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Author:Breezze
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I thought she was the one, my angel, the girl I was to love for the rest of my life. But She wasnt. She was amazing, brown eyes 5,5 coke bottle shape and sholder length brownish black hair with blondish highlights. She was a "demon in angels clothing" as my grandmother so atquantly put it. My grandmother never thought any woman was right for me. She raised me and my brother Kevin after my mother left. My father was dead before I was even born. The way grandma spoke of him he would have there for us every step of the way. Too bad we never got to meet him. Grandma used to tell us stories about him and my mother all the time. But when our father died she was devastated crushed even. And soon after we were born she , went crzy I guess. Grandma never spoke of what happened to her. She just kept sayin'
"Lyle dont you be worryin' bout that mother of yours. She done sold her soul to the devil now dont you do the same." I never knew what she meant. And I dared never to ask her either. Grandma was with me when I met Aviva, I went and got grandma from her weekly checkup at the doctor's office and Aviva was bringing her out in a wheelchair. I was stunned that even she could pull off that taky intern outfit she was wearing. My grandmother was complaing about Aviva so I made it quick. I got the number and I indeed intended on calling her. Once Aviva was out of ear shot grandma went off on this long tirade of why I shouldn't go out with her. I had never disobeyed my grandmother before but this time I had to. She was mad at first she tole me I would lear from this mistake. Man do I wish I would Have listened to her.

January 5th-2003
I was sitting on the porch listening to my grandparents argue when my bestfriend Gina walked up. Her smile faded when she heard the arguing.
"Thye still going at it?" She asked.
"All morning." I said patting the seat on the step next to me.
"So what are we doing this week end?" She asked.
"Uh will its Monday.. and you want to know about the weekend?" I questioned.
"Yes i do." She said nodding her head.
"I guess we could go to the movies." I said.
"Lyle, and see what?" She asked with her head turned to the side.
"Bringing Down the house." I said smiling. I really wanted to see that movie.
"Aight cool well I have to finish helping my sister pack for collage. She got a month left and you think she would have started early." She said with sarcasim in her voice.
"Ha ha" I joked with her as she jogged off back to her house.
I stood up and went inside the house to see if I could get my grand-parents to stop fighting.
"Look here Marie I done told your old ass I aint sleep with Anne-mae now you just go on bout your business.!" He said.
"Hey that is no way to talk to your wife let alone my grandmother like that." I said.
"Doesn't matter im leavin' anyway. Aint no good in stayin' here." He said and placed his hat back on his head and began to walk out the door. I grabbed grandma and took her to a chair. I went back to the kitchen and got her a glass of water.
"Oh thank you baby. Dont worry about him he will get his." She said.
"Grandma thats your husband." I said.
"Not anymore baby, Not anymore." She said.

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Bumpz
This story is really good so far
Keep going
 
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Fact:Yes shawty fresh yeah shawty bad yeah i had ya man and yes i know you mad.-Dont be fooled I made this shit.
-Fuck it I'm to pretty.-Rick Ross
-I'm comming straight from the district of corruption baby Yep thats D.C. Im kick bushes ass out iM so presidential so Im warmin up the seat for Obama baby..
-The precious gift of love give to me from you...hmmm...take that shit back and exchange it for some gum =]

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I like it!!! KEEP GOING!! UPZZ!


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Thank you as well.


Fact:Yes shawty fresh yeah shawty bad yeah i had ya man and yes i know you mad.-Dont be fooled I made this shit.
-Fuck it I'm to pretty.-Rick Ross
-I'm comming straight from the district of corruption baby Yep thats D.C. Im kick bushes ass out iM so presidential so Im warmin up the seat for Obama baby..
-The precious gift of love give to me from you...hmmm...take that shit back and exchange it for some gum =]

My StoriesThe Reason



Angel



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
Unique Critique

 
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Fact:Yes shawty fresh yeah shawty bad yeah i had ya man and yes i know you mad.-Dont be fooled I made this shit.
-Fuck it I'm to pretty.-Rick Ross
-I'm comming straight from the district of corruption baby Yep thats D.C. Im kick bushes ass out iM so presidential so Im warmin up the seat for Obama baby..
-The precious gift of love give to me from you...hmmm...take that shit back and exchange it for some gum =]

My StoriesThe Reason



Angel



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
Unique Critique

 
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upps


Fact:Yes shawty fresh yeah shawty bad yeah i had ya man and yes i know you mad.-Dont be fooled I made this shit.
-Fuck it I'm to pretty.-Rick Ross
-I'm comming straight from the district of corruption baby Yep thats D.C. Im kick bushes ass out iM so presidential so Im warmin up the seat for Obama baby..
-The precious gift of love give to me from you...hmmm...take that shit back and exchange it for some gum =]

My StoriesThe Reason



Angel



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
Unique Critique

 
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dude, how many fucking stories do you have?


