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I randomly had this melody pop into my head and came in were some lyrics. I made it the chorus. I finished it up...took only 10 minutes to write. I think it's catchy. What do you think?

"Have You Ever"

Verse-You're walkin' on this sandy beach,
Lookin' out following me. Yeahhh.
I give you this advice, you say to ignore my lies. My lies. Yeahh.
I tell you it's not fair but you listen to her anyway.

Bridge-Can't I put a word in?
Can't I put my thoughts in? Oh no.
Can't I tell you my feelings?
Can't I say she's stealin'? Oh no.

Chorus-Have you ever took time to go and find her?
Go my own way, see the splashin' ocean view.
Have you ever saw the light to go up and talk to her?
I'll be on my own time, callin' up on the line.
But don't wait! Don't ever let her go away.
The distance will fade.

Verse-Now we're runnin' into this dark lair,
You're starin' out at me. Yeahhh.
I'm gonna give you one more chance, don't forget my last glance. Yeahh.
I told you all her disguises but you put a wall against me anyway.

Bridge-Can't I put a word in?
Can't I put my thoughts in? Oh no.
Can't I tell you my feelings?
Can't I say she's stealing? Oh no.

Chorus-Have you ever took time to go and find her?
Go my own way, see the splashin' ocean view.
Have you ever saw the light to go up and talk to her?
I'll be on my own time, callin' up on the line.
But don't wait! Don't ever let her go away.
The distance will fade.

Verse-The waves are hitting fast, the rocks are killing me down low. Ohhh.
Why don't you close the gap, make it your last breath. Ohhh.

Bridge-Can't I put a word in?
Can't I put my thoughts in? Oh no.
Can't I tell you my feelings?
Can't I say she's stealing? Oh no.

Chorus-Have you ever took time to go and find her?
Go my own way, see the splashin' ocean view.
Have you ever saw the light to go up and talk to her?
I'll be on my own time, callin' up on the line.
But don't wait! Don't ever let her go away.
The distance will fade. Fade fade fade.
The relationship will bleed. So run away, way, way. Oh yeahhhh!


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