BESTFRIENDS

Alot of the stuff that i put in this story is true. Right now I don't need a cast but sooner or later i will so feel free to post your info below. I hope you like it. =]
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"IM ME"
Hey! This be ya girl Juicy Chanel Richards. My mom has a thing for fashion so she named me after Juicy Couture and Chanel. Everybody calls me J. Rich, Chanel, or Chanie. I'm 16. I'm from Baldwin Hills, California. I live here. With my mom (Gianni). My mom is an actress. Since i'm an only child and she's never home she gives me whatever. I know alot of girls play the "im spoiled" or "I get what I want" role but mine is 100% real. How many girls you know that's 16 years old that drives this or maybe even this? I don't know any. But that's enough about me being spoiled. Since I am an only child friends are important to me. My 5 main (girl) bestfriends are Cresha, she is 5'6 and very athletic if you seen her she would remind you of Tocarra by the body but Kelly Rowland in the face. Then there is Sharlene, Shar is 5'7 and reminds you of Kyla Pratt, Diamond, she is 5'9 and looks exactly like Kelly Rowland also, then its my two cousins Kyla who looks like Beyonce and my other cousin Shonta who looks like Solange. Those are my 5 mains. I do have other friends that are girls but honestly they ain't nothing compared to them 5. As for boys I call many my bestfriend. But right now my bestfriend is Deon. Deon is very cute 6'2, athletic body, caramel complexion, hazel eyes, and long wavy hair to his shoulder. Deon has this swag to him that is like no other. He got this thug appeal he will beat the fuck outta any niggah who fucks with someone who is close to him. People fear him. But he is a great friend. He can be the funniest, most childish person you know but in that same breath he knows when to be serious. And that is what I love about Deon. So now you know about me.

"IM ON IT"
Chanel got up at 6am. She always was a person to get up early. She made her king sized bed. She walked downstairs to see her mom was gone. This wasn't a shock. Her mom was all about her paper. So she always was out working. If she wasn't tryna be in this movie she was in this music video. Chanel hooked her i-pod up to her speaker she blasted "The Business Remix". She began making breakfast. Chanel learned to cook when she was 9. That was the age when her mom first started leaving her at home by herself. After she finished breakfast she loaded the dishwasher and her phone rang : "Okay, im thinkin of a master plan naw im lying shawty on my mind".
Chanel: Hey Kyla!
Kyla: Slootie! (LOL) Just playing but you drivin' to school?
Chanel: Of course
Kyla: Well me and Shonta on our way over there cause ma is actin dumb
Chanel: Okay ima unlock the door and go get dressed
Kyla: Thanks Chanie
Chanel: Now Ky you know I love you and Shonta
Shonta and Kyla were Chanel's favorite little cousins. Their mom (Armani) is (Gianni's) twin sister. Gianni went for the hollywood life while Armani went for family life and went to school to become a psychiatrist. Chanel went to her room and showered. She then brushed her teeth and plugged up her curling irons. Chanel favorite thing besides shopping was getting dressed. She loved clothes. She decided to wear these True Religion jeans this shirt and these shoes, I did my hair like this. Chanel grabbed her phone, lip gloss, i-pod and money and put it in her new gold Gucci Bag. She walked downstairs to see Kyla and Shonta sitting on the couch. Shonta was on the phone with her boyfriend and Kyla was texting somebody.
Chanel: Let's go.
Shonta: It's my turn in the front
Chanel: (LOL) Y'all argue like some kids
Chanel was riding down her street when she passes a bus stop. She seen Deon standing on the corner. She backed up and rolled her window down.
Chanel: Why you out here?
Deon: Im wit my dad this week
Chanel: Get in
Deon made Shonta get in the backseat so he could be in the front next to his bestfriend. Every red light and stop sign Chanel glanced at Deon. It was a good thing she had on her Gold Gucci shades that came with her new bag. She didn't want to admit it but Deon was looking really good today. He was wearing a red Rocawear T-shirt, with some dark jeans that had a red R on the back pockets, he had on some red and white jordans, his hair was freshly braided.
Deon: Chanie, you know that girl Maya?
Chanel: Maya who?
Deon: Lightskinned, short, long hair.
Chanel: THAT IS WEAVE! And yeah I know her (LOL)
Deon: She tryna come over
Chanel: (makes ugly face)
Deon: Why yo ugly face?
