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Hey everyone whats good? My names Marie and i decided to write another story. I have another story on this board but ever since they changed everything my story dissapeared! it was called * Love is blind * It was soooo good im so mad i cant get back to it and finish it !!! But its okay, i have a new story i wanna share, so enjoy !



Dear Diary, this is my first entry. Im 17 years old.I'm a caramel complexion. About 5 foot 3. I can't express my feelings to anyone, you're the only one i can trust. So heres how my life is, I have a 15 year old brother Named Zay( He's the one in the middle ), and my Mom, Vanessa. Zay, my mom and my friends call me pookie for some reason, or Diamond, my middle name, when their being serious about something * laffs silently * We live with our mom, but she's never home. Shes always out on buisness trips. She and my dad got a divorce when i was about 4 years old. My mom married a man named Will. Hes a fucking bastard ! I HATE HIM ! Ever since i was 5 or 6, he's been abusing me. Ever since i was 13, he's been raping me. He touches me, hits me, cussses me out, anything you can think of. I havent toled my mom. She loves Will with all her heart. She would never believe me if i toled her. The only one who knows what he does to me is my brother Zay. I love him to death. He's a great little brother. I hate how my mom is never around. I miss her so much. If she was around, she would know. I have 3 bestfriends, Georgina, Shanice And Tenisha. I love them all so much. They don't know what Will does to me either. But enoguh about them, as for me, i'm an outcast. Always have been. Since my mom is never around she never taught me how to look "pretty". We don't have that mother daughter connection. My clothes are so torn, I have long hair, but don't know how to take care of it, so its always in bubbles, and all naughty and dirty. I don't care about how i dress. I live in Miami Florida. This new highschool opened up, I start going there tomorrow. Thank goodness Georgina Tenisha and Shanice are coming with me. Hardly anyone likes me. I've never had a real boyfriend, let alone my first kiss, and....



* Y/N P/O/V * Just then while I was writing, I was inturrupted by the sounds of banging, loud banging on my door. I knew it wasn't my mom, she isin't home and she would never bang on my door like that. It wasn't Zay, he was out with one of his little girlfriends, that could only leave one person, Will...



Will- * yelling and banging the door loudly * Y/N OPEN THIS FUCKING DOOR !!! *bangs* Y/N !!!!!



*Y/N P/O/V * FUCK ! WHAT AM I GONNA DO! SHIT !



Y/N DIDN'T KNOW WHAT TO DO. SHE SHUT HER DIARY AND LOCKED IT QUICKLY WITH THE KEY. SHE PANICKED AND THROUGH THE DIARY ON HER BED. SHE RAN TO HER CLOSET AND OPENED IT. SHE SAT ON THE FLOOR AND HID INSIDE, LEAVING THE DOOR OPEN JUST A CRACK, SO SHE COULD SEE WHAT WAS GOING ON. WILL LITERALLY BUST THE DOOR OPEN. HE WALKED INSIDE. Y/N COULD SEE HIM, ALL PISSED, WITH HIS HANDS ALL BALLED UP, WALKING AND LOOKING AROUND FOR HER. HE LOOKED ON HER BED AND SAW THE DIARY. HE WALKED TOWARD IT AND PICKED IT UP, LOOKING AT IT, TRYING TO OPEN IT



y/n- * thinking * SHIT ! MY DIARY !



will-* laughing evily and talking as if y/n was infront of him * You lil' bitch, you're lucky i can't put my hands on you right now. Watch when i catch you, ohhh just watch *laughs again* *looks around, looks at the closet, begins walking to it *



y/n- * thinking* As i saw him look at the closet, it was like he could see me. Like he was looking right through me. I could feel sweat dripping off of my forehead. I began biting my bottom lip. I was biting it so hard I could taste blood. As i saw him walk closer to my closet i began to shut my eyes so tightly. I softly began to cry, "No, please not tonight, God please don't let him rape me tonight, please, god please !" I thought. Everything got quiet. All i could hear was my heart beat, beating faster and faster, "thump thump, thump thump" it went. I looked down and i could literally see my heart popping out of my chest. I put my hand over my heart and held it tightly....* END *



WILL WALKED TO THE CLOSET. Y/N TRIED TO MOVE BACK, DEPEER INTO THE CLOSET. WILL STOPPED. Y/N FELT HER HEART STOP AS WELL. WILL LAUGHED TO HIMSELF. HE DROPPED THE DIARY INFRONT OF THE CLOSET DOOR AND WALKED OUT AS IF NOTHING HAPPENED. HE SLAMED HER DOOR SHUT SO HARD. AS SOON AS HE LEFT Y/N LET OUT A BIG BREATH. SHE BEGAN TO SILENTLY CRY. SHE HELD HER FACE IN HER HANDS AND CRIED SILENTLY. "WHY ME ? GOD WHY ME !" SHE THOUGHT AS SHE CRIED



y/n-I was still so shook from what just happened. I couldn't move. I stayed right there in that same spot. I cried and cried and cried, until the point where i fell alseep. But then, hours later, i felt someones hands over my body, i woke up but didn't open my eyes becuase i wase scared it might have Will...



male voice-Y/N...Y/N wake up..


y/n-* pretending to sleep *


m/v-Y/N its Zay ! Wake up


y/n-*opens one eye * Z-Zay ?!


zay-yeah its me, whats going on? why you in here? * thinks * AW HELL NAW DON'T TELL ME WILL PUT HIS FUCKIN' HANDS ON YOU !!


y/n- * grabs his arm and pulls him down * *whispering loudly* SHHHHHH!!!! HE MIGHT HERE YOU !!!


zay-my bad, * sits down beside her * Y/N you can't let him keep doing this to you ! why won't you tell mom ?



y/n-NO ! I CANT ! she would never believe me ! you know how she is ! she would just cuss me out ! i wouldn't get 2 words in you know that !



zay-*sighs* yeah but, i`m the only one that knows. And your so lucky that i promised you i wouldn`t tell anyone. If it was me i would have called the police already



y/n-* still whispering loudly * NO! NO POLICE ! no one can know ! no one can EVER know ! okay??



zay-*sighs and leans his head back, and lets his long braides fall over his chest * Alright, i`m only doing this cuz i love you aight? But i swear, if i see him put another hand on you again, imma smash his face in...



y/n-*Looks at him as if saying "Zay don't"


zay-OKAY ! DAMN !* sucks teeth *



y/n-but he didn't touch me tonight, i've been hiding in her for hours



zay-good. as long as you aight.



y/n-yeah i`m fine, you know for 15 you don't act like it



zay- I know



y/n- but enough about me, how was your date with that girl



zay-* puts his head down and shakes it * it was terrible



y/n-What? Why?



zay-* sucks teeth * Maaaaannn, she aint finna give it up !



y/n-*raises one eye brow*



zay-*bursts out laughing* Man i`m playin ! But foreal though a man gets lonely..


y/n-Boy you only 15 ! what you know about sex ?!!



zay- *kool aid smile * A LOT more than you !



y/n-*laughs and hits him * Boy shut up !



