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I woke up to the sun bright in my eyes.My maid had opened the blinds like she always did.I smiled at the beautiful sight of the sun beaming of the ocean.I looked at my left hand and smield even harder.Soon i was to mary the man of my dreams.I was soon to be Fatima Renee Brown.I smield at the thought.I picked up my cell and saw that he had called and he left a message.I sat quietly and listend to the messgae while i smoke a cigar.

Messgae:Voice Crackly-He..hey bay.I just wanted to call and say..i..i.. I love you..I|Starts choking and gun shots in the back ground|M/v:Is he dead?
M/v:Yes sir|the line hangs up|


I dropped the phone with tears in my eyes and i dropped the cigar.I ran to the bathroom to get my robe.I grabbed my keys and went downstairs.The T.V. was on and the news station was on.I stopped when i heard my name.I turned and i saw.

News Reporter:I repeat Super Model Fatima Brewer's Multitalented and Multi-platinum's Fiance Chris Brown has been shot and killed at Zanzibar at te water front last night he was pronounced dead at 12:30 this morning.He was found at about 11:30 at night.It said that Fatima Brewer's Cousin Kaylin found him while walking with her boyfriend in the park.She refuses to answer any questions at this time we will be back with more info. On this story Back to you Bob.

I dropped to my knees ans cried and screamed.I didnt know what to do.I had lost the one true love i had ever had.My maid Hilda came over and hugged me.What was i going to do without Chris? I knew i couldnt go to work to day.I didnt know the next time i was going to be at work.I heard a knock at the door.I didnt budge and hilda didnt either.The person took it apon thier selves to come in and there stood my cousin Kaylin covered in Chris's blood crying while Lewis held her.I got up and ran to her and hugged her.All she kept sayin was im so sorry Fat.I sat up in my bed again to day..That was two months ago.Today i would have been married to Chris.But instead im going to his funeral.I put on my wedding dress.Chris told me long before he died that when i was attending his funeral he wanted me to wear it. Kaylin and my bestfriend whom i called my sister Jali helped me with make up.They had to keep re applying it because i kept crying.The fixed my hair in to a curly pony tail.I looked at them.I was ready..We got there and everyone looked at me funny.I didnt care.This is what Chris wanted me to do.Jalia sang 2 songs i would never forget.I miss you by Aaliyah and I will always love you by Whitney Huston.I cried the whole time untill it was my time to speak.

"Um..Hello everyone.As you know i loved Chris dearly.There was nothing i wouldnt do for him..Actually thats the reason im here in this wedding dress today.He told me its what he wanted me to wear when i attended his funeral.But this was like 7 months ago.I laughed at first but he made me promise to waer it.And i did.He said he would put it in the will.I laughed at him but i knew he was serious.Mrs.Brown.I loved your son.And if i could take his place right now i would|Breaks down crying|Um But any way Chris was a beautiful man with a beautiful soul.I was supposed to marry him today.But instaed were all gathered here for a funeral.I know Chris is watching us.As we speak.So please never forget him.And never doubt his presence.I love you Baby|Cries even harder|Just help me get through life."

I went back to my seat and Cried on Jalia's shoulder.She hugged me tightly.I looked up near the door and i saw two men dressed in grey.I had never seen them.I didnt think anything of it.I just layed back down on Jalia's shoulderAnd listened to His Cousin talk about the events taking place at his mothers house.

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