Chanel: She a hoe
Deon: You say that about all my girls
Deon was right. Chanel called every single last one of his girls hoes. She hated them. She really had a crush on Deon. But every since they had become bestfriends it seemed like she liked him more. He told her everything. Atleast that's what she thought. She told him stuff that she would only tell Diamond, Sharlene or Cresha. Deon just had that effect on her. Chanel pulled up to the school. Kyla and Shonta went one way. Deon waited and they walked in together. Chanel could feel all the girls staring at her and even heard some whispering ignorant things about her. It seemed like she made more enemies just by being his friend. Chanie was always a classy girl what girls didn't know was that she could fight. She never was one to get into fights but if she ever did she had a very slim chance of winning even against some boys. Deon walked over to the football team. Chanel went over to where Cresha was sitting.
Cresha: You look cute Chanie!
Chanel: Thanks. I really need to talk to you
Cresha: Okay
Cresha was always the one Chanie confided in. Diamond and Sharlene were both cool. But Diamond didn't always listen and respond the way Chanie liked. And Sharlene's philosphy for everything was either "fuck 'em" or "shid, fuck it". Where Cresha actually listened and if Chanie was about to do something dumb then Cresha would talk some sense into her. Cresha and Chanie walked outside.
Cresha: It's about Deon isn't it?
Chanie: Yeah today on our way here he was talking about this chick Maya
Cresha: You called her a hoe didn't you?
Chanie: She is a hoe. But Cresh im really feeling him and it's beyond a small crush it's bigger than that and it seems like the more im around him the more I like him. At first it was easy to hide but the more we together the harder it is.
Cresha: Chanie you need to tell him
Chanie: I can't I think it would ruin our friendship
Cresha: If you say so
Chanie and Cresha talked more about Chanie's thing for Deon. The bell rang and Chanie went to her locker. She had a locker to herself but Deon moved his self in. She walked over there to see some hoe standing on his side. Soon as Chanie appeared the hoe mean mugged her. Chanie returned the ugly look and got her stuff from her locker. The girl walked off. Deon noticed Chanie bending down. Even though that was his bestfriend he had to admit she was looking good in her True Religion jeans.
Deon: So what about that girl?
Chanie: Oh; she seem nice for you. I don't know her.
Deon: That's Mi'yel she from Jamaica
Chanie: Ummm
The 6 classes went by fast. Afterschool Chanie had cheerleading practice. She grabbed all her homework. And took it to the car. Grabbed her cheerleading bag and made her way to the Girl's Locker Room. Chanie changed into her black shorts and her red tank-top. She got into a group with Kyla, and Shonta and began to stretch. After practice the girls changed. Chanie waited for Deon to make sure he had a way home. He said he didn't so her, Kyla and Shonta waited for him.
Shonta: Why we waiting for this nigga?
Kyla: I'll tell you why cause Chanie likes him
Chanie: I don't like him he is my bestfriend
Kyla: Whateva! C. Rich. Don't lie to me.
Shonta: Yeah, you do look at him funny
Chanie: He's my bestfriend
Deon came out the building.
Chanie: Can we talk about this later y'all?
Chanie took Kyla and Shonta home first.
Kyla: Aight C. Rich ima see you tomorrow
Chanie: Kay! Bye Ky, Bye Shonta!
Chanie waited for them to get in the house. And then she pulled off.
Deon: So where you going?
Chanie: Home im tired from practice
Deon: You should go with me to the mall to meet this girl
Chanie: I'm not dressed
Deon: Aight! Go to yo house and get dressed and then go with me to my dad's house
Chanie: Okay
Really Chanie didn't want to go with Deon. She hated being around girls who liked him. They always did get on her nerves. Especially when he introduced her as his bestfriend. They always seemed to look at her like he was lying. Or like she could never be his girlfriend. Truth was Chanie believed she could be the best girlfriend Deon ever had. Chanie pulled in her drive-way.
Chanie: You coming in?
Deon: Sure
Deon looked around as he walked into Chanie's house. Her mom had good taste. It was decorated very nicely. He looked on the wall at pictures of Chanie. She was a nice looking girl. Deon noticed one pic of Chanie when she was young. She had grown up alot since then. **Chanie walked in her room. She showered quickly and put on lotion even quicker. She fixed her hair and decided to get dressed in this shirt, with these jeans, and these shoes. She walked downstairs to hear Deon talking to one of his hoes. She got jealous wishing it was her.