Y/N HITS HIM PLAY FULLY AND AND HE HITS HER PLAYFULLY BACK. SHE GRABS HIS HAIR AND HE STARTS SCREAMING LIKE A GIRL. HE STARTS TO TIKKLE Y/N AND SHE BURSTS OUT LAUGHING. BUT THEY DIDN'T REALIZE HOW LOUD THEY WERE. BOTH OF THEM INSTANTLY STOPPED LAUGHING WHEN THEY HEARD THE HEAVY FOOTSTEPS OF WILL. THEY KNEW IT WAS HIM. NO ONE MADE HEAVY, LOUD FOOTSTEPS LIKE HE DID. THEY BOTH FROZE. ZAY AND Y/N BOTH LOOKED AT EACH OTHER. ZAY COULD SEE THE FRIGHT IN HER EYES. HE PUT HIS HAND ON HER HAND, AND LOOKED AT HER AS IF TO SAY "DONT WORRY, I GOT THIS". ZAY GOT UP AND WAS ABOUT TO LEAVE THE CLOSET



y/n-* whispering loudly * ZAY NOOOO !! * holding onto his sweater *


zay-y/n shut the closet door...



y/n-*getting teary eyed * Zay nooo!..please!..


zay-*ignores her and shuts the closet door*



AFTER THAT EVERYTHING WENT DARK. Y/N BEGAN TO SILENTLY CRY. SHE DIDNT HEAR ANYTHING. Y/N FELT HER DIARY BESIDE HER. SHE PICKED IT UP AND HELD IT SO TIGHTLY TO HER CHEST. THEN, SHE HEARD WILL TALK..



will-Where the fuck is yo sister Zay ?



zay- * standing with his hands in his pockets, not looking at him * Pssh iono, she ain't in here



will-*walking toward him balling up his fists * Don't lie to me boy...



zay-* looking at him like * You better back the fuck up off of me * * Mean muggin him * Man i ain't lying.



Will-Why in you here then?



Zay-Cuz i came in here looking for her too. She prolly out with one of her girls



Will-When when she comes home tell her to come report to me, i got something for her ass..



Zay-*low* Whateva nigga



Will-* in Zay's face * Watchu say?



Zay-* looking directly in his face* Nothing



* Y/N P/O/V/; I COULDN'T SEE A THING. ZAY IS SO SWEET TO ME. I LOVE HIM TO DEATH. HES A TRUE BROTHER. I CANT BELIEVE HE'S ACTUALLY DOING THIS FOR ME ! WHATS WRONG WITH HIM ? ITS LIKE HES THE OLDER BROTHER. I GUESS HE LEARNS TO BE TOUGH FROM ALL THAT B.E.T. AND HIS FRIENDS. MAN WHATS GOING ON ! I WANNA SEE ! PLEASE GOD DONT LET WILL HURT HIM ! WHATS GOING ON !!??



will-*backs up out of zay's face* Better *walks to the door, looks at Zay, and leaves*



Zay- *opens up the closet door * * looks down at y/n * you're safe


y/n-*just looks up at him *


zay-Y/N?


y/n-* Thinking* I got up slowly, i stood infront of him. I grabbed him and pulled him to me. I hugged him so tightly. He knew i appreciated what he just did for me. I kissed his cheeks over and over *



Zay-Hey hey ! Stop ! * laughing lightly * Your welcome ! Stop !


y/n-*hits his arm * Don't ever try and defend me like that again ! Don't put your self in danger !


Zay-* sucks teeth * Man, Will cant do shit to me



y/n-*rolls her eyes* Oh whatever, just, be careful okay ?


Zay-* pops his collar * Of course. But aye, imma go to bed aight?


y/n-okay

Zay-You gone be aight?



y/n-i'll be fine


zay-okay, just do me a favour, lock your door tonight


y/n-I will, and he won't bother me tonight, Mom is supposed to come home early in the morning



Zay-aight, but imma keep coming in her from time to time to check up on you aight?



y/n-alright * hugs him * Thank you Zay


zay * hugs her tightly * Anytime *kisses her cheek * *walks to the door and looks at her * Goodnight pookie * smiles*



y/n-* smiles * good night



ZAY WEN'T TO HIS ROOM. Y/N TOOK A QUICK, AND I MEAN QUICK SHOWER, AND WENT TO BED. JUST LIKE ZAY SAID, HE CAME IN FROM TIME TO TIME TO CHECK UP ON Y/N. SHE WAS OKAY. THEIR MOM CAME IN ABOUT 4:00 IN THE MORNING. Y/N COULD HEAR WILL AND HER MOM ( VANESSA ) MAKING LOVE IN THEIR ROOM. Y/N WAS SO DISGUSTED. BUT WENT BACK TO SLEEP. AT ABOUT 8:00 IN THE MORNING, Y/N PHONE BEGAN TO RING OFF THE HOOK



y/n-*tired voice* Hello?


female voice-Trick get yo ass up ! We gotta go to school!


y/n-*sucks teeth* MAN Gerogina ! I forgot ! We start at that new highschool! I don't wanna go !


Georgina-Well me and Tenisha And shanice gon be there with you so don't worry aight?



y/n-*groans*

Georgina- Oh stop ! now come on get dressed!


y/n-As if i gotanything good to wear


Georgina-Girl i told you to let me take you shopping

y/n-*sigh*


Georgina-yeah, yeah i know how you feel about that. Well imma be at your place shortly to pick you up okay ?



y/n-aight girl


Goergina-Hurry up trick !



y/n-*laffs* You crazy *hangs up *



Y/N GOT UP AND SPREAD HER BED. SHE BRUSHED HER TEETH. SHE PUT ON A PAIR OF WORN OUT JEANS WITH A FEW HOLES IN THEM. SHE PUT ON A BAGGY WHITE SHIRT AND WORE WHITE SHOES THAT LOOKED LIKE THEY NEEDED TO BE CLEANED. SHE PUT HER HAIR IN A PONY TAIL, GRABBED HER BACK PACK AND LEFT HER ROOM. TO GET DOWNSTAIRES SHE HAD TO WALK PASSED HER MOM AND WILL'S ROOM



y/n-*thinking*I looked in Jay's room and saw him sleeping. I smiled and shut his door. I slowly crept past my mom and Wills room. I peeked my head inside and saw Will, sleeping with no top on, snoaring loudly. I saw my mom laying on top of him, sleeping peacefully. She was so beautiful, what was she doing with this dog! I shook my head and ran downstaires. I ate some frosted flakes and waited for Georgina to come pick me up. Soon enough she came. I locked my house door and got inside the car. We picked up Tenisha and Shanice. When we were all in the car we were making jokes and having a great time. But when i looked at what they all had on, they looked so beautful, their clothes were sexy, and in style. Unlike me, i was like the ugly duckling of the group. they all stood out. If only they knew why I dressed like this and act the way i do. If only they knew about the things i been through, if only i could tell them..one day...one day...



Tenisha-*snapping in y/n face* Y/N ! Hello ! Earth to y/n ?!



y/n-HUH?! *comes out of her deep thoughts*


Shanice-We're here girl! get out the car !



Y/N P/O/V* I GOT OUT THE CAR AND LOOKED AT THE SCHOOL. IT WAS SO HUGE. WAY BETTER THAN THE LAST SCHOOL WE WENT TO. WE GOT INSIDE THE SCHOOL. SHANICE FOUND THE MAIN OFFICE. WHEN WE WENT INSIDE I SAW SOME CUTE GUYS. IT LOOKED LIKE THEY WERE TRYING TO GET INSIDE THE SCHOOL TOO. THEY LOOKED AT MY FRIENDS. THEY DIDNT LOOK AT ME. WHEN THEY DID, THEY MADE UP THERI FACES AND TURNED THEIR HEADS. THEY LOKED AT MY FRIENDS UP AND DOWN, SMILING. I FELT SO BAD ABOUT MYSELF. I COULDNT HELP BUT THINK I WAS UGLY. I KNEW THATS WHAT THEY THOUGHT



Shanice-*speaking to the lady at the desk* Uhm hi me and my friends registered for this school and we need our schedules

Lady-alright, i`ll need all of your first and last names and ill send you to your first period classes



THEY ALL GAVE THEIR NAMES. WHILE SHANICE GAVE HER NAME, A BOY WAS LOOKING AT HER UP AND DOWN, SHE LOOKED AT HIM. HE WINKED AT HER. SHE SMILED AND WAVED. THE LADY GAVE US ALL OUR SCHEDULES. SOON BEFORE I KNEW IT, WE WERE ALL BEING SPLIT UP



Tenisha-So what lunch do we all have ?


