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Title;Appetite
Author;Melanie
Start Date;6.21.09
End Date; --
Motel 21 Productions.




I walked down the noisy hall with my rolling travel case behind me, footballs flying over my head, chicks trying to look cute for guys butt naked with towels around them walking from the showers to their rooms. The co-ed dorms. Not the best place to be your freshman year. Not to me atleast. I glanced down at my paper, read room "209" and walked faster when I noticed I was near it. I opened the door and the scent of warm vanilla sugar invaded my nose.

"Breona?" said an obviously gay latino guy sitting at a wooden desk by his claimed bed smiling.

I nodded smiling back. "You must be Brendan?"

"Yes girl!" He said loudly. "Hmm, Breona and Brendan that sure as hell will be lookin' good on that door mami." he said snapping.

"So, what brings you to a nice school like UCLA?" I asked him.

"Marcus Cooper."

"...what?" I said throwing my luggage case on my bed.

"I'm joking. Business and Marketing. But I did see that fine peice of chocolate roaming these halls before I got in here." He laughed crossing his legs.

"Who is that, name sounds familiar."

"You know, that guy...he was with that group..." He said looking in the sky like God was going to tell him what the name of it was.

"Oooh, THAT group." I said folding up underwear and putting them in my drawer.

"Yes. So you pledging?"

"Delta baybee!" I said.

"Alright then, I guess you and Mr.Cooper can make a good couple then since he's pledging Omgea Psi Phi"

"Oh really, well, i'll make sure I get you his number at the Greek Freshman Ball tonight." I laughed.

"Girl please." He said turning around and got back to whatever he was doing before I came in.

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Not good with intros lol. Oh yeah, adds WILL be much longer

than that I promise. 
 
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i want the other one back. Frowner


* Robert ...


"Nobody gone know yo body like I know yo body." - Pleasure P (swaggg)
 
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It ` s fine as an intro . I ` m just used to the first entry having stuff like the title , start date , etc . in it . It ` s good so far though . Gay guys make me happy .


-------- LOVE IS BLIND

XXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Urban Word.
motel21.

story ;
site ;
 
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- reads.


* Robert ...


"Nobody gone know yo body like I know yo body." - Pleasure P (swaggg)
 
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Hm. I like.
Seems interesting.
Bumps.


Thee sig:
My words are just a reflection.
I'm deep like the ocean.
I wish you could see the truth.
 
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quote:
I ` m just used to the first entry having stuff like the title , start date , etc .


Will Do. 


quote:
i want the other one back.



 Aww Neka you'll like this one :D 
 
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I likes. The intro is good.


R.I.P Taylis Taylor*You Will Always Be Missed*




 
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Mel, I like already!

Add some more! Wink






HAPPY2009
 
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okay i dig it. lolz Big Grin
UPZ !


* Robert ...


"Nobody gone know yo body like I know yo body." - Pleasure P (swaggg)
 
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Upz...I like the intro...Keep going...


Love da stori...holla

Stories by Janae

Say It Isn‘t So… Your Child ((Marcus Joint)) Unexpected |Janae|

Newest

Not So Perfect

New Siggy

BOREDOM

 
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okay i dig it. lolz
UPZ !


LMAO! 
 
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Major kudos ESPECIALLY because my hubby is in this oneee.
=DDD


the hancock is official ;

only carry plastic no cash ;

fuck around & waste time sweatin' me;

& loose ya nigga, leave you broken like you was in a car crash .


i am & will FOREVER be, BEE.
 
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Bumps.


Thee sig:
My words are just a reflection.
I'm deep like the ocean.
I wish you could see the truth.
 
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C ` mon ! Gimme more !


-------- LOVE IS BLIND

XXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Urban Word.
motel21.

story ;
site ;
 
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