Chanie: You ready?
Deon: (continues to talk but shakes his head at Chanie)
Chanie pulled up to Deon's house. His sister was outside. Dericka was really pretty. She would remind you a smaller, girly, version of her brother. Deon ran in the house leaving Dericka and Chanie outside.
De: Wassup Chanie?
Chanie: Nothing. Chilling with my bestfriend (sighs)
De: Awww; I see you still crushing hard
Chanie: I am but-(GCO)
De: Deon is my brother and I love him but he aint worth it. You think you know all of it cause you his "bestfriend" but you gotta be there all the time like me. C he really ain't worth it. Believe me!
Chanie: I know. But it's something about him
De: You sound like the hoes.
They both laughed. Chanie knew that Dericka would never lie to her. They weren't really bestfriends not even good friends but Dericka was a cool person and so was Chanie. So when Deon introduced them they hit it off instantly and never had any altercations. Dericka never got into Deon's bussiness when it came to his hoes, girlfriends, or even the girls who liked him. But it was something Dericka liked about Chanie. Chanie had this realness to her. She wasn't being Dericka's friend to get close to Deon. She was just being a friendly person. That was another reason Dericka befriended Chanie. De knew how her brother could be but Chanie didn't. De always made sure her older brother treated her right. **Deon walked outside looking amazing. His outfit was simple some jean shorts, a white tee and some fresh white forces. But yet he made an outfit that simple look ten times greater.
Deon: You ready?
Chanie: Yeah
De: Deon don't be out all day.
Deon: Shutup!
De: Bye Chanie.
Chanie drove to the mall. As soon as she got there Deon hopped out the car. Chanie on the other hand fixed her make-up and hair. Since he was here to meet some girl she might as well meet some dudes. Of course she only wanted Deon but no harm in flirting. Soon as she walked in the mall hugging Deon was Maya. Chanie rolled her eyes. Maya was a short mixed girl. She had a short hair and always wore tracks. They did look nice though. She would remind you of the singer Cassie but she had a thicker build. Chanie rolled her eyes. She walked past them. Since she was so heart broken she decided to shop. She went to Victoria's Secret soon as she walked in Chanie seen the cutest outfit and immediatly thought of Deon. Chanie bought it it was only $42 and it was well worth it. She shopped around some more and after 45mins her phone rang "Just call me up and i'll be there when you need me, when eva you want it you can come and see me cause you know just what to do". Chanie answered it before Casha could finish knowing exactly who it was.
Deon: Where you at?
Chanie: Ummm by Victoria's Secret, why?
Deon: Ooh; what you buy us?
It was little comments like that they drove Chanie crazy. She instantly began to smile. Deon was really a charmer. He knew exactly what to say whenever. Even though Chanie never told him she liked him she had the strange feeling that he knew. Whenever he was around her whole demeanor changed.
Chanie: I bought ME something.
Deon: Turn around C!
Chanie turned around to see Deon posted. He looked so damn good. She walked over to him. He was trying to see what was in her bag. She kept it closed.
Deon: You ready to leave?
Chanie: Yeah.
They walked out the mall together. Deon was steady reaching and trying to see what was in her bag. She put the bag in the trunk.
[IN THE CAR]
Chanie: So how was your fling with Maya?
As if she cared. She said it with so much attitude and so much sarcasm. Deon could tell she really didn't care. Which was honestly cool with him. Cause it didn't go the way he wanted it too. He planned on getting head from Maya and going back to her house. And letting Chanie go her own way. But when Maya started acting shitty he walked away from her.
Deon: It was cool. Maya a cool chick
Chanie: Ummm (rolls eyes)
Deon: Where you about to go?
Chanie: Yo house, den my house
Deon: Oh; aight.
Chanie pulled up to Deon's house and Dericka was outside with her boyfriend. Deon began looking at him. He was so over protective of Dericka. She was a pretty girl. Lots of dudes liked her. Most feared her brothers. But the ones that was bold gave her a try.