* They all look at each others schedules*

All-WE HAVE THE SAME LUNCH!


y/n-So we'll meet up by the huge fountain outside right?

All-Yeah



*Y/N P/O/V*; SO TENISHA, SHANICE AND GEORGINA ALL WENT TO THEIR FIRST PERIOD CLASSES. I HAD SCIENCE. THE LADY SHOWED ME TO MY CLASS. AS I GOT CLOSER AND CLOSER TO MY CLASS, MY HEART WAS BEATING FASTER AND FASTER. I FELT AS IF I WAS SWEATING. THE LADY KNOCKED ON THE DOOR. WHEN I LOOKED INSIDE THE CLASS ROOM I SW A FEMALE TEACHER. SHE WAS TEACHING. SHE LOOKED AT ME AND SMILED. SHE KNEW I WAS NERVOUS



lady-This is your stop *leaves*


Teacher-*grabs her arm gently* Hi dear, come on in, i was waiting for you


y/n-*silent*

Teacher-Students, we have a new addition to our sience class. I'll let you introduce yourslef when all of my students have come. Doesnt make sense you introuduce yourslef twice huh?



y/n-*puts on a fake smile *



Y/N THINKING*; OMG! THIS IS SO EMBARRASING! I COULD TELL ON THE LOOKS OF EVERYONES FACE THEY DIDNT LIKE ME. THE GIRLS GAVE ME DIRTY LOOKS. THE GUYSS, PSSH, THEY DIDNT EVEN LOOK AT ME. BUT THEN, I LOOKED TO THE LEFT OF ME, I SAW 4 GUYS WALK INTO THE CLASS ROOM. ONE WAS TALL, HE WAS THE LOUDEST OF THEM ALL. HE HAD DREADS. HE LOOKED CRAZY. THE NEXT GUY WAS KIND OF SHORT, AND KEPT SAYING "BABY BLUE, WOAH !!" WHATEVER THAT MEANT. AND THEN THERE WAS ANOTHER ONE, TALL, BROWN SKIN. PRETTY CUTE ACTUALLY . AND HE WAS JUST HUMMING AND SINGING. BUT THE LAST ONE THAT CAUGHT MY ATTENTION WAS A LIGHTSKINNED GUY. HE HAD A FRESH BRAID UP. HIS HAIR WAS IN SINGLE BRIADES. HE HAD SHADES ON AND HAD SOME FRESH KICKS ON. HE WAS TOO CUTE. BUT I KNEW HE WOULDN NEVER BE INTRESTED IN ME...



teacher-Well my name is Mrs.Mitchell. Whats yours?


y/n-Y/n...


Mrs.Mitchell-Well hello y/n *smiling* EVERYONE !!


Class-Looks up*


Mrs. M-This is y/n. Shes new



The 4 boys-*look at y/n* *look at eacher and start laughin*


Mrs.M-Stop lauhging!! *serious hard voice*


boys-ma bad...


Mrs.M-Well y/n i know your new to this school, Spectacular !


Boy-*looks up from his seat* Yeah..


Mrs.m-Do me a favour and show y/n aroudn the school okay?


Boy-*rolls his eyes*

Mrs.M-Spectacular !

Boy-Aight aight ! Damn ! *sucks teeth*



2nd boy-*laffs* have fun


Boy-* slaps him upside his head * mayne shut the hell up !

2nd boy-Aight damn!



*Y/n Thinking* SPECTACULAR..THATS HIS NAME? HES SO CUTE! BUT THE LOOKS HES GIVING ME , I KNOW HE DOESNT WANNA SHOW ME AROUND. FUCK! I JUST WANNA BURRY A HOLE AND DIE IN IT ! GOD ! MRS MITCHELL INTRODUCED US. HE ROLLED HIS EYES. HE DIDNT LOOK LIKE HE WAS PAYING MUCH ATTENTION TO ME. I SAW SOME GIRL KEEP LOOKING UP AT HIM *



girl-Specky baby !


spectacular-Yeah Shawna *smiling*

girl-*signals him over *


spec-*comes over* yeah?

girl-You better not be watching that girl

spec-*looks over at y/n* who? That Duck?

girl-laffs* Yeah, the ugly duckling. you better not try nothing with her !


spec-DAMN shawna! Relax aight? aint nobody watchin her


shawna-okay..

Spec-*leans down and kiss her cheek* I gotchu

shawna-*blushing* you better



Y/N P/O/V* I SAW THAT SPECTACULAR GUY AND THAT GIRL FLIRTING. HE CAME OVER TO ME AND IN A LOW VOICE SAID TO ME "LETS GO". HE WAS WALKING SO FAST AHEAD OF ME, LIKE HE WASNT TRYING TO BE SEEN WITH ME. HE WOULD KEEP LOOKING OVER HIS SHOULDER TO SEE IF I WAS STILL BEHIND HIM. EVERY FEW MINUTES HE WOULD STOP AND WAIT FOR ME TO CATCH UP. HE WOULD SHOW ME THE GYM, OFFICES, WASHROOM, WORK OUT ROOMS, DANCE ROOMS, ETC. WE WOULD BEGIN TO WALK AGAIN. HE WOULD WALK AHEAD OF ME AGAIN. BUT I HAD TO ASK HIM SOMETHING...



y/n-that girl your girlfriend?


spec-*looks over his shoulder then looks ahead of him* Naw, she just likes me. And what why you wanna know? Aint none of yo damn buisness...duck *starts chuckling*



y/n-*puts her head down*



*Y/N P/O/V/* WE BEGAN TO WALK BACK TO THE CLASS ROOM. I WALKED IN WITH A FEW TEARS IN MY EYES BUT QUICKLY WHIPED THEM AWAY. MRS MITCHELL ASKED IF I WAS OKAY. I PUT ON A FAKE SMILE AND ANSWERED "YES". ...*



Mrs.Mitchell-Spectacular please show miss y/n a seat


spec-*sucks his teeth*



Y/N P/O/V* SPECTACULAR POINTED TO A SEAT. "HERE, LET ME " HE SAID AS HE SURPRISINGLYM PULLED THE CHAIR OUT FOR ME. EVERYONE IN THE CLASS WAS LOOKING. EVERYTHING WAS QUIET. I HAD A BAD FEELING SOMETHING BAD WAS ABOUT TO HAPPEN. I TURNED AROUND AND LOOKED AROUND THE ROOM ONLY WITH MY EYES. I WAS SO NERVOUS. I LOOKED OVER AT THE GIRL SPEC WAS TALKING TO EARLIER. I LOOKED UP AT SPEC. HE HAD A DEVILISH LOOK ON HIS FACE. I KNEW SOMETHING WAS ABOUT TO HAPPEN. EVERYOE IN THE CLASS WAS SMILING AS IF THEY ALL KNEW WHAT HE WAS ABOUT TO DO. I IGNORED IT. I JUST THOUGHT TO MYSELF" HEY, THEIR JUST TRYNA GET TO ME, ITS ALL GOOD" I WAS ABOUT TO SIT DOWN WHEN, YES, IT HAPPENED, SPECTACULAR PULLED MY SEAAT FROM UNDERNEATH ME. I FELL DOWN TO THE FROUND SO HARD. THE WHOLE CLASS BEGAN TO LAUGH..



