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-X-My LiFe-x- part 1


How long? How long must this shit go on? Surely it has to end soon...It’s been 17 long ass years and things are yet to look up for me. I guess...This is just...my life.

Cast:
Y/n-17yrs old
Camille-mom
Antonio a.k.a Toni-moms no good ass boyfriend
Spectacular-18
Pleasure-19
Blue-18
slick-19
Trey-19
Dru-18

a/n: others will be added during the story


Here goes...

I was upstairs rummaging through my moms closet looking for her Gucci sweater and I heard the front door slam. I jumped up fast and made for my room when I heard yelling so I stood at the top of the stairs and watched quietly.
Camille-I’m pose to be your woman Toni! How da hell you gon do this to me?!
Toni-I’m getting real tired of your mouth kola
Camille-my name is Camille! And yo lying, cheating no good ass better get use to it!
Toni brushed her off and emptied his pockets on the table, pulling out his cell keys and 3 thick rolls of cash my eyes got wide.
Camille-you listenin-
His cell started ring and they both looked at it. Camille snatched it before Toni could and answered
Camille-who da hell is dis?!..His women...what?!..(Laughs)...bitch please you aint shit to him...(Gives Toni a dirty look) yeah well I got something fo his ass don’t Chu worry(hangs up)
She threw the phone to him and he caught it. Obviously his ass got caught cheating.again.i was bout to go upstairs but jus as Toni turned his back Camille grabbed the ashtray off the stand and threw it hitting him in the back of the head and Toni stumbled forward
Toni-what da fuck?!(Touches his head)
Camille-you dirty toni.i smell you from here. Where were you last night huh?! You sure as hell wasn’t with me! So who’s da bitch dis ti-
Toni rushed towards Camille grabbing her throat and slammed her against the wall
Toni-don’t you eva!In yo life try some shit like that again!You hear me?!(Lifting her off the floor)
She spat in his face making him even more mad.i watched in horror as he swung hitting her hard in the jaw and then in her side repeatedly.
Y/n-(gasps)
her lifeless body slid to the floor.i didn’t even notice Toni had heard me and was coming towards the stairs.i snapped out of it and tried to run but i was to late he grabbed my ankle and made me trip.
Toni-going somewhere? Nah I dont think so
Y/n-get you’re fucking hands off me!
I started kicking tryna get out of his grasp
Toni-I see you got your mommas mouth. Well ima have to fix that.
He pulled me up by my hair and slammed my hard into bathroom door.i fell down in pain he stood over me unzipping his pants,pulling out his erect penis.I tried to crawl away but he grabbed my head and pushed me onto it
Toni-you better get on your job unless you wanna end up like yo hoe ass momma(balls up his fist)
I pictured my mom laying there and began to lazily suck this mans dick with no effort at all till I felt this sharp sting on the side of my face.Hot tears ran down my cheeks
Toni-suck dem fucking tears up!
He raised his hand again and I began to suck as though my life depended on it...

BUMP DIS SHIT YO!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL WHAT YA’LL THINK??? holla back
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16th BiRTHDAY CUMiiN ...>> JANUARY 8th 2009
 
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Sorry about da wait but I’m back...

Next thing I know I’m being shook so hard I thought we were having a damn earthquake.
F/v-Y/n...Y/n!
Y/n-huh what... (Slightly dazed) get off!
F/v: wake yo lazy ass up then! Shit!
I opened my eyes and sat up and slowly checked out my surroundings touched the side of my face it didn’t sting. I felt my back it wasn’t hurting...man! What kind of bullshit ass dream was that?! I looked up and Camille’s mouth was moving but no words were coming out.
Y/n-wha-what?
Camille-I said wake up.ive gotta go (walks out)
When I saw Camille’s face there were no bruises, not even a scratch. Weird I thought, it had all seemed so real.i got up had a quick shower, dressed and went downstairs.camilles was putting on her jacket.
Y/n-where you going at this time?
Camille-this time? Why don’t Chu take a look at the clock?
I looked at it hanging on the kitchen wall.oh shit! Its damn near 11 at night and there’s me thinking its early morning.
Camille-thats right, you been sleeping nearly all day. Anyway I will be back in the morning, Toni is upstairs.
Y/n-wait (grabbing my jacket) I’m coming with you
Thinking about that dream I had no way I was staying alone with that man. Its actually been a whole 3 weeks since he last put his hands on me...yep,ever since I can remember he’s been coming into my room at nights touching me in places he really shouldnt.camille doesn’t know.I just learnt to put up with it so much so its almost normal to me.camille was a stripper. Not the best job in the world but it paid the bills and put food on the table. Tonight was re-opening night and the club was expecting some VIP special guests or something. We pulled up outside of Oceana and went in a back entrance. There were girls walking around titties everywhere asses hanging out.camille disappeared into a room and reappeared 15minutes later looking like some hoochi mama wearing a black thong with a diamante belt dangling over. A black bra with the nipple cut out of it and sum silver high heels, high enough to break my back!
man-(slaps Camille’s ass) you’re on in 5
Camille-yeah... (Fixing her hair) y/n?
Y/n-huh(busy staring at her)
Camille- I want you to stay back here and-
Y/n-I know mom I know
?-a das your daughter?
Camille-yeah.ill be back out soon alright.
she disappeared through the curtain an onto the stage.i heard howling above the music and men whistling like the dogs they are and I rolled my eyes.i mean what’s so exciting about a half naked ass women sliding down a shiny pole? Okay silly question. As I sat there my boredom got the better of me and I decided to take a sneaky peek through the curtain. My mouth fell open.i had never seen Camille dance before and there she was all up on that pole legs spread wide popping that shit on a hand stand like nobodies business...all of a sudden the room went dark and grind on me started playing the spot lights came on and then I heard a familiar voice…

Bump it up please…..

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YIM: lyriczluvzhim

16th BiRTHDAY CUMiiN ...>> JANUARY 8th 2009
 
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Girl: Am I pretty
Boy: No
Girl: Do you like me
Boy: No
Girl: If i walked away right now would you cry
Boy: No
Girl: (starts to walk away)
Boy: Your not pretty your beautiful, i don't like you i love you , and if you walked away right now i wouldn't cry i would die

~C/O 2009 Babii~ $up3R $t@R $3ni0R
 
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thankz fo da bumpz ya'll keep em coming lol and dont worry ima be adding real soon..
 
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Girl: Am I pretty
Boy: No
Girl: Do you like me
Boy: No
Girl: If i walked away right now would you cry
Boy: No
Girl: (starts to walk away)
Boy: Your not pretty your beautiful, i don't like you i love you , and if you walked away right now i wouldn't cry i would die

~C/O 2009 Babii~ $up3R $t@R $3ni0R
 
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LEAD, FOLLOW, OR GET OUT THE WAY!!!!!!
IF OPPORTUNITY DOESN'T KNOCK BUILD A DOOR!!!!!
CAST CALL INFO:
NAME: JAZZALYN
AGE: 16 OR WATEVA U NEED
MAN: PLIES, SPEC, PLESSURE, MARIO, TREY SONGZ
LOOK LIKE: GABRIELLE UNION OR

 
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bumps 800000000000
like it
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lovin the story so far!!!
BUMPS!!


My hubby, Spectacular is so damn fine!!!!!....dont make no sense to be that sexy!! (lol)
 
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hey my name is quana can i b in yo story and can i be wit pleasure or spec or anyone thats avaliable please and bumps to the fullest
 
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