I'm just too empty to cry
'Cause I've had my fill
This never heals

*Repeat Chorus*

Head down
All that I want is to sleep
And not wake again
'Cause I have been...

Looking straight ahead
Looking back at my past
I have spun all around
All I find is what I've found
Like pain's all that's allowed
Let the next be the last sound
Let me really just put my head down

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Posts: 2271 | Location: OK | Registered: 03 August 2005Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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quote:
Originally posted by Brian.:


Looking straight ahead
Looking back at my past
I have spun all around
All I find is what I've found



fucking stellar! like how its real simple. flows well. and then the complex ending. LOVE the lines i quoted.


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FACES THAT I'VE SEE TURN OLD AND GRAY....... I'VE LOST TOO MANY FRIENDS ALONG THE WAY.......
MEMORIES I NEVER THOUGHT WOULD FADE....... THEY FADE AND BLOW AWAY



 
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E'c' is right, this one is probably one of your shorter more simple ones but damn if it isn't one of my favorites of yours I've ever read. Great job, I really really like this one. I actually wasn't expecting that at the end.


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Hey, thanks E & E. I really appreciate you guys. =) I wasn't sure if this was good or not and at the time, I didn't even care. I've been trying to write for over a week and could never finish anything. So, I was just relieved to finish something. Writer's block is a bitch. =(
 
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