hi everyone, figured I'd share this song to you guys and please leave a comment, I dont care if its a nasty comment, I just wanna know how you guys think, aight? ok....

WE'LL NEVER BE
All our friends say we should be
But you love her as much as I love you
No matter what you stay together
So I'll sit here alone and let it go
Coz I know

We'll never be
I'll never understand
We'll never be
You'll never take my hand
Though you're here with me
I'll leave it all at that
Coz we'll never be
We cant be more than that

I try to leave, forget this feeling inside
But the memories, they haunt me day and night
Though I have taken it all in
Its still your name that burns
Right beneath my skin
But I know

We'll never be
I'll never understand
We'll never be
You'll never take my hand
Though you're here with me
I'll leave it all at that
Coz we'll never be
We cant be more than that

very nicely written and heartfelt...unrequited love...I know the feeling...Pam

Very nice. I know how it feels.

i love it. its well-written. 2 enthusiastic thumbs up!

*sighs* A++++++++++++++++++++++
Very heartfelt and sincere.Now I want to hear it sung!! Keep up the good work!

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Originally posted by pamschwetz:
very nicely written and heartfelt...unrequited love...I know the feeling...Pam

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I know... its really hard to get over someone... man.... I doubt I'll ever get ovet that guy a hundred percent.....<sigh>

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Originally posted by I love Ashlee's band!:
Very nice. I know how it feels.

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really?.. nice to know you 'feel' my song.... (^v^)

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Originally posted by Mahal kita!:
*sighs* A++++++++++++++++++++++
Very heartfelt and sincere.Now I want to hear it sung!! Keep up the good work!

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wish I could put my songs online... thing is, I havent even done one demo yet and I gotta work more on my voice... but thanx a bunch for liking it... (^v^)

i like it alot! i know how you feel and i think alot of people can relate. i like how you put your emotions intto words. but the chorus does need a little work. not to be harsh

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Originally posted by rYaN's_#1_FaN:
i like it alot! i know how you feel and i think alot of people can relate. i like how you put your emotions intto words. but the chorus does need a little work. not to be harsh

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its all good... believe me.. it needs ALOT more work <hehe>, but as for now, thats what I can do.. wish I could work on it more though but school'd distracting me! <hehe>.... Thanx! (^v^)