Deon: Aight! Chanie ima see you tomorrow
Chanie: Kay
Deon leaned in and kissed Chanie on the cheek. She almost lost it. You would've thought she won a million dollars. Dericka seen Chanie's reaction. De knew that this wasn't gone go over to well if something did happen between her brother and Chanel. Dericka really wanted Deon to leave Chanie alone. Sure she would be mad at first but she would get over it eventually. She didn't want anything to happen between them because she knew how Deon was. And it would really hurt Chanel.
Chanie waved bye to Dericka and pulled off.

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"SHE GOTTA DONK"
[FRIDAY MORNING]
Today there was no school. Some teachers holiday. Nobody really knew or cared no school was no school no matter what the reason was. Chanie opened her eyes to see Deon standing in her door. Her first reaction was that she was dreaming so she closed her eyes. She felt somebody sit on the edge of her bed. She opened her eyes and there was Deon.
Chanie: How you get in?
Deon: Yo mom let me in as she was leaving.
Chanie: (rolls eyes)
Deon: Damn she fine!
Chanie: That is my mom you talkin' bout.
Deon: (Haha) I know you look just like her
Chanie began to think if he just said my mom was fine then he said I look like her does that mean im fine too? She got out her bed and went to the bathroom. **Deon watched as Chanie walked off. Damn she had a body. She was thick in ALL the right places. Chanie walked back in the room after brushing her teeth and washing her face. She made her bed.
Chanie: So what we doing tonite?
Deon: Well I got a game tomorrow and its a party tonite. The whole team dere
Chanie: Oh
Deon: You gone go wit me?
Chanie: Wit you, wit you, or...-(GCO)
Deon: Wit me
Chanie tried her hardest to hide her smile as she said yes. All she could think about was what to wear out while she was with Deon. She had to look her best. But she didn't want to seem over dressed. Deon layed on her bed and got on her lap top.
[LATER THAT NIGHT]
It was an hour before the party. "Just call me up and i'll be there when you need me, when eva you want it you can come and see me cause you know just what to do". Chanie answered her phone as she went through her closet trying to find the perfect outfit.
Deon: Ayy Chanie about the party tonite...Maya wanna go with me so...-(GCO)
Chanie: Oh; its cool.
Deon: But Dericka said can you come get her?
Chanie: Tell her yeah.
Chanie felt so heart broken. She knew Deon would do that to her. Just not tonite. She showered and got dressed in this dress, and these shoes. She wore hair straight down. She added her white earrings, and bracelet. Chanie grabbed her phone and went to get Dericka. She was so happy to see De was ready. She wanted to avoid Deon at all costs bestfriend or not. They walked in the party and everybody was dancing. Dericka went to find her boyfriend JD. Chanie walked around said her "hi's" and gave out her hugs. She noticed all the football players in a dark corner posted watching all the girls. Chanie walked off when she felt someone behind she turned around and it was Deon. **Deon hugged Chanie. He looked at her. Her dress was hugging her in all the right spots. Her legs looked nice and she even smelled good.
Chanie: Havin' fun?
Deon: It's lame. The hoes can't even dance.
Chanie: (Haha) You mean Maya?
Deon could tell by her voice that she was mad. He hated when Chanie had an attitude over him. Deon did know that Chanie had a little childish crush on him. What he didn't know was it wasn't a childish crush. Soulja Boy's "Donk" came on and Deon knew it was Chanie's song. She began dancing the deejay cut it off right before her part and mixed Plies "Please Excuse My Hands". Deon asked Chanie to dance. ***Chanie had a nice body. When Deon said the hoes can't dance what he meant was they didn't dance like Chanie. She could really twerk a niggah up. While Chanie was dancing with Deon she felt like it wasn't no other person in the room. The more Deon touched on her body the hotter she became. She was loving every minute of it. She looked up for a quick second to notice Maya mugging her. She shook it off and continued dancing. Once the song ended so did Deon. It kinda pissed her off but o'well. She was going to the bathroom when Dericka stopped her.
De: I seen you and my brother
Chanie: (cheesin') I love that boy
De: Yeah I know. I just don't get it though
Chanie: Me either.
Chanie went in the bathroom and made sure she was looking on point. She walked back out and some dumb song was on. She noticed Maya sitting on Deon's lap kissing him. She instantly got mad. How could he dance with her then let some bitch be all over him? She really didn't get Deon. Everybody else knew she liked him why couldn't he see it? After being mad for a little while longer some cute dude walked over to her.
Dude: Chanel right?
Chanie: Yea but call me Chanie. Who are you?