mrs mitchell -SPECTACULAR!!!!! *angry look on her face*


spec-*laughing his ass off so hard* MY BAD !!


boy-*daps spec* nice one

spec-*laffing uncontrollably*


y/n-*still on the ground, about to cry*



Y/N THINKING * I BADLY HURT MY HIP. IT FELT LIKE IT POPED OUT OR SOMETHING. A TEAR FELL DOWN MY FACE. I COULDNT BELEIVE WHAT HE JUST DID. I TIRED TO GET UP BUT TRIPPED ON MY SHOE LACE AND ENDED UP RIGHT BACK ON THE FLOOR. THE WHOLE CLASS BEGAN TO LAUGH AGAIN.



mrs mitchell- HELP HER UP RIGHT NOW OR FIND YOUR ASS IN THE PRINCIPALS OFFICE !!!!


spec-*holding his stomach laughing * AIGHT!! DANG MISS! WHY YOU GOTTA CUSS AT ME ?!

mrs m-NOW!!!! *hitting her ruler on the desk*



Y/N P.O.V.; SPEC WAS ABOUT TO HELP ME UP. HE PICKED MY ARM UP, BUT THE N THE BELL RANG. HE DROPPED ME RIGHT WERE I WAS, LOOKED AT ME AND LAFFED. HE GRABBED HIS BINDER AND WALKED OUT THE ROOM. THAT GIRL RAN UP TO HIM AND GRABBED HIS ARM. THEY BOTH WALKED BACK IN THE CLASS ROOM AND LOOKED AT ME, THEY LAUGHED AND WALKED OUT. SAME WITH THOSE OTHER 3 BOYS. EVERYONE LEFT THE CLASS. I SAT THERE BY MYSELF, ON THE GROUND. I PUT MY FACE IN MY HANDS AND CRIED. BUT THEN, SPEC CAME BACK INTO THE ROOM, HE FORGOT HIS CELL PHONE. HE GOT IT. HE WAS ABOUT TO WALK OUT THE DOOR WHEN HE LOOKED AT ME..HE HAD THIS LOOK ON HIS FACE. A LOOK AS IF HE WANTED TO SAY HE WAS SORRY. I COULDNT BELIEVE THAT LOOK HE GAVE ME. I COULDNT HELP BUT WONDER WHAT IT WAS HE WAS THINKING...



*Spec thinking*-.......



WELL EVERYONE THATS THE BEGINNING OF MY STORY..PLEASE BUMP IT IF YOU LIKE !!!! I`LL WRITE MORE A.S.A.P !! FIND OUT WHAT IT IS SPEC IS THINKING !! BUMP IT UPPPPPPP!!!

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hi um if u have any spots open can i be in this story bumpies


Name:Adrianna~Nicole aka Ni Ni or Nikki

Wanna Play:Best Friend, Sister

i am country ghetto and i dont take shit from nobody

i get niggas like i get pennies alot sometimes some of dem be dimes but dats fa me ta chooes i dont play dat he ma man shit if he yo man u can have him i dont like leftovers i love to fight, i dont like being a back burner bitch so i will leave yo ass, i am real freaky and will Boy crazy wont cheat unless i am tryna make you jealous

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AIGHT ADRIANNA YOU FINNA BE IN IT AIGHT NO WORRIES



RECAP!!
Y/N P.O.V.; SPEC WAS ABOUT TO HELP ME UP. HE PICKED MY ARM UP, BUT THE N THE BELL RANG. HE DROPPED ME RIGHT WERE I WAS, LOOKED AT ME AND LAFFED. HE GRABBED HIS BINDER AND WALKED OUT THE ROOM. THAT GIRL RAN UP TO HIM AND GRABBED HIS ARM. THEY BOTH WALKED BACK IN THE CLASS ROOM AND LOOKED AT ME, THEY LAUGHED AND WALKED OUT. SAME WITH THOSE OTHER 3 BOYS. EVERYONE LEFT THE CLASS. I SAT THERE BY MYSELF, ON THE GROUND. I PUT MY FACE IN MY HANDS AND CRIED. BUT THEN, SPEC CAME BACK INTO THE ROOM, HE FORGOT HIS CELL PHONE. HE GOT IT. HE WAS ABOUT TO WALK OUT THE DOOR WHEN HE LOOKED AT ME..HE HAD THIS LOOK ON HIS FACE. A LOOK AS IF HE WANTED TO SAY HE WAS SORRY. I COULDNT BELIEVE THAT LOOK HE GAVE ME. I COULDNT HELP BUT WONDER WHAT IT WAS HE WAS THINKING...*



*Spec thinking*-.....


*END RECAP*




Spec-*thinking* DAMN, THIS GIRL IS LOOKS LIKE A HOT MESS, AND DAMN SHE NEED A COMB, OR A BRUSH AT LEAST. EVEN THOUGH SHE UGLY, ION THINK I SHOULDA DONE WHAT I DID, HOWCOME I WAS LAUGHING LIKE 2 SECONDS AGO, BUT NOW I FEEL LIKE SHIT FO DOIN IT. FUCK DIS ION CARE WHAT I DID THAT DUCK DESERVES IT ION CARE...OR..DO I? *snaps back to reality*



*SPEC THEN WALKED OVER TO WHERE Y/N WAS STILL SITTING. SHE HAD THE LOOK OF SADNESS AND HATE IN HER EYES*


Spec-*thinking*Even though she ugly, she got the nicest pair or light brown eyes i ever seen...



*SPEC THEN LEANED OVER HER. IT LOOKED LIKE HE WAS GOING TO HELP HER UP. BOTH SPEC AND Y/N LOCKED EYES, UNTIL...*



Shawna-Specky baby ! *looks around the classroom to see him with y/n* The fuck you doing? Come on you said you was gon' walk me to class!



Spec-*thinking* oh shit..*end thought* *Looks at y/n and begins to laugh* Ma bad i forgot ma phone in the class


Shawna-*Walks over to him and begins to pull his arm* Come on ! *Looks at y/n, mean muggs her and rolls her eyes * Ewww why you here with the duck Spec?



y/n-*puts her head down and is silent*



Spec-Ma bad baby, lets go


y/n-*thinking* Baby ?! I thought he said she wasn't his girl ?!



Shawna-* gives him a quick peck on his lips *



* SPEC AND SHAWNA WALK TO THE DOOR AND IS ABOUT TO LEAVE. Y/N COULDN'T BELIEVE WHAT JUST HAPPENED. SHE KNEW IN HER HEART HE DIDN'T WANT TO DO WHAT HE DID. ACTUALLY, EVERYTHING HE DID I SHOULD SAY *



y/n-*thinking* i know he couldn't have meant everything he did to me today. I mean i saw the look on his face and in his eyes. How could he have meant all that ! Unless he wants me to think he didn't mean it..? Or ..*sucks teeth* i'm so confused ! Spec and that Shawna girl walked to the door and was about to leave. The look she kept giving me i really didn't like. I just wanted to say something, but couldnt. I never faught a girl in my life, chances are she would have kicked my ass..what could i possibly do to her, spec would have defended her anyway. Spec turned and looked at me. I was still on the floor. Didn't move from that spot one inch. When he looked at me he instantly stopped laughing. He had this sad look on his face, i saw his lips move, as if he was saying "Sorry", but i couldnt tell. When Shawna looked at him, he instantly started laughing again.Why is he laughing? I know he doesn't mean it!