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bumpies breeze.
its good. =] add more.


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thank you.
Enough for me.


Fact:Yes shawty fresh yeah shawty bad yeah i had ya man and yes i know you mad.-Dont be fooled I made this shit.
-Fuck it I'm to pretty.-Rick Ross
-I'm comming straight from the district of corruption baby Yep thats D.C. Im kick bushes ass out iM so presidential so Im warmin up the seat for Obama baby..
-The precious gift of love give to me from you...hmmm...take that shit back and exchange it for some gum =]

My StoriesThe Reason



Angel



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
Unique Critique

 
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too damn many.


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bumps


Poem
lately things have been hard,im always rooting for you but recently I've lost that connection,it's true. I'm sort of laughing with those other guys ,losing the hearing drowning your sound. I guess it's sad cause you think i'm tied down......
soundtrack
Cause when you love someone
You just don't treat them bad
Oh how I feel so sad
Now that I wanna leave
He's crying his heart to me
How could you let this be?
Boy i'm just tryna' see
where I wanna be...
 
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upsz!!!


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Month One Mommy, I am only 8 inches long, but I have all my organs. I love the sound of your voice. Every time I hear it, I wave my arms and legs. The sound of your heart beat is my favorite lullaby.

Month Two Mommy, today I learned how to suck my thumb. If you could see me, you could definitely tell that I am a baby. I'm not big enough to survive outside my home though. It is so nice and warm in here.

Month Three You know what Mommy, I'm a girl !! I hope that makes you happy. I always want you to be happy. I don't like it when you cry. You sound so sad. It makes me sad too, and I cry with you even though you can't hear me.

Month Four Mommy, my hair is starting to grow. It is very short and fine, but I will have a lot of it. I spend a lot of my time exercising. I can turn my head and curl my fingers and toes, and stretch my arms and legs. I am becoming quite good at it too.

Month Five You went to the doctor today. Mommy, he lied to you. He said that I'm not a baby. I am a baby Mommy, your baby. I think and feel. Mommy, what's abortion?

Month Six I can hear that doctor again. I don't like him. He seems cold and heartless. Something is intruding my home. The doctor called it a needle. Mommy what is it? It burns! Please make him stop! I can't get away from it! Mommy!! HELP me!! No . . .

Month Seven Mommy, I am okay. I am in Jesus's arms. he is holding me. He told me about abortion. Why didn't you want me Mommy?

Every Abortion Is Just . . . One more heart that was stopped. Two more eyes that will never see. Two more hands that will never touch. Two more legs that will never run. One more mouth that will never speak.

Put this in your signature if you don't belive in abortion!
 
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Thank you all.


Fact:Yes shawty fresh yeah shawty bad yeah i had ya man and yes i know you mad.-Dont be fooled I made this shit.
-Fuck it I'm to pretty.-Rick Ross
-I'm comming straight from the district of corruption baby Yep thats D.C. Im kick bushes ass out iM so presidential so Im warmin up the seat for Obama baby..
-The precious gift of love give to me from you...hmmm...take that shit back and exchange it for some gum =]

My StoriesThe Reason



Angel



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
Unique Critique

 
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Are you going to read it or not? You could at least criticize me on something while your here.


Fact:Yes shawty fresh yeah shawty bad yeah i had ya man and yes i know you mad.-Dont be fooled I made this shit.
-Fuck it I'm to pretty.-Rick Ross
-I'm comming straight from the district of corruption baby Yep thats D.C. Im kick bushes ass out iM so presidential so Im warmin up the seat for Obama baby..
-The precious gift of love give to me from you...hmmm...take that shit back and exchange it for some gum =]

My StoriesThe Reason



Angel



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
Unique Critique

 
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