Dude: (HaHa!) I'm in your chemistry class my name is Derek
Derek was really cute. He was 6'4 had a mixed complexion. Nice body, gray eyes, and a nice smile. Chanie talked to Derek for like 10 minutes. She never noticed him but he sure knew alot about her. She ended up dancing with him for a few songs. Chanie was so into Derek at that moment she didn't notice Deon's constant stares. After a while Chanie wasn't feeling the party. Dericka walked up to her.
De: This shit gettin' lame
Chanie: Yeah im ready to go
De: You seen my brother?
Chanie: Not really
De: Well whateva we out
Chanie and Dericka got into Chanie's Chrysler 300. Chanie really liked Derek he seemed so cool. She did get his number and gave him hers. Chanie pulled up to Dericka's house with plans of just going home. But De wasn't having it. De and Chanie walked in the house they went to Dericka's room which was right across from Deon's room.
De: Girl finally a house to myself
Chanie: Yeah usually all yo brothers here
De: I know
Chanie: So where was you at all night
De: With my boo
Chanie: (smilin') Im so hatin'
De: One day that's gone be you and somebody.
Dericka really put a strong emphasis on somebody. She really didn't want Chanie to keep waisting her time on Deon. She knew it was niggahs lined up to get a chance with Chanie but it was like she was blind.
Chanie: Yeah hopefullly somebody is your fine brother.
De: Ummm that bum (rolls eyes)
Chanie and Dericka was just clowning and talking when they heard a noise. De ran downstairs with Chanie behind her. They looked out the window to see Deon and Maya in the car. Maya was on Deon's lap and the windows were foggy. Chanie felt her heart hit the ground, her stomach did flips, and her eyes felt really heavy. Dericka noticed her facial expression and really tried to get her mind somewhere else.
De: You want to hear me and my boo's song
Chanie: Sh-sure
Dericka got her i-pod and plugged it downstairs she played 'Please Excuse My Hands'. Chanie really grew sad remembering her experience earlier with Deon.
Chanie: This song is cool but this is my song
She quickly changed the song to 'My Everything' by Tynisha Keli.
De: Yeah! I like this song too.
Chanie was no longer worried about Deon. Music was really a passion of hers. She liked to sing and dance to it all the time. She had a really nice voice. Dericka knew that but nobody else knew that Chanel could sing. Chanie was so caught up in the song that when she heard the door and seen Deon and Maya it all came back to her.
Chanie: De im gone leave i'll see you
De: Alright Chanie.
Dericka noticed that look on Chanie's face. She really hated the fact that Deon was like this. She knew girls liked her brothers (She has 3 brothers) but nobody ever had a like as strong as Chanie. She watched as Chanie sped out her drive-way. She really felt for this girl.**Chanie got to her drive-way and could no longer hold back the tears. How could someone make her hurt so much but yet she wants him around?

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awww.thats so sad...deon needs to wake up and see how bad chanel wants him
boys are so dumb sometimes
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she better than me cause i woulda been like umm hoe you coulda at least went in the house you act like his mama home damm..
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"DA BUSINESS"
One thing that was big at Chanie's school was sports. Every weekend everybody went to the football game. Of course she had to go because she was a cheerleader but right now she was on a much needed break. Chanie always went to see her bestfriend Deon play cheering or not. Chanie woke up and made her bed. She walked downstairs surprised to see her mom.
Gianni: Hey boo!
Chanie: Hi mom
Gi: What's wrong?
Chanie: Nothing.
Gi: Oh, okay.
Chanie didn't even waste her time talking to her mom. They didn't really have a relationship. Her mom didn't know anything about her. The doorbell rang since Chanie ain't really feel like being bothered she left it for her mom. She went and showered. She out on some shorts and a shirt. She walked in her room to see Deon sitting on her bed. She was happy to see him but at the same time she knew he was with Maya lastnite and it made her sick.
Deon: Wassup bestfriend?
Chanie: (quietly) Nothing
Deon: Did you have fun at the party lasnite?
Chanie: Somewhat
Deon: You coming to my game tonite?
Chanie: Maybe
Deon: What's wrong witchu?
Chanie: Nothing
Chanie wasn't even looking at Deon. When she walked past Deon grabbed her and made her sit next to him.
Deon: Chanel you my bestfriend I know when you mad
Chanie: Aight. I am mad.
