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Title: Passion
Sunrise:11/28/07
Sunset:Unknown
A Beau Incorporated Production
Author:Lonnisha Holmes


Chapter 1
part 2
part 3
part 4
part 5
Chapter 2
part 1
part 2
part 3
part 4
part 5
part 6
part 7
Chapter 3
part 1
part 2
part 3
part 4
Chapter 4
part 1
part 2
part 3
part 4
part 5
part 6
part 7
part 8
Chapter 5
part 1


Chapter o01 (part one)

Passion


"Flying first class...up in the sky...poppin champagne...livin the life..." I lip synched as I prepared for a night out with my long term boyfriend since the sixth grade. He was taking me out to his favorite restaurant, Olive Garden. It was going to be our first night alone together with no disturbances or distractions in almost two weeks. Knowledge had been so busy working on his album making final touch ups and adding songs and taking them away. We never had so much as ten minutes together except for tonight. Tonight we were going to celebrate our anniversary that we always went out for. My man never forgot our special day and he always had a surprise for me and I was hoping this surprise was even better than last year's. Just the thought of seeing Knowledge made me smile and blush. He was really my man.
"Girl, turn that damn music down!" Donna yelled at me as she burst into my bedroom. She was my wicked stepmother and my worst enemy since I laid eyes on her when we were finally introduced by my father. She was very much the stepmother from hell with twin daughters and a son to complete the package. This was like an everyday ritual for the two of us.
I stopped dancing in front of my full length mirror and paused Fergie's new single Glamorous to make a fool of Donna. "Don't you know how to knock Donna?"
Donna's upper lip twisted and her nose flared as if fire would escape her nose at any moment, "Don't get smart with me lil' girl. I'm the grown person in this house and you're the child. Either respect me or suffer the consequences." She kept her arms folded over her large breast and gave me a daring glare that made me smirk. It made Donna look constipated.
"Donna you can't do anything to me. You are trying so hard to be my momma but you're trying too hard Mizz Deville." I smiled referring my stepmother to the villain Curella Deville. I had finished a candy curl then pressed play on my video IPOD and let the sweet sounds of Glamorous continue to blast out of my speakers. I already knew she was going to do next; it happened every time we got into a quarrel. She would run and tell my father like a little girl like I would get into some kind of big trouble or any trouble at all. The woman was absolutely pitiful.
"You will learn to respect me you lil' heifer!" Donna tried to scream over my blasting music but I shrugged and continued to get ready for my night out.
Donna and I got into more wars than the Bush family ever initiated and she ran to my daddy's aid every time the alarm sounded, not knowing that he was going to always take my side no matter what the issue. I was his daughter, his baby girl, the first woman in his life next to my mother and his mother; there was no way the woman would win him over. Since I was fourteen years old Donna and I have been at each other’s throats for my daddy's love and attention and most of the time I choked her out.
I shrugged my shoulders at her grinned because she was competing with my all the way live music. When Donna left my room I continued to get ready for my special night out. I sprayed myself down in Tommy Girl perfume then wiped Honeysuckle Bath & Bodyworks lotion behind my ears. The combination of the two fragrances drove Knowledge crazy and made him want me even more. He was a pure gentleman but whenever he was around me and we were alone his hands would roam all over my body taking a two to three hour adventure into wonderland. His touch was gentle and his caresses were lip quivering. I don't know why but I think Knowledge loved the female anatomy. The way we felt, the way we smelled, the way we looked, everything, especially my body. Before I could make it to my closet to retrieve my blue stilettos my Razor cell phone began singing Ciara's former hit Promise. It was my baby Knowledge.
"Yes husband, what's up baby?" I sang continuing my walk to my walk in closet.
"Nothin much wifey. Are you ready to go?"
I blushed; I just loved hearing him call me wifey, "Yeah. Are you outside in the car?
"Now baby you know me better than that. My baby gets escorted to her car by her man not by Casper." Knowledge chuckled but was serious.
"Ooo baby stop you're making me blush." My cheek muscles were hurting because I was grinning so hard but it was a good thing. "Yeah I'll be ready after I slide these heels on."
"Good 'cause I'll be there in like five minutes so be ready."
I rose from my canopy bed, "You just better make sure your ass get here nigga." I warned playfully. When I opened my door Donna was standing there with her small hands on her narrow hips. "I love you too baby bye." I said after Knowledge told me those three fulfilling words that I needed to hear anytime we were breaking our connection. "What now Donna?"
