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_{So im quite sure many remember my story Thug Life. It was written script and i wanted to see if i could re-write it in novel form. You dont have to read it if you do no wish to obviously. It will have the same concept as the first one but written differently with different character. For those who are reading it, I hope you enjoy this as much as im going to enjoy re-writing it.
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Chapter 1
The Begining
Oliva

I looked out the window as the car drove out of the cemetary. My heart was not sad. I thought about all of the pain he had put me through. Eric was a real fucked up ass nigga. He never came around or took care of his daughter Amani. At first i didnt mind, but that all changed when I found out why. He had beed sleeping with my sister Kanida. I didnt find it attractive at all. And it resulted in a very solem outcome. Everyone had already pulled out of the cemetary. His mother was the sadest one she leaned on my shoulder during the entire time we were there. Of only she knew this occasion was all because of me and if it werent for my actions he would still be here creating problems and continuing on with his infedelity. I didnt matter to me any more. I was alomost home when i got a phone call from BiBi, informing me to meet her at the spot. I got dropped off at home and called the babysitter Jewl and asked her to let Amani stay the night. She said it would be fine and i dressed for the occasion. Stright leg jeans, black heeled boots, a white pin stripped shirt and a black vest over top of that. I walked out the house and hooped in to my coustomized color pink truck and headed over to what we call the spot in anticipation of the next coustomer.
"The fuck is this nigga at?" I questioned BiBi, who was also getting impatient with our late money.
"Man I dont fucking know but he need to hurry up. Shi Sanaa is at home with her grandomther and that lady be getting impatient." She said,
"Man. I gotta pay that Jewl chick more money for every hour im late so, he really needs to move his ass or someone's dick will be in the dirt. Literally." I said cracking my knuckles. I loked at my hand and notcied a ring that Eric had given me. I took it off and handed it to Bibi.
"Pawn it off." I said and walked away. But knowing her she would keep it. And put it where I'll find it later. She always does. Finally the coustomer pulled up and hopped out of the car.
"Man what the fuck took you so long!?" I aksed.
"Man look i had to pick up my daughter." He said.
"What the fuck ever." I said pulling out my gun and placing it to his head.
"Man please dont -" He started abd got cut off by a little girl running out to us.
"Stop it. Leave my daddy alone!." She yelled. I put my gun away and he loked at me with a twisted face. He hugged his daughter and walked her back to the car.
"Here is your money." He said throwing it on the ground.
"Get the fuck outta here be on time next time." BiBi said.
"There wont be one." He siad and got in his car and drove away. Bibi looked at me and shook her head.
"How was i supposed to know his daughter was in the car?" I aksed.
"It doesnt matter. Next time you need to fucking think." She said and walked inside the building.
I rolled my eyes at BiBi's comment and got into my truck. It didnt matter to me. I had many more runners and deffinately more coustomers. I was the boss and i was running the show. I drove to the corner store first where i ran in to Daynah.
"Arent you supposed to be at the spot?" I wispered to her.
"I wad on my way there after i got my self a doughnut." She said picking up a deliecious lokking douhnut with apples and cinnamon filling. I ignored my stomach and went to the back to get a slurpee.
"So anything new?" She asked me with a smile on her face.
"Yeah doll, we lost a runner." I said walking up behind her and smaking her ass.
"Ohh." She said. "Thats okay. We got plenty more. Which one was it?" She asked.
"The one who's always late." I said.
"Oh damn he is sexy." She said.
"Yeah whatever." I said getting jealous.
"Aww i still love you though." She said. I looked at the clerks face and he looked astonished that we were doing this infront of him. Like he aint seen two bisexual bitches before.
"Hurry up and get your car so we can head back to the spot." I said and walked out to my car without paying for the slurpee.
"Um. Thats $3.75." He said to my back.
"Sorry." Daynah said walking out the store with out paying just as i did.
"Race you there." Daynah said and i realized she didnt drive her car today. She had rode her motorcycle. I watched as she bent over to put her doughnut in the secrect compartment and hop on. I started my car just as she had started her motorcycle. I backed out and pulled to the stop loght. I waited for her to put her hlemt on and get to the light.
"You ready!? Set!!! Go!!!" She yelled just as the light turned green. I put my foot on the pedal and headed to the sopt. She was infront of me by a little bit having the advantage to go around cars was pushing her farther infront of me. I turned down a alley way quickly and sped up. I was going about 100mp. I slowed down so that i could turn the corner and once i did I sped up again. When i got to the streets Daynah was behind me. But not for long. She dogged every car that was in her way and pulled up next to me. I smiled at her as i drove my car with the adrinaline of a race car driver. I washaving so much fun. The spot was right there infront of us and she sped up. I jsut let her go ahead and win. I could have beaten her like i had done maytimes before but i let her go ahead anyway.
"Yes!!! I beat you!!!!!" She yelled as i got out of my ca and walked over to her.
"Uhh huh." I said kissing her lips.
"Is that my prize?" She questioned wit her eyebrow raised.
"Maybe." I said with a grin on my face. We walked inside the building and there sat on the couch was BiBi and Areyah, watching some dumb ass movie. I turned it off.
"So what are we going to do about that one lost coustomer?" I asked sipping my slurpee.
"Man we would still have his late ass if you werent such a fucking hot head!" BiBi yelled.
"Calm the hell down Brittney damn!" Daynah yelled.
"Look it's aight let me do the talking. I'll go over to his house and well he'll be back aight. In the mean time ya'll hoes take your asses home. BiBi. Find a way to calm your ass down aight?" Reyah said.
"Aight." Everyone said. I turned around about to walk out the door and in walked Zamari.
"Meeting's over the hell you been?" I aksed her.
"My bad my little cousin had this court thing to go to so i had to take her and stay. She said.
"Yeah well, lets go." I said dragging her out of the spot. I went to my car and watched her pull off. Daynah walked over to my car and smiled.
"Your place or mine?" She aksed me.
"Im not really in the mood tonight babe. Maybe tomorrow okay?" I said, hoping she would comply She nodded her head and went back the her motorcycle. I felt bad not inviting her over, but i wanted to be alone tonight.

Chapter 1-The Begining-pg1
Chapter 2-New Day-pg2
Chapter 3-Argumentative-pg3
Chapter 4-Messy-pg4
Chapter 4-pt.2-Everything that shimmers-pg4
Chapter 5-Finder's Keepers-pg5
Chapter 6-The Plan-pg7
Chapter 7-Faliure-pg9
Chapter 8-The Truth-pg12
Chapter 9-Fatal Conditions-Pg12
Chapter 10-She's Back-pg14
Chapter 11-And It's Real-pg17}

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