Deon: You gone tell me why?
Chanie: I really don't want to talk about
Deon: I need to beat a niggahs ass?
Chanie: Naww
Deon: Aight den (kissed her cheek)
When Deon kissed her all her anger was gone. Now Chanie was sure she was going to the game. She even needed a new outfit to go.
Chanie: You should go to the mall with me
Deon: Aight
As soon as they walked in the mall all these girls mugged Chanie.
Deon: So where you wanna go first?
Chanie: Let's go to Victoria's Secret
Deon: You know I hate goin' in there with you
Chanie: Quit lying.
Chanie went through and bought a few things. Deon was acting a mess trying to get her to buy skimpy stuff. After they left there they went to Wet Seal. Once they was done Chanie and Deon went to his house. Deon convinced Chanie to come in. She walked in and Dericka and her boyfriend JD was sitting on the couch. Deon gave JD a threatening look. Chanie and De said their hi's and hugged.
De: Can I go to the game with you?
Chanie: Yeah
De: Aight well ima put him out get my stuff and im ready when you ready
Chanie: Okay
Chanie went to Deon's room. She laid across his bed and waited for him. He came and there with no shirt on and she almost lost it but kept it cool.
Deon: When you come to the game you put my number on yo face?
Chanie: Niggah you crazy
Deon: Why
Chanie: So I can get acne and look all ugly
Deon: My bestfriend is always sexy (kiss her cheek)
Chanie: I'll think about it
**Deon knew that everytime he kissed her cheek she did what he wanted. Chanie was a cool ass female. She was really his best friend. He did have alot of girls that was his friend but none of them was like Chanie. Alot of girls wanted to be where she was at but she was special. He didn't really like her but she was fine.
Deon: Fareal Chanel put number 5 right here (touches her cheek)
Chanie: I said ima think about-(GCO)
Before she could finish her sentence Deon kissed her cheek again. She really did like this boy. He really didn't know what he did to her.
Chanie: Aight Deon. Ima do it this time
Deon: Aight!
Chanie: Im leaving thought I got to get dressed
Deon: What you gone wear?
Chanie: Wait and see
Chanie walked out Deon's room and her and Dericka went to her house. Dericka and Deon always came to Chanie's house when they mom was trippin'. Dericka went to her room and Chanie went to her room and they both got dressed. Dericka looked like this, Chanie decided to wear this Baby Phat dress, and these Baby Phat shoes, she wore her hair like this. Chanie and Dericka got to the game. Tonite was one of the biggest games of the season. At the end of the game the scored ended up being 21-6 Deon scored 2 times.
[AFTER THE GAME]
De: My brother said can you take him home?
Chanie: Yeah
Chanie was standing next to Dericka waiting on Deon when Derek walked over to her. She hugged him and they walked off in another direction to talk.
Derek: So what you doin' tonite?
Chanie: I don't know i might go out with the team or my friend De
Derek: Let me know
Chanie: Okay.
Derek really liked Chanie. They had a few classes together this year. But freshmen year he was in all her classes. He thought she was really fine. But he also knew she had a thing for Deon. Deon had many girls and Chanie wasn't one of them so he didn't think Deon would mind. **Deon walked out the locker room and waiting by the door was Maya.
Maya: What's up daddy?
Deon: (haa) Waddup?
Maya: Nothin' what you doin' tonite?
Deon: I'ma be with the bestfriend or the team
Maya: I'm coming over later.
Deon: Later?
Maya: Around 4am.
Deon: We'll see
Maya: Be at home (walks off)
Deon didn't like Maya but she was a freak. Maybe if his night went cool he would give her a call. **He walked off the field to see some niggah talking to Chanie. He waited with Dericka for Chanie to come on. **Chanie walked away from Derek and over to Dericka and Deon.
Chanie: (smilin') Y'all ready to go?
Deon: Yeah
De: I see Derek got you smilin'
Chanie: Yeah he is cute.
[IN THE CAR]
Deon: So what we doin' tonite?
De: I heard its a party
Chanie: I ain't tryna party tonite. I partied already Friday
De: Yeah well ima have my baby come get me
Deon: For what?
De: (LOL)
Deon: DERICKA!
De: I'm just playin' Deon dayum
Deon: Watch yo mouth
They got to the house. Dericka went to her room to cake it with JD. Chanie went to Deon's room. She was layin' on his bed texting when he walked in without his shirt on and laid next to her.