Spec-*thinking* Why am I laughing? Do I really mean it ?!



*THEY FINALLY LEAVE. MRS MITCHELL CAME BACK IN THE ROOM TO SEE Y/N IN TEARS. SHE HELPED HER OFF THE FLOOR AND WALKED HER TO HER NEXT CLASS. EVERY CORNER Y/N TURNED, SOMEONE STARTED AT HER. THEY WOULD GIVE HER CUT EYE, DIRTY LOOKS, MEAN MUG HER, AND BRUSH PAST HER IN THE HALLS, WITHOUT LOOKING BACK, TO EVEN SAY SORRY. AFTER HER SECOND PERIOD CLASS WAS OVER SHE HAD LOOKED ON HER SCHEDULE. IT SAID SHE HAD LUNCH NOW. SHE KNEW SHE AND HER GIRLS ALL HAD THE SAME LUNCH, SO Y/N WENT OUTSIDE AND WAITED FOR THEM AT THE BIG FOUNTAIN JUST LIKE THEY ALL AGREED. SOON ENOUGH, GEORGINA ( looks like this http://pandoraatl.files.wordpress.com/2007/05/beyonce2.jpg ) Tenisha ( http://www.citypaper.com/sb/80176/music_TeairraMari.jpg looks like teairra mari ) and Shanice (she looks like Ashanti)

ALL SHOW UP. THEY GREET EACH OTHER AND FIND A TABLE TO SIT AT *



Georgina- So how was everyone's day so far?

All except Y/N-Nice!


Tenisha-Y/N, whats wrong?


y/n-*leaing on the table, holding her head in one hand*


Tenisha-Y/N !


y/n-*snaps back into reality* Huh ?!


Shanice-Whats wrong?


y/n-Oh! Nothing, why?



Tenisha-You didn't answer when we all said our day was nice so far. How was yours girl?



y/n-*lying thru her teeth* Oh! uhh, it was f-fine...*looking up and down with her eyes at Tenisha*



Tenisha-*sighs and lifts one eye brow* Y/N don't lie


y/n-I`m not !



Georgina-Yeah you is! you studdar when you lie !


y/n-N-No i don`t!


Shanice-Yea you do ! You doin it right now guh!


y/n-I'm not !



Tenisha-*rolls her eyes* Look girl we ain't finna argue witchu, i'm hungry as hell and imma get cranky if i don't eat !



Georgina-Foreal!


y/n-i`m not that hungry. how about i get ya'll food.



Shanice-Thanks girl. Just get me a cheese burger


Georgina-Uhm, i`ll take a small fries


Y/n-Aight, Tenisha whatchu want?


Tenisha-Just a green salad for me


*They all look at her like WTF?*


Y/N-Salad? Why? Girl you finna go hungry!


Tenisha-*kiss teeth* Mayne i`m on a strict diet!



Georgina-Don't stay on it too long or you gon' lose all dat ass of yours!



*They All Laugh*



*Y/N GOES INTO THE SCHOOL AND GETS THE GIRLS ORDERS. SHE WASN'T ALL THAT HUNGRY SO SHE JUST GOT HERSELF A BANANA. IT TOOK ALMOST HALF AN HOUR TO GET THEIR FOOD.*



y/n-*P/O/V/* YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING! ITS BEEN ALMOST HALF AN HOUSE AND I STILL HAVENT GOT ANYTHING ON MY TRAY YET! *sucks teeth* UGGH! PEOPLE KEEP ON BUMPING INTO ME OVER AND OVER! THEY KEEP CUTTING INFRONT OF ME IN THE LINE ! THIS IS BULL. FINALLY I GOT THROUGH AND I GOT ALL THE FOOD. PEOPLE WOULD BUMP INTO ME OVER AND OVER AND EVERYHTING WOULD DROP ON THE GROUND. GOOD THINK THE WRAPPERS WERE ON THE FOOD OR I WOULD HAVE TO GO BACK AND GET MORE. I CAME BACK OUTSIDE WITH THE TRAY, AS I GOT CLOSER AND CLOSER TO THE TABLE, I SAW MY GIRLS, BUT THEY WERENT ALONE. I SAW 3, MAYBE 4 GUYS WITH THEM. MY HEART BEGAN TO BEAT FAST AND FASTER, HARDER AND HARDER. I COULD FEEL IT POPPING OUT OF MY CHEST AND SHIRT. I COULD FEEL MY FOREHEAD BEGIN TO SWEAT. ALL OF THIS, BECUASE I WAS SCARED ABOUT WHO THOSE BOYS WERE. I DIDN'T WANT TO THINK , BUT I DID, I KNEW EXACTLY WHO IT WAS, THOSE 4 BOYS IN MY HISTORY CLASS. I WANTED TO JUST TURN BACK AND WALK IN THE OTHER DIRECTION, I DID, BUT DIDN'T MAKE IT FAR. SHANICE HAD SPOTTED ME...*



Shanice- Y/N!! WHERE YOU GOING? WE'RE OVER HERE !


boys-*laughing instantly stops* Y/N?!



Tenisha-Yeah, ya'll know her?


boy 1-*chuckles* Do i...


y/n-*slowly walking to the table*



boy 2-*chuckling* What, she's a duck and she's the servant too?



Georgina-*hits his arm hard* Shut up Diamond!


Diamond-*covers his mouth and gently laughs*


Tenisha-*take the tray from y/n and touches her arm* Y/N, this is Diamond, Marcus, Spectacular And Corey



Diamond-What I say about that huh? Call me Blue!

Tenisha-*rolls her eyes* Oh whatever


Corey-And ma name is SLICK!

Marcus-And the name is PLEASURE trick!

Tenisha-*Opens her eyes wide at him* Who you calling a trick ?!


Spectacular-We the man's got a point! and ma name is Spec or Spectac!



Georgina-Same damn thing!


y/n-How did you guys meet these boys?


Tenisha-They saw us at the table while you was gone, and was tryna "get at us" *rolls her eyes*


Blue-Oh whateva! *starts singing " i know you want me" By young Buck"


Tenisha-Pssh! *turns around toward y/n*Anyways! Guys, this is y/n


boys-*roll their eyes* We met her already


Shanice-Oh really? When?



Spec-*looks down* Science class* *Looks at the boys* *They all begin to laugh*



Tenisha-Whats so funny?



Slick-*chuckling* Nothin!


Shanice-Whats so funny y/n? Why they laughing?


Y/n-*has a flashback about what happened*



Blue-Yeah y/n, what happened? * Trying to hold in his laugh*



y/n-*holding tears back**looks down* Uhm i-i gottah go !



*Y/N P/O/V* I couldn't think, i got up and dashed away from the table*



Shanice-*looking like "WTF"* Y/N WHERE ARE YOU GOING! WHATS WRONG? COME BACK !


y/n-*running into the school*



Shanice-*sits back down* *looks at everyone* Whats wrong with her?



pleasure-*looks over his shoulder* Beats me


Shanice-Imma go check on her


Slick-Naw not yet


Shanice-why?


