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Hot Commodity! Just another word for hot product. I believe Trina describe it well in her song Hot Commodity. Even though Trina tried to explain the true definition I, Nicole Anderson can tell you what a hot commodity is in full details. I can share with you the ups and downs of being a hot product. I can bring you into my world and show you the real meaning of being a HOT COMMODITY.

Chapter 1

My Brother

Flipping through an edition of jet magazine I saw the model of the week. She sported a pink swim suit that barely covered her body. She had long hair that looked as if it was made out of silk. Her chocolate smooth skin glowed. Amazingly beautiful would be how I would describe her.

"Ohhh shit look at this hoe right here!" My brother Todd snatched the magazine out of my hands and showed it to his boy Sean.

"That bitch bad!" Sean exclaimed.

Sean, his name seem to melt on my tongue. He was beautiful. His coffee skin tone was absolutely divine. His eyes were dark as coal and very mysterious. His lips were curved into a perfect cupids bow. At the age of 16 he had a muscular frame that was hard not to stare at. At that time our 2 year age difference made him never notice me.

"Man this year we need to get some hoes like her on our team ya feel me" Todd was 16 too. He loved any girl with a big ass or some Tiffany AKA New York titties. The girl could look like raw head rex in the face but if her body was on point he would still try to holla.

"I heard that nigga! Ima get up with you tomorrow though. First day of school gonna be on point!" Sean told Todd

"You already know my nigga. I'll scoop you up in the morning" Todd dapped Sean up

"Aight nigga I'm out" Sean proceeded to leave.

"Bye Sean" I said but he didn't hear me.

"Get off that niggas nuts" My brother retorted at me

I gave him the middle finger and went to my room. My first day of high school was only 10 hours away. I was excited and nervous at the same time. I felt that high school was my big step into the young adult hood. Little did I know I would skip the young adult hood and step right into adult hood






Yes I'm a newbie and yes I wrote a story. No its not the best but we all have to start somewhere. Please save the drama for somebody that cares. Thanx Big Grin

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i likes !
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her brother and his homeboy are doqs !
but qood start !
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sounds good so far...ups




quote:
I'm just me
Most people agree that I'm a bitch because I don't care for most things.
Some people think I'm heartless because I say what's on my mind
and don't give a damn who gets hurt by it.
Others think I'm mean because I just don't like talking to people in general.
Everybody wants to know how I can put up with all this shit
talking without so much as a reply back.
It's easy...if you just don't give a fuck.



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im feelin this one alot




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Ooooh! Me likey!
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Big Grin



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I'm glad yall like it Big Grin I'll add tomorrow when I get out of school

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Bumpz 2 da fullest
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can i be in it plz?




My lovely sunshine of a brotha, I miss him like home!!

All New Orleans Katrina Kids Click here !!
my bangin storys
When it All Falls Down!!
love is a bitch nigga
~~~~~~my siggyinfo:~~~~~~
Name: Ariel a.k.a ariee or lil n.o
Age: 18-22
Man: pleasure, j. holiday, Chris brown, Maurice, Dwayne wade (that boy is sexy)
Kids: 1 or 2
Boy: Elijah
Girl: areiyon ne'chelle
Personality: wild, crazy, goofy, shy at times, ghetto, sweet, ppl person, freak wit her man
Job: student, teacher, journalist

I lOv3 mY f@M!lY
*Neka(real best friend) *
Shan~Momz
B!g sis~ Quinesha @.k@ N3n3
L!L SiS ~ Ashley @.k.@ L3l3
¤U.L.L.¤Unique Ladiii Lala¤ lil sis
*SHAWTY*LADY*LE-LE* ~lil sis
Quivadise A.k.a Mz.Oreo ~ Lil sis

*
My Girlz

~WeEzY'S anGEls~
>>>Me<<< 9's finest $Ariee Babee$
7th ward shawty %Nene Babeiy%
Queen of tha bestbank *westbank bookey*
Uptown stomping ground ^ Janae Babii ^
*3rd W@rd Lele*

Email
n.o2cute2boot@yahoo.com
yim:
n.o2cute2boot
nEw OrLeAnS iN tHe BuIlDiNg
I’LL LOVE RESSE FOREVER BUT FOR NOW, HE HOLDS MY HEART




What`s an exotic lady? We`re E X O T I C but U N I Q U E . we`re thee clique that has class and potential.... exotic ladies show high elegance and don`t take anything from anyone . Exotic Ladies is a sisterhood who show pride in their creativity and beauty . Exotic Ladies are unique but just like DJ Khaled we`re the best!


 
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dis stpry is really good so far.....add more soon

p.s. u are doin pretty gud ta b a newbie


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