verse 1:
your so in love with her
I cant take the pain no more
as my heart breaks into a million pieces on the floor
you dont know how much i care for you
Anything for you i'd do
I'm sick and tired of waiting
hoping the love for her is fading
but i know that

Chorus*
your tangled up in her
im tangled up in you
and yet theres so much i wish i could do
as i sit here and try not to cry
i hope that this eternal love for you will die

Verse 2:
I'm sitting here waiting for
those words that i
wanna hear
I love you so
please do not go
I'm sick and tired of waiting
hoping the love for her is fading
but i know that

Chorus [x2]
your tangle up in her
im tangled up in you
and yet theres so much i wish i could do
As i sit here and try not to cry
I hope that this eternal love for you will die
For you will die

your so in love with her
im so in love with you
what can i do......

thats my second song

thats goodDDDD~~~!!!

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thanx!

I would change this, "I'm sick and tired of waiting hoping the love for her is fading" to "I'm sick and tired of waiting hoping your love for her is fading." I think it shows what you mean better.

yeh i would change that, but its very good song, nice work there.

thank you 4 ur suggestions i will change it

i like it alot!! but i agree with mandy

i like it a lot....something i can totally relate to. girl, u r good! does bring back memories. i think u have succeeded in relating with ur listeners (or readers) and i think thats really impt cos i feel for the song and sympathize with u. is it from experience?

wow thanx soo much that was a really really nice compliment and yeah i guess you can say that it was from an expierence that i had but thanx so much!

i like it...its pretty good.... if you like ry and ashlee then check out jon ricci www.jonricci.com