Slick-Cuz i ain't done tryna get to know you yet *moves his eye brows up and down, looking at her*


Shanice-Negro please! *Fans her hand tryna brush him off*


Slick-*laughs*



*Y/N P/O/V*; I RAN RIGHT INTO THE SCHOOL. I TRIED TO HOLD IN MY TEARS BUT I LET THEM OUT. I RAN RIGHT INTO THE GIRLS WASHROOM AND LEANED OVER THE SINK, CRYING. AFTER A FEW MINTUES OF CRYING, I WASHED MY FACE WITH COLD WATER. I DRIED MY FACE WITH SOME TOILET PAPER. MY FACE GOT KIND OF ASHY AND I NEEDED LOTION. LIKE I CARED. I DIDN'T CARE WHAT I LOOKED LIKE ANYWAYS. I LET OUT A FEW MORE TEARS, BUT THEN I HEARD A TOILET FLUSH. I QUICKLY LOOKED OVER MY SHOULDER AND SAW THAT SHAWNA GIRL COME OUT FROM ONE OF THE STALES. SHE LOOKED AT ME UP AND DOWN AND WALKED TOWARD ME*



Shawna-*mean muggin* Pssh, move


*y/n Thinking* She pushed me kind of hard. She pushed me out of her way as she was tryna was her hands at the sink i was standing in front of. WTF is wrong with her? there are 3 other sinks in this bathroom she could have used. Why the one i was infront of? She washed her hands and dried them under the dryer. She was about to leave the washroom. I looked down and was ready to just cry again. But i couldn't. Shawna turned back around and looked at me for about a minute. She walked back towards me. She was coming so close to me i beegan to back myself up to the wall. She was litteraly squeezing my back on the wall. I looked down. But she was looking right at me..*



y/n-*trying to move*


shawna-*looking directly at her* Listen trick, ion like you. The moment you walked into the history class this morning i knew i wasnt gon' like you. Imma only tell you this one time and one time only, you better stop watchin mah man understand?



y/n-* still looking down * *quiet* who's your man



Shawna-Bitch don't play like you don't know ! Spectacular ! And you better take yo eyes off of him ! *looking reallly heated*


y/n-But, i asked spectacular if you're his girl, he said no, he said you just like him



Shawna-You lyin' lil bitch shut the fuck up ! *pointing in her face* I SAID, get yo eyes off my man !


y/n-but he said-


Shawna-*cuts her off* * puts her hand around y/n throat, beginning to choke her * IF I CATCH YOU LOOKING OR EVEN TALKIN TO MY MAN AGAIN...I`LL CUT YOU! YOU FEEL ME ?!!


y/n-*trying to breathe* bu-*gasp* but-*gasp*



Shawna-You better do as i say you ugly ass trick *lets go of her throat*



*Y/N P/O/V/;SHAWNA LET GO OF MY THROAT. I DROPPED TO THE GROUND, HOLDING MY THROAT, TRYING TO CATCH MY BREATH. SHAWNA WALKED OUT AS IF NOTHING HAPPENED. AS THE DOOR SLOWLY BEGAN TO CLOSE I SAW HER FIX UP HER HAIR, FAN HERSELF AND WALK AWAY. I LAYED ON THE GROUND CHOCKING, COUGHING, GASPING FOR AIR. I LOOKED UP AND SAW SOMONE RUN INSIDE THE WASHROOM. MY EYES WERE BLURRY I COULDNT SEE WHO IT WAS. I THOUGHT IT WAS SHAWNA, SO I COVERED MY HEAD WITH MY ARMS, AFRAID SHE WAS ABOUT TO HIT ME, KICK ME, PUNCH ME OR SOMETHING. BUT THEN I HEARD THE SWEET, SOOTHING VOICE OF SHANICE*



Shanice-Y/N?! WHATS WRONG? WHAT HAPPENED??


y/n-*un able to talk*


Shanice-Y/N! Talk to me please! *runs over to the tap and daps some toilet paper with it* *whipes y/n forehead with it because she was sweating*


y/n-*breathng heavy*



Shanice-Y/N! Are you okay??


y/n-I'm *breath* Fine


Shanice-I was looking all over the school for you ! whats going on?! Why did you run inside the school like that And why you on the floor like this ?!



y/n-THAT BITCH SHAWNA PUT HER HANDS ON ME !

Shanice-*looking like WTF* Shawna? Who's that?


y/n-Spectacular's girl!


Shanice-*eyes open wide* Girl?! He ain't mention anything about having a girl !


y/n-becuase he told me she just likes him! i toled shawna what he said and she went off on me ! she chocked me!


Shanice-*jumps up* SHE WHAT!!! *looks around* OH HELL NO! WHERE THE TRICK AT ?!


y/n-SHANICE NO! please calm down! i`m fine now, really !!


Shanice-*kneels back down to y/n* *sighs* Okay..


y/n-Shanice, theres a lot of things you and the other don't know about me



Shanice-what you mean? girl i've known you for years !


y/n-yeah but, theres things i've been through y'all wouldnt imagine !


Shanice-*looking completly lost* What?


Y/n-....



*SHE WAS ABOUT TO TALK, BUT THE BELL RANG*



Shanice-Aight thats gone have to wait, come on, i`ll walk you to your next class



*SHANICE HELPED Y/N UP. SHE TOOK HER TO GET A DRINK OF WATER. SHE GOT Y/N'S BACKPACK AND WALKED HER INSIDE TO HER NEXT CLASS. SHE HAS SCIENCE. LITTLE DID SHE KNOW ABOUT THE SHIT SHE WAS ABOUT TO GO THROUGH THERE...*



Shanice-*sits y/n down at a table* Aight y/n, imma be right back here to pick you up and walk you to your class after this aight?



y/n-*quietly* Okay


Shanice-If anything, imma come poke my head in thru the door every now and then to make sure you aight



y/n-Thanks so much Shanice


Shanice-*smiles* You mah homegirl. Anything for you. Well imma go to class so ill see you later


y/n-*grabbs her gently and hugs her tight*


Shanice-*hugs her back*



*SHANICE WALKS TO THE DOOR. SHE LOOKS AT Y/N ONE LAST TIME. Y/N LOOKS AT HER. SHE SMILES AND IS ABOUT TO WALK OUT THE DOOR WHEN...YUP..SHAWNA CAME. SHE BUMPED RIGHT INTO SHANICE. SHAWNA TRIED TO BRUSH PASSED SHANICE BUT SHE WASN'T HAVING THAT. SHANICE STAYED RIGHT THERE IN THE DOOR BLOCKING HER WAY. SHAWNA WAS LOOKING AT HER AS IF SAYING "Bitch is you stupid?" *



Shawna-You in my way *trying to brush passed her*

Shanice-*Grillin her and doesn't move*

Shawna-*throws her hands up in the air* MOVE TRICK!!


Female Voice-HEY HEY HEY ! None of this ladies! Now move it along! Shawna get in the class ! *Looks at shanice* Get to class young lady


shanice-Fine *moves*


Shawna-*Bumps into Shanice*


Shanice-*whispers in Shawna's ear* I'm watching you bitch *walks away*


Shawna-*Fans Shanice off* Whateva



Y/n-*thinking* SHIT! She just has to be in another one of my classes doesn't she ! OMG my day can't get any worse !!!



