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This used to be a script story but im changing it. So Please understand i had lost intrest on the old idea. But this one will be fresh and exciting Oh and new title to.
Old Title-Sweatin Me



Luna.
I looked at the test with my name on it. Luna Delane Ruiz.I blinked and began. Test were always hard for me. I thought long and hard for every answer, half the time i still get them wrong.Once i was done i turned it in and left the room. As i walked down the steps to the library someone called my name. I looked back to see Farren. Why the hell was he talking to me. I turned back around and continued my walk to the library.
"Damn Luna it's like that?" He asked me.
"Yeah it is" I said as i turned the corner.
"Come on girl dont be like that" I said.
"Farren thats the only way i am" I said and walked into the bathroom.
"Come on Luna i really want to talk to you"He said.
I opened the door and walked out. I stood in front of him waiting from him to talk.
"Look okay. I know we been having some problems but i just want you to know that i really do care for you." He said.
"Yeah what ever nigga" I said about to walk of.
"I know what i did was fucked up but please , please let me try it again i swear to you things will be different." He said.
" Aight Farren you aint got no other time to fuck up. Next time your done. Your gone got it?" I asked.
"Yes baby" He said smiling.
He came close to me and kissed my lips softly.
"Damn girl i missed that" He said and smiled.
I grabbed his hand and we walked into the library. I had a report due on monday. But i knew that not a soul would be there. We sat down at the computers. He got on myspace and i got my report out and ready. This year had been hard as hell. Its a good thing im graduating soon.
When i was done it was dark and i didnt even know if there was a door we could get out of. There was one and it was furthest from my car. Farren walked me to my car and watched me as i drove away. I reached for my radio and turned up the volume. My phone rang informing me i had a text message. I grabbed my phone and read the text message . All it said was look up. But when i did it was too late. The big truck had already hit me. All i saw was the bright ass lights. A few seconds later my world went balck.
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R.I.P To breezze aka Dionna. She lived for 15 years and died as of 11/30/08. We bid her farewell as she floats up to heaven. She will never have to hur again.

My StoriesThe Reason



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
Unique Critique

 
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who has khalid if noone does can i have him????


interesting so far im gettin into it so im hoping there will be more to come


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CHECK OUT THA SPACE
www.myspace.com/queenbitch626
iiM T3RR3LL WiiF3Y 4 LiiF3Y
 
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uhhhh ohhhhh imma post more tumorrow1 she bout ta get in trouble!


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R.I.P To breezze aka Dionna. She lived for 15 years and died as of 11/30/08. We bid her farewell as she floats up to heaven. She will never have to hur again.

My StoriesThe Reason



JaHari C E O.



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The down fall of a Model

The space page
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imma post more tumorrow im out!!


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R.I.P To breezze aka Dionna. She lived for 15 years and died as of 11/30/08. We bid her farewell as she floats up to heaven. She will never have to hur again.

My StoriesThe Reason



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
Unique Critique

 
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thanks 4 da part and i cant wait for more!!!!!!!


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***CAN YALL CHECK OUT MY STORIES***

(IM on the right)



The Pain Behind My Scars(repost)

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***THE FAM***

SISTERS
Diamond-tiwn
Bridgette-lil sis
Danielle-older sis
GOD SISTERS
Ri
Nesha aka sunshine
Cuzins
Taneia
Monica

CAST CALL INFO


Name:Bria aka Br33zy Or br33zybayb
Man:Trey,LLoyd,Blue,SPec,Reggie Bush or WHoever
Age:whatever fits
Kids:None
Personality:Im about Being real and being me.I dont care if u dont like me becuz i will not change for anyone.Im not into playing games and i hate people that try to act as if they are better than everyone else.I love to have fum and chill with my friends and i love to read and write.I really dont care to much for school but i do what i gotta do cuz i plan to suceed in life and if thats not on your agenda then i cant mess with u.
 
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BUMPIEZ


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***CAN YALL CHECK OUT MY STORIES***

(IM on the right)



The Pain Behind My Scars(repost)

Until I Met Him

***THE FAM***

SISTERS
Diamond-tiwn
Bridgette-lil sis
Danielle-older sis
GOD SISTERS
Ri
Nesha aka sunshine
Cuzins
Taneia
Monica

CAST CALL INFO


Name:Bria aka Br33zy Or br33zybayb
Man:Trey,LLoyd,Blue,SPec,Reggie Bush or WHoever
Age:whatever fits
Kids:None
Personality:Im about Being real and being me.I dont care if u dont like me becuz i will not change for anyone.Im not into playing games and i hate people that try to act as if they are better than everyone else.I love to have fum and chill with my friends and i love to read and write.I really dont care to much for school but i do what i gotta do cuz i plan to suceed in life and if thats not on your agenda then i cant mess with u.
 
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R.I.P To breezze aka Dionna. She lived for 15 years and died as of 11/30/08. We bid her farewell as she floats up to heaven. She will never have to hur again.

My StoriesThe Reason



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
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BUMPS NEED ANOTHER ADD



ooo-mmm-gee who da FUCK is dat nigga 4-Play known 2 me as 4-PLY tissue paper

4-ply big ol i think imma replace pleasure lookin ass
ol i wanna be tall da every 1 in da group lookin ass
ol i made da group hit rock bottom when they choose me lookin ass
last but not least oh it not 4-ply it 4-play lookin ass
 
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i like it so far add more


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i'll add later todaii


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R.I.P To breezze aka Dionna. She lived for 15 years and died as of 11/30/08. We bid her farewell as she floats up to heaven. She will never have to hur again.

My StoriesThe Reason



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
Unique Critique

 
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