Chanie: What we doin' tonite?
Deon: Let's just chill
Chanie couldn't believe that cause usually her and Deon chilled at the mall or drove around. But most of the time he would end up calling one of his hoes to join them. Deon got up and put on some music. **Chanie couldn't help but stare at Deon's shirtless body. He had nice huge arms and his body. Dayum!, dont get her started. Deon laid in the bed on Chanie's shoulder. This made her really nervous. She liked it but still her and Deon had never been this close before and especially alone. It was a knock on the door. Chanie was happy. Deon got up to get it and it was Dericka.
De: Comere Chanie
Chanie: (walks in the hall) Wassup?
De: Im bout to go see JD you cool here wit Deon?
Chanie: yeah
De: Aight! DEON!
Deon: (walks out) What?
De: Im leaving
Deon: Don't be out there being fast
De: Shutup (leaves)
Chanie really didn't want to go back to Deon's room. So she went and sat on the living room couch.
Deon: Why you down here?
Chanie: I wanted to watch tv
Chanie thought of the quickest lie ever. She turned on the t.v. and New York Goes To Hollywood was on. She really didn't like the show but she just couldn't handle being alone with Deon right now. She stared at his sexy body through the tv. Deon could feel Chanie staring at him.
Deon: What you lookin' at?
Chanie: Not yo black ass
Deon: (LOL) Aight. if you say so.
Deon scooted closer to Chanie. Chanie felt uncomfortable so she decided to get up but Deon pulled her back down making her land on his lap. Chanie wanted to get up but something wouldnt let her. She looked in Deon's beautiful eyes. She wanted him more than anything in the world and she just wished he felt the same way. Deon leaned in and kissed Chanie tenderly. She tried pulling away and he kept trying to pull her back him being more succesful then her. She finally broke free of the kiss and moved his lips down to her neck and he began placing soft butterfly kisses on her neck, then down to her collar bone and then back up again, then to her lips. His hands started to caress her sides as he increased the kiss with more and more passion. Chanie wrapped her arms tightly around Deon's neck he laid her on the couch and began to un-button her dress. He kissed her neck and worked his way down to her breast. Deon undid Chanie's gold bra and her full breast screamed for him to touch them. Deon explored Chanie's body. Then she began to kiss his neck. When Deon took off her boy shorts Chanie could feel herself getting hot. She slowly guided his hand down her body and to her pussy. Deon inserted his finger and she moaned out in ecstacy. Chanie could feel herself releasing in his hand. Deon began to kiss Chanie's flat stomach and worked his way down to her belly button and finally to her clit. His tongue entered her and she grabbed his head and begged him to not stop. Deon feeling like he was about to explode he got a condom out his pocket and moved to enter her, he noticed this look in Chanie's eye. Chanie had slightly moved away.
Deon: Wassup C?
Chanie: (nervous) Deon I....I...um...I ain't never done this before
Deon: YOU A VIRGIN!
Chanie rolled her eyes and sucked her teeth. She was so embarrased. **Deon didn't mean to hurt Chanie. But he just thought being as fine as she was and having a killah ass body that some niggah had hit atleast once before.
Deon: Its aight I just didn't know
Chanie: (attitude) You say it like its a badd thing
Deon: It aint. And I didn't say that. Ima be gentle aight Chanie?
Chanie still had an attitude with Deon. Why would being a virgin be a bad thing? He expected her to be some hoe who fucked any and everybody like Maya. She rolled her eyes at him. Deon began to kiss on her neck and belly again and all that anger and attitude went away. Deon positioned so it wouldn't hurt Chanie. The first time he tried to enter her she moved away. Deon moved to where Chanie was and wrapped his arms around her. He looked into her eyes as he gently entered her. He got the head in and Chanie had already had her nails dug deep into his back. Chanie had the tightest pussy he had ever felt, but he had to remember to go slow. Soon they got a rhythm establised Chanie felt like heaven to him. He pumped into her and she threw it right back. Before she knew it the pain was gone and she swore she was on a cloud. Chanie moaned and cussed as Deon took her to highs that she could never imagine. If she would have known sex was this good she woulda started a long time ago. Afterwards Deon leaned in and kissed Chanie then he pulled her body close to his and they both went to sleep.

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