Donna had this smirk on her face that was devilishly ugly. I clenched my fist hard because I wanted to punch her face in so bad but knew I couldn't. If I did I would be put on serious punishment and wouldn't be able to go on this date with Knowledge and not know when our next night together alone would be. Besides, if I handled Donna and put her on her back like I really wanted to, she would be in the hospital. Whenever Donna wore that smirk on her face it sometimes meant that she had won my daddy over and that my ass was in some deep trouble.
"Yo daddy said he wants to talk to you lil girl. I told you I'm the grown person around here."
"What ever." I replied pushing past her to see my father in his office. The short walk to daddy's office didn't give me enough time to think of a back up alibi to anything Donna had said about me. Daddy could either be with me or against me but the chances were that slim. I walked into his office with a big smile on my face. He was working on some papers on his desk and when he looked up he had a straight face then quickly winked at me and it made me relax. When his wife walked in he let his playful eyes turn into serious ones but my I kept that smile on my face. "Yes daddy?"
"Donna has told me that you have been disrespecting her. Is that true?" I don't even know why he asked because he knew it was as true as OJ killing that white broad.
"What kind of question is that Eric? You know it's true."
My head shook from left to right, "No daddy. Donna burst into my room without knocking and I simply asked her 'Don't you know how to knock'. That's it."
Daddy raised his eyebrow suspiciously, "That's it?"
"No that's not it Eric and you know it." Donna answered for me. "That girl needs her ass whipped and I would gladly do it-"
"No need for the foul language D. I don't whip my child and neither will you."
I could feel my stepmother's eyes burning a hole in my back and it made me feel so warm on the inside that my daddy was seeing things my way once again. I knew she would be sabotaging me in some kind of way in the near future just because of this night. It always happened that way. Last time I won my daddy's favor Donna had some how convinced daddy to get me to clean the entire yard. I didn't forget that day and all her bad doings were going to add up in my book sooner than later. It was only a matter of time and I was prepared for the next stunt she was going to pull sometime soon.
"And look at what she has on Eric! The girl is dressed like a hooker for some piss tail boy!" Donna proclaimed pointing at my blue, Apple Bottom booty Capri’s and back out, strap round the neck blue and white Apple Bottom top. Yeah it was over the top for Olive Garden but if I knew Knowledge, we were going to go to the club to get our dance on and then some relaxing setting where we could enjoy each other's company and talk.
I rolled my neck and threw my hand on my hip, "Knowledge is not some piss tail boy Donna! And dressed like a hooker? Have you seen your daughter Hazel lately with more piss tail boys than I can count on my finger and more hoe clothes than a Salvation army?" There was no way she was going to disrespect me or my man when he couldn't back himself up. Donna really wanted to wake up in the hospital tomorrow morning.
"You lil-"
"Donna!" Daddy yelled over us. He was usually calm and collective but right now he was angry. At whom I really couldn't tell. "You're supposed to be grown and you're arguing with my daughter. You disrespect her again and we'll need to talk. I trust my daughter and the young man that she is seeing so don't stoop my daughter to a hoe's level. Understand?"
Before Donna could answer the doorbell had rung throughout the two story home letting everyone know that Knowledge was finally here. I was relieved because the tension in the room was choking me and Donna's anger and embarrassment was damn near killing me.
"I said do you understand?"
"Yes Eric."
"That's Knowledge daddy. May I leave now?"
"Sure. I'll walk you to the door honey."
Daddy walked me downstairs to the front door with his arm entwined with mine as if he were walking me down the aisle. He had magically changed back to his usual, calm, collective self then opened the door. He smiled at Knowledge and they exchanged handshakes and a few laughs. That's what I loved most about both of the men in my life, they got along just fine and both loved me with every ounce of love in their hearts. Ever since the day they met I knew they would be the only men I ever needed in my life and after fours years it was still true. Losing either one of them would leave me broken with a part of me missing.
"You already know her curfew so don't have her back no later than a minute." Daddy warned half serious and half playfully.
Knowledge chuckled, "Now you know me Mr. E. I wouldn't have that any other way, my baby gots to get her beauty sleep."
"Alright then have a goodnight." I gave daddy a kiss on the cheek and a hug.



