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INTRO

Hypnotizing. Sexy. Tantalizing. Brown skin, long curly hair, green eyes. Exotic right? A chocolate shawty with white features, erotic. Small waistline, thick hips, a round ass, curvaceous as a mother fucker. She was something like an oxymoron. The most beautiful ugly person I’d ever met. A demon with the body of an angel.

Her looks were deceiving. Sincere eyes on a wretched wench. Soft lips, soft spoken, but her words were as sharp as knives. Behind her smile lay secrets. Once I discovered her hidden truths, I wished that I hadn’t. I held the key that unlocked her past, a past as deadly as the plague. So I prayed for redemption, amnesia maybe. The knowledge I now held was too much of a burden to bare.

……but her kisses pacified me. Distracted me. Caused me to forget what I knew. I was unable to escape her clutch, trapped in her web of lies.


Story coming soon. Bump for more.

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soundz lyke a hot story...bumpz




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I'm just me
Most people agree that I'm a bitch because I don't care for most things.
Some people think I'm heartless because I say what's on my mind
and don't give a damn who gets hurt by it.
Others think I'm mean because I just don't like talking to people in general.
Everybody wants to know how I can put up with all this shit
talking without so much as a reply back.
It's easy...if you just don't give a fuck.



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I'm not the one to be reading stories on this board but this caught my eye. Like, damn. Your details are on point. I actually visualized the broad and everything. Hope that you can keep my interest !

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Originally posted by [ Nano ] Bomb .:
I'm not the one to be reading stories on this board but this caught my eye. Like, damn. Your details are on point. I actually visualized the broad and everything. Hope that you can keep my interest !

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thank you. i hope so too.
 
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BUMPS BUMPS
"THE MOST BEATUIFUL UGLY PERSON YOU EVER SAW" NOW DATS RANDOM AND FUNNY AS HELL. BUT IM LUVIN DIS STORII TOO


LEAD, FOLLOW, OR GET OUT THE WAY!!!!!!
IF OPPORTUNITY DOESN'T KNOCK BUILD A DOOR!!!!!
CAST CALL INFO:
NAME: JAZZALYN
AGE: 16 OR WATEVA U NEED
MAN: PLIES, SPEC, PLESSURE, MARIO, TREY SONGZ
LOOK LIKE: GABRIELLE UNION OR

 
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Hmm. . good introduction

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can i be in ur story my name is quana and can i be with pleasure please and be 18
 
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im liking dis so far..
alot.. =)
good..



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yea yea bumpz dis






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upz`!
I lIKEZ Add MO` SOON!


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“Girl, I must warn you. I sense something strange in my mind.”

Everyone who was sitting stood up and started jamming. This was everybody’s fucking song back in the day. This was one of them jams that you could dance to all by yourself, no need to search the room for a dance partner. I of course, being that it was my own birthday party with the 1990’s theme, didn’t need to search for shit. Ladies were sniffing me out like dog hounds and I was loving it.

The twins Cocoa and Chanel ran over to me in a cold dash, trying to get their hands on me before any other female could. One on the back, and one on the front, we started grinding to the beat.

“It’s driving me out of my mind. That’s why it’s hard for me to find. Can’t get it out of my head, miss her, kiss her, love her. (Wrong move, you’re dead) That girl is poisonnnnn.”

“Awww shit,” I said as Cocoa bent over and backed her ass up on my lap.

My party guests noticed my skinny high yellow ass squeezed up between two thick chocolate girls, looking something like a oreo. The song was almost drowned out by the guests lifting their glasses yelling, “GO WILLIE! GO WILLIE!”

“It’s your birthday! It’s your birthday!” I could hear the twins yelling as they freaked harder since everyone was watching.

That’s right. It was MY birthday. It only came around once a year and I anticipated this day like little children anticipate Christmas. If I was lucky, Cocoa and Chanel would be my Santa Clauses. They wouldn’t need to slide down the chimney either. I’d leave the front door wide open. The thought alone made me grab Cocoa, the twin in front of me, by the hips and push my dick up on her.

“Ooh, he nasty,” I heard one of the by standing females comment. I must not have been appallingly nasty because soon after those words escaped her mouth, she and a girlfriend rushed over to me and joined in. Four women dancing on me at the same time, damn, it really was my birthday.

I bit my lip as Bell Biv Devoe continued to pour out from the speakers, “She’s so fly, she’ll drive you right out of your mind, steal your heart when you’re blind. Beware she’s schemin’, she’ll make you think you’re dreamin’, you’ll fall in love and you’ll be screamin demon, hooooo”

“Watch out nigga, them bitches poison too,” my boy Roy hollered from across the room.

“Shut up,” his girl said slapping him in the arm.

I had all four of the girls bent over, backing asses up on me from every angle. Cocoa, who had shown me more attention than all of the other women that night, seemed jealous. She wrapped her arms around my neck and licked my earlobe. She was whispering something freaky I’m sure but the music was too loud and I couldn’t hear her. Not to mention the sexiest female I’d seen the whole night had just walked in.

“Fuck,” I mumbled to myself as I checked her out. Shawty was a sexy milk chocolate colored brown skin. She had long curly hair and what, from across the room, looked like pretty green eyes. She looked like she could have been a cross between every possible ethnicity. She had to be from some exotic island or something.

Cocoa finally got the drift that I was no longer paying attention to her and her sister, or any of the other women with their asses all up on me and each other. She rolled her eyes and sucked her teeth.

“Why don’t you go dance with her then,” she snapped.

I nodded, not exactly paying attention to what she had said then either for that matter.

“Willie… WILLIE!!”

“Huh?” I said finally snapping back.

She smirked, “You lucky it’s your birthday.”

I excused myself from the girls as I approached the sexy girl I’d been scoping out.

“How you doing?” I asked her

“I’m doing fine. Probably not as good as you’re doing,” she smiled and nodded toward the four females I’d been dancing with glaring angrily and hating on her. “You’re a regular Romeo aren’t you?”

I blushed, “Naw, it’s just my birthday.”

She giggled, “Well how about a birthday dance with a real woman.”

I was speechless. Shawty was bold and, although I had every intention to dominate the conversation, she was definitely in control.

“Hmm? Would that make you a very happy birthday boy?” She asked me seductively.

I nodded and bit down on my lip.

“What’s your name?” I asked her.

She ignored me, wrapped her arm around my neck, and began winding on me. Shawty was definitely from an island. Maybe Jamaica where women naturally move their bodies like snakes. I was mesmerized. It was almost as if I was getting my own private dance from a stripper. Whether or not she had her clothes on didn’t matter, I was still hard in the pants.

I didn’t know who this mystery lady was. Who the hell invited her in the first place was beyond me. I’d have to send them a thank you card a.s.a.p. She obviously didn’t want me to know her name which meant she was either secretive or she liked to play games. Either way I could tell right then and there that shawty was trouble but I aint give a damn. Trouble wrapped in a nice little package like this one would be worth it. Definitely worth it.

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I find Willie very amusing. . he must be the kind of boy that get anything he wants which probably is not goin` to happen in ole` girl`s case. Lol. . wonder what`s goin` to happen next. .

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quote:
I'm just me
Most people agree that I'm a bitch because I don't care for most things.
Some people think I'm heartless because I say what's on my mind
and don't give a damn who gets hurt by it.
Others think I'm mean because I just don't like talking to people in general.
Everybody wants to know how I can put up with all this shit
talking without so much as a reply back.
It's easy...if you just don't give a fuck.



Il mio MySpace<--Aggiungarmi (add me in italian Smiler)
AIM: xbabixgurl25
YIM: antiguan_babii617


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