I should really get my own thread with all my songs. Haha. Here's another song I just finished typing up. It's pretty easy to figure out what it's about if you read the lyrics. It shows how fake some celebrities can be and some of them need help. Tell me what you think.

And the other song I added is called "In Heaven". It's about how young kids look up to bad influences which makes them take their own life. And no, the young girl and young boy stories I totally made up. Haha. It's realistic though.

"Treacherous Society"

Verse-Gloomy days don't ever fade,
Steer the way for catastrophe.
Played the field like she just walked in,
Always lying in her skin.
This is the day when she gives a fake grin.

Bridge-Feeling like she's number one.
But really, she's hiding that moan.

Chorus-Everywhere from the inside,
Knows from the right side.
She's falling.
Anyone from the outside,
Shows from the left side.
She's bawling.
From this burden that's called treacherous society.

Verse-Money lays in the wallet,
Geered toward surgery.
Gets that perfect smile like she was born yesterday.
Holds a crowd of paparazzi,
When she belongs in therapy.

[Bridge and then Chorus]

Verse-Oh, how can she go?
She flows without her beau.
She doesn't care.
Lower and lower she goes.

[Bridge and then Chorus]

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"In Heaven"

Verse-The young girl stared up at the picture,
Took it with her all the time.
Admired the woman and her figure,
Tried to be like her in every way.
She ate very little until she died on a Sunday.
That's when her parents knew what struck her fate.

Bridge-Alone she goes,
darkness falls.
Body downhill.
Soon a funeral.

Chorus-The world is full of admirers,
And no one knows what's going on.
They pick the wrong role models,
And look where they end up.
In heaven.

Verse-The young boy paired up the pills,
Took one dose every weekend.
Admired the baseball player and his skills.
Tried to be like him in every way.
He was afriad that his teammates would find out.
Only then was it too late and he was already dead.

Bridge-Alone he goes,
darkness falls.
Body downhill.
Soon a funeral.

[chorus]

Verse-What could it be that told them to follow the wrong path?
It was the choice that they chose painted in red.
A color that symbolizes death.
Mother and father realize their regret.
No warning to keep them from escape.

Bridge-Alone they go,
darkness falls.
Bodies downhill.
Soon a funeral.

[chorus]

awww! that was amazing! your very good at writing! keep up the great work!

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Originally posted by Life Is A Dream x82:
awww! that was amazing! your very good at writing! keep up the great work!

Aw thanks! Check out the other song I just added, "In Heaven". I think that one is better.

i really have nothing to add on those, they're great too =)

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Originally posted by Lindsay23:

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Originally posted by Life Is A Dream x82:
awww! that was amazing! your very good at writing! keep up the great work!

Aw thanks! Check out the other song I just added, "In Heaven". I think that one is better.

aww that one's really good too! lol idk which one i like better so ill say i like them both the same! =] but deffinately keep writing..your amazing!!! =]

Thanks guys! That means a lot. Writing keeps me unbored and lets my feelings out on some issues. It helps.

yeah i understand, sometimes i'm in a writing mood so i just write, write, write! And when i'm done, i just burn my poems or songs, haha, i'm weird.

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Originally posted by Lindsay23:
Thanks guys! That means a lot. Writing keeps me unbored and lets my feelings out on some issues. It helps.

same here! im gonna have to post some of mine on here eventually..lol we should start an official..Share Your Lyrics Thread..haha omg thatd be an awesome thread..we totally should!

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Originally posted by Life Is A Dream x82:

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Originally posted by Lindsay23:
Thanks guys! That means a lot. Writing keeps me unbored and lets my feelings out on some issues. It helps.

same here! im gonna have to post some of mine on here eventually..lol we should start an official..Share Your Lyrics Thread..haha omg thatd be an awesome thread..we totally should!

That's a good idea. I'm not going to start it because I have enough threads with my name on it in here. Haha. You should post your lyrics. I wanna read them.

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Originally posted by Haïfa *Aka Ryan's French Fan*:
yeah i understand, sometimes i'm in a writing mood so i just write, write, write! And when i'm done, i just burn my poems or songs, haha, i'm weird.

Aww...Then that work is like a waste of time. Next time don't burn them but keep them...who knows if it'll help later on..mmmmmmm.