*Y/N SPOKE TOO SOON. RIGHT THEN AND THERE, SHE SAW SPECTACULAR WALK INTO THE CLASS ROOM. SHE FELT HER HEART STOP. SHE PUT HER HEAD DOWN AT HER DESK SO SHE WOULDNT HAVE TO LOOK AT HIM. THOUGH SHE COULDN'T SEE HIM, HE DEFINATLY SAW HER. HE ROLLED HIS EYES AND CONTINUOSLY SUCKED HIS TEETH. SHAWNA WAVED HIM OVER. HE WALKED OVER TO HER. SHE PATTED DOWN THE SEAT NEXT TO HER TELLING HIM TO SIT DOWN BESIDE HER. HE DID*



Shawna-I missed you specky *making a puppy dog look*

Spec-I missed you too

Shawna-But uhm, can i ask you something?

Spec-Shoot *looking at her*

Shawna-Uhm, is it true you told the duck that we aren't together?

Spec-*turns his head to look at y/n* *looks back at Shawna starring at him* *looks down* Uhm naw, why?

Shawna-Well me and her had a lil..Conversation, and she said that you said that i just like you, and i ain't yo girl


Spec-Man thats a lie !


Shawna-Oh whatever spec !



*SHAWNA GOT UP AND WAS ABOUT TO EXIT THE DOOR, BUT DIDN'T. SHE STOPPED IN THE DOOR, FOLDING HER ARMS AND POUTING. ( OH AND FOR THE RECORD, SHAWNA LOOKS LIKE MYA, THE SINGER) Y/N POCKED HER HEAD UP JUST A LITTLE TO SEE WHAT WAS GOING ON. SHE SAW. SPEC GOT UP FROM HIS SEAT, AND CAME BEHIND SHAWNA. HE HELD HER FROM BEHIND AND KISSED HER NECK*



Spec-Shawna man, you know you mah number one girl, you know i love you girl. I wouldn't lie to you


Shawna-*knows hes lying but refuses to believe it* Really? *turns around to face him*


Spec-Yeah baby *holds her chin as he slowly kisses her*


y/n-*thinking* LYING BASTARD!


Female Voice-Alright you two love birds i`m ready to start my lesson ! Sit down !


Spec-*breaks the kiss* Aight miss!



*They sit down beside each other, Shawna holds onto Specks arm*


F/v-Alright we have a few new students in the class so for those who don't know, i`m Mrs.Allen. I don't want top take up too much time talking so im going to buddy everyone up and send you to a station. This is science class so be careful with the chemicals. When you get to your station i`ll tell you what to do from there



*She begins to yell out the names of partners. She is down to the last few*



Mrs.Allen-Bobby and Michelle, Tyrone And Nicole *looks at Shawna* Shawna and...*Looks at Spec* Nicolas, and-

Shawna-Nicolas?! Why i gotta be his partner Mrs. Allen! Why can't i be specks ?! * Stomps her foot on the ground*



Mrs.Allen-You two are always partners! Time for a change !


Shawna-But if im not his partner then who is ?!


Mrs.Allen-*looks at y/n with her head on her desk* Y/N!


Y/N-Looks up *thinking* Oh no..



Spec-What ?!


Mrs.Allen-Spectacular And y/n Go over there *points to a table*


Spec-*sucks his teeth and does what he's told*



Y/n-*Still sitting*


Mrs.Allen-Y/n, please go with spectacular, it won't be that bad, he's really a nice boy


y/n-*low* you don't know the half of it...



*Y/N GOES OVER WITH SPEC. SHAWNA WAS SO PISSED OFF. SHE DIDNT TAKE HER EYES OFF OF Y/N FOR A SINGLE SECOND. Y/N AND SPEC PUT ON THEIR SAFETY GOGGLES AND GLOVES, AND APRINS. MRS. ALLEN EXPLAINED THE ASSIGNMENT AND THEY BEGAN TO WORK. Y/N WAS JUST WATCHING SPEC DOWN*



y/n-*watching spec and thinking* Man..he's such an ass, but he looks so cute working. I can't believe him and that shawna bitch are going out. Why would he lie to me about it? Why would he care if he lied? If he didnt like me like he claims to show it, he would want me to stay far away from him and he would tell me they were married or something ! Why would he lie?...*



Spec-Yo

y/n-*deep in thought*


Spec-*moves his hands in her face* YO! DUCK!


y/n-*snaps back into reality* HUH?


Spec-Mix these 2 chemicals together *points but not clear enough for her to see which 2 he's talking about*


y/n-These two? *points*


Spec-*not looking what so ever* Yea



*Y/N DID WHAT SHE WAS TOLD. SHE MIXED A BLACK COLORED CHEMICAL WITH A DARK BLUE ONE. SHE POURED THEM INTO A GLASS AND PUT IT ON THE BURNER, SPEC THEN LOOKED, HIS EYES GOT WIDE*



Spec-YOU FUCKIN' RETARD! YOU MIXED THE WRONG ONES TOGETHER! I SAID THESE 2 NOT THOSE 2 ! *points to the chemicals he was really telling her to mix together*


Y/N-what? you told me-



*BEFORE SHE COULD FINISH HER SENTENCE THE BURNER WAS MAKING A WEIRD NOISE. IT SOUNDED LIKE IT WAS HEATING UP. Y/N GOT CURIOUS AND BENT DOWN IN FRONT OF IT. BEFORE SHE KNEW IT, IT EXPLOADED IN HER FACE. SHE HAD BLACK ASH ALL OVER HER. IN HER HAIR, ON HER FACE. WHEN IT BLEW UP, IT BLEW HER TO THE GROUND. MRS. ALLEN IMMEDIATLY RAN TO HER SIDE TO HELP HER UP. SHAWNA, OUT OF NO WHERE, CAME AND LAUGHED SO HARD AT Y/N. SOON, SPEC BEGAN TO LAUGH, POINTING AT HER AND SAYING RUDE THINGS. THEN THE WHOLE CLASS BEGAN TO LAUGH. Y/N RAN OUT OF THE CLASS SO FAST, THROWING HER GOGGLES, APRIN AND GLOVES TO THE GROUND AS SHE RAN. MRS. ALLEN COULDNT EVEN CALL Y/N TO COME BACK, Y/N WAS LONG GONE. SHE HAD RAN BACK TO THAT SAME WASHROOM SHE WAS IN. SHE WASHED THE ASH OFF OF HER FACE. *



y/n-*thinking* why me god? why me ! *P.O.V.*; I NEVER RAN SO FAST IN MY LIFE. AFTER I GOT MOST OF THE ASH OFF, I WALKED TO THE WALL AND BEGAN TO CRY. I TURNED MY BACK TO THE WALL AND SLOWLY SLID DOWN TILL I HIT THE GROUND. I PUT MY FACE IN MY HANDS AND BAWLED. I HEARD THE BELL RING. I DIDN'T EVEN GO TO MY NEXT CLASS. SOON IT WAS 3:00 AND IT WAS TIME TO GO HOME. THIS WAS THE LONGEST DAY OF MY LIFE. WHEN ALMOST EVERYONE WAS OUT OF THE SCHOOL I WENT BACK TO THE SCIENCE CLASS, AND I GOT MY BACKPACK AND RAN OUTSIDE. THANK GOD I DIDNT SEE SPECTACULAR OR SHAWNA ANYWHERE. I SAW SHANICE, TENISHA AND GEORGINA. THEY WERE LOOKING ALL OVER FOR ME.I PUT ON A FAKE SMILE AND WE ALL GOT IN GEORGINA'S CAR. SHE DROPPED US ALL HOME. I WAS THE LAST TO GET DROPPED OFF. WE ARE NOW IN MY DRIVEWAY*



Georgina-Aight so i`ll see you tomorrow?

y/n-y-yeah..


