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ok i wrote a chorus thing and i lyke suck at writing songs so im like really proud that i even made this rhyme u might not like it but i think its decent lol ok
what do i do when- the hand that lead me through the dark the one that loved me from the start the one who can wipe my tears the only voice that scares my fears has turned and walked away? please tell me if it sux becuz i dont think its good but im just happy i wrote sumthin lol |
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I think thats really good!
 && i'll grow pale without you..<3 |
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thanx ive never written songs b4 and that was like the first thing i wrote by myself and yeah thanx lol
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whoa! i rele think that's quite good! i'm being completely and totally honest with you, that is excellent!
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I was being totally honest as well!
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ok thanx
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aww thats good!
---------------------------------------------------------------- 5.21.05, 11.12.05, 12.23.05, 7.01.06, 3.13.08, 5.11.08 =) |
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oooo! me likey!
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very nice chorus...I would like to hear the rest of it when you are done...keep writing! Pam
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