That's the end of the first part of chp. one......leave ya comments and you can get more.


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A place where this unique love is forbidden because of other people's actions,
The area in the middle where it doesn't matter who you want to be with
Just because you know this other half is your it,
It's the haven where people will just leave you the hell alone,
The residence known as
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Pictures too big but it's good tho.


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(still reading)
this is long..wow.
what ever happened to Ryters Blok.
yall had some good ass stories.


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Yeah i know it's long but it's well worth the read ladies!

keep hittin me up! I got more in store!


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Imagine a world where two people can't be accepted as one,
A place where this unique love is forbidden because of other people's actions,
The area in the middle where it doesn't matter who you want to be with
Just because you know this other half is your it,
It's the haven where people will just leave you the hell alone,
The residence known as
The Grey Zone



Coming To A Board Near You!

Image Editor


My F@M!LY

bR@ndy**mah sis
d3sSy**mah sis
V3nA**mah sistah


ღPassion™ღ→→A Must Read By Yours Truly
The Grey Zone



 
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And since there's so much i'll split the chapters in half..... Wink


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Imagine a world where two people can't be accepted as one,
A place where this unique love is forbidden because of other people's actions,
The area in the middle where it doesn't matter who you want to be with
Just because you know this other half is your it,
It's the haven where people will just leave you the hell alone,
The residence known as
The Grey Zone



Coming To A Board Near You!

Image Editor


My F@M!LY

bR@ndy**mah sis
d3sSy**mah sis
V3nA**mah sistah


ღPassion™ღ→→A Must Read By Yours Truly
The Grey Zone



 
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Siggy too long. (Finally catches breathe) whew! all these pictures.


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damn.
this is good.
almost made me cry my damn self.
you should most definitly keep going.
probably one of the best stories ive read in a long time.
keep doing your thing hun.
amazing add.
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Thanx Brandy! I'll be updating soon when I feel i've gotten enough love.....


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Imagine a world where two people can't be accepted as one,
A place where this unique love is forbidden because of other people's actions,
The area in the middle where it doesn't matter who you want to be with
Just because you know this other half is your it,
It's the haven where people will just leave you the hell alone,
The residence known as
The Grey Zone



Coming To A Board Near You!

Image Editor


My F@M!LY

bR@ndy**mah sis
d3sSy**mah sis
V3nA**mah sistah


ღPassion™ღ→→A Must Read By Yours Truly
The Grey Zone



 
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ups!!!!!!


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Imagine a world where two people can't be accepted as one,
A place where this unique love is forbidden because of other people's actions,
The area in the middle where it doesn't matter who you want to be with
Just because you know this other half is your it,
It's the haven where people will just leave you the hell alone,
The residence known as
The Grey Zone



Coming To A Board Near You!

Image Editor


My F@M!LY

bR@ndy**mah sis
d3sSy**mah sis
V3nA**mah sistah


ღPassion™ღ→→A Must Read By Yours Truly
The Grey Zone



 
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lol.
your welcome hun.
people are probably still reading.
i swear it took me like 30 min. to read all that..or maybe i just read slow i dont know.lol.
anyways.
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yeah.......i'ma break it down in the next chapter


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Imagine a world where two people can't be accepted as one,
A place where this unique love is forbidden because of other people's actions,
The area in the middle where it doesn't matter who you want to be with
Just because you know this other half is your it,
It's the haven where people will just leave you the hell alone,
The residence known as
The Grey Zone



Coming To A Board Near You!

Image Editor


My F@M!LY

bR@ndy**mah sis
d3sSy**mah sis
V3nA**mah sistah


ღPassion™ღ→→A Must Read By Yours Truly
The Grey Zone



 
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i've shortened the chapter ladies...i'll give u the rest in like 3 more parts and when i get more love.


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Imagine a world where two people can't be accepted as one,
A place where this unique love is forbidden because of other people's actions,
The area in the middle where it doesn't matter who you want to be with
Just because you know this other half is your it,
It's the haven where people will just leave you the hell alone,
The residence known as
The Grey Zone



Coming To A Board Near You!

Image Editor


My F@M!LY

bR@ndy**mah sis
d3sSy**mah sis
V3nA**mah sistah


ღPassion™ღ→→A Must Read By Yours Truly
The Grey Zone



 
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upssszzzz


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Imagine a world where two people can't be accepted as one,
A place where this unique love is forbidden because of other people's actions,
The area in the middle where it doesn't matter who you want to be with
Just because you know this other half is your it,
It's the haven where people will just leave you the hell alone,
The residence known as
The Grey Zone



Coming To A Board Near You!

Image Editor


My F@M!LY

bR@ndy**mah sis
d3sSy**mah sis
V3nA**mah sistah


ღPassion™ღ→→A Must Read By Yours Truly
The Grey Zone



 
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uuppppzzzzz


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Imagine a world where two people can't be accepted as one,
A place where this unique love is forbidden because of other people's actions,
The area in the middle where it doesn't matter who you want to be with
Just because you know this other half is your it,
It's the haven where people will just leave you the hell alone,
The residence known as
The Grey Zone



Coming To A Board Near You!

Image Editor


My F@M!LY

bR@ndy**mah sis
d3sSy**mah sis
V3nA**mah sistah


ღPassion™ღ→→A Must Read By Yours Truly
The Grey Zone



 
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