Georgina-aight mama, sleep well tonight okay?


y/n-*sighs* *shuts car door* I'll try


Georgina-*backs up out the drive way, honks her horn twice and drives off*



*Y/N P.O.V.;* I WAVED BYE TO HER AS SHE DROVE OFF.I SAW WILLS CAR IN THE DRIVEWAY, HE WAS HOME. I COULD FEEL MY HEART BEATING FAST AGAIN. I FELT LIKE I COULD JUST DROP TO THE GROUND AND NOT GET UP. BUT I STAYED STRONG, AND I WALKED. I GOT MY KEY OUT AND WAS ABOUT TO OPEN THE DOOR, BUT SOMONE BEGAN TO UNLOCK THE DOOR FOR ME. THE DOOR OPENED. I LOOKED UP SLOWLY, IT WAS WILL...*



y/n-*trying to walk in past him*


Will-*grabs her arm* Hey hey hey, where you think you going? you think you gon' come in here without sayin hi to me?



y/n-*not looking at him * H-Hi..*tying to grab her arm back*


Will-Where were you last night ?


y/n-*remember last night in her cloest* I was out...


Will-*getting closer to her in her face* Out where


y/n-With a friend *beginning to walk off*



*Y/N THINKING*;I COULD HERE WILL SAY SOMETHING, BUT I WASNT LISTENING. I TUNED HIM OUT. PLUS I WAS WALKING SO FAST. I HEADED INTO THE KITCHEN TO GET A SNACK. AS SOON AS I GOT IN A SAW THE SMILING FACE OF MY MOM. THANK GOD SHE WAS HOME*



Mom-Hey sweety

y/n-Hi mom *fake smile*

Mom-*reading news paper* How was your first say of school?

y/n-*pauses* Fine


Mom-*take off her glasses and looks at her* You sure? something wrong?

y/n-*gets an apple and sits down beside her* Yup

*y/n Thinking* I then heard the door open. It was Zay. He had just come home from school too. He threw his backpack on the ground and sat down at the table beside me. He looked tired.*



Mom-Zay? How was your day at school?



Zay-MAN! LET ME TELL YOU!


mom-*laughs* Whats up

Zay-Dem girls ! They was finna rape me if i let them! I had to run home cuz some girl was stalkin me !


y/n-*raises one eyebrow* Stalking you? What could she possibly like about you?


Zay-Well what can i say? *leans back in his chair* Its all about the lightskinns with braides *touches his hair*



y/n-*that instantly made her think of spectacular* *rolls her eyes* Right...



Mom-Oh! i forgot to tell you guys! I wont be here tonight or tomrow when you get home. i`ll be away-


y/n-*cuts her off* On a buisness trip *rolls her eyes and gets up* *throws her apple core in the garbage* We know mom...*looks down*



Mom-*sighs*Kids im sorry but im really busy. At the end of all this we'll have a lot more money than we do now


Zay-Mom, have you not seen dis house? We rich baby ! *does the "ballin!" Sign*


y/n-Boy shut up!


Zay-*laughs*



Will-So, i'm babysitting again tomorrow?


Mom-yes baby. Do you mind?


Will-Naw i don't mind

Mom-Good!

Will-Me,Zay And y/n gon' have a GREAT time *looks at y/n with a devilish look* Ain't that right y/n?


Y/n-*Silent*



Zay-*looks at y/n* *looks at Will with hatred*


Mom-*looking suspisious* Okay...



Y/n-*changing the subject* Hey mom ! you said you was gon' take me shopping today to buy them new shoes i wanted!


Mom-*slaps her forehead* OMG i completly forgot! Sweety i spend that money on some bills!



y/n-*stomps her foot* MOM! YOU PROMISED!!


Mom-I KNOW! i`m sorry! *gets up and walks toward y/n*



y/n-*rolls her eyes*


Mom-*rubs y/n shoulders* Y/n im so sorry i PROMISE the minute i get my next check i`ll buy you those shoes


y/n-Next check?! Who knows when that will be !



Mom-Soon! But hey good news! While i was driving home i saw a big moving truck in the someones driveway. I parked my car to infront of the house and saw who it was



y/n-who was it?


Mom-This man and his kids moved in just up a couple streets from our house. Its a real nice and big house. But aye, he said he;s looking for someone to help move their things in and clean up their house a bit for them


y/n-*raises one eyebrow at her* So?


Mom-sooo...He said he;s willing to pay the person and i told him your short on cash so, i told him you would do it



y/n-MOM! i don't even know this man! he could be some kind of cereal killer!


Will-Yeah Vanessa, we don't wanna keep babygirl away from home *looks at y/n with a develish look* Tell him she cant do it, someone else will take the job


y/n-*without thinking* ILL DO IT !! *thinking* As long as it keeps me out this house im good...*



Mom-Good! now you can go see the man right now. He's waiting on you. I told him you're coming.


Y/n-*sighs* Okay. Whats the address?


Mom-*writes it on a piece of paper and gives it to her* Be good okay?


y/n-*low* yeah yeah,



*I WALKED TO THE DOOR AND PUT MY SHOES ON. I COULD FEEL WILL WATCHING ME WALK. I FELT SO DIRTY. ZAY BRUSHED PASSED HIM TO COME TO ME. HE OPENED THE DOOR FOR ME*


zay-Good stuff y/n


y/n-huh?


zay-taking that job to get out the house. i want you out, so will cant touch you

y/n-*hugs him tightly* Good looking out bro


zay-No problem *hugs her back* Now go! get outta here before mom leaves.


y/n-you gonna be okay home alone with Will?


Zay-*smiles* Don't worry about me i`ll be fine. okay?


y/n-*smiles* okay. See you later



*Y/N P/O/V/;I STEPPED OUTSIDE. ZAY SHUT THE DOOR BEHIND ME. I WALKED TO THE HOUSE OF THE ADRRESS MY MOM GAVE ME. I WAS KIND OF NERVOUS. BUT HEY I ALWAYS AM. AS I GOT CLOSER AND CLOSER TO THE HOUSE, I SAW THE BIG MOVING TRUCK. I WALKED UP THE DRIVE WAY AND LOOKED AT ALL THE NICE FURNITURE ON THE BIG PORCH. WOW, MY MOM WASNT LYING WHEN SHE SAID THEY HAD NICE THINGS. I STOOD AT THE DOOR, CATCHING MY BREATH BEFORE I RANG THE DOORBELL. I TOOK A DEEP BREATH AND KNOCKED ON THE DOOR. NO ONE ANSWERED. I RANG THE DOOR BELL, NO ONE ANSWERED. I DECIDED TO TURN AROUND AND GO BACK HOME, BUT THEN I HEARD SOMEONE OPEN THE DOOR, I QUICKLY TURNED AROUND TO SEE WHO IT WAS. I COULDN'T BELIEVE MY EYES...IT WAS HIM.....*



AIGHT EVERYONE HOPED YOU LIKED MY ADD! PLEASEEE BUMP IF YOU LIKE ! ADRIANNA YOU GONE COME IN SOON AIGHT DONT WORRY...BUMP!!


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I LIKE YOUR STORY BUMPZZZZZZ MA Big Grin
 
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AND MORE BUMPZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
 
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