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Main Characters

Mylani AKA Ani/
Spectacular AKA spec

Talani AKA Tai= Your twin sister

Arab= Taliani's Boyfriend

Marcus AKA Pleasure=Your Bestfriened



Faith=Friend

Saray AKA Ray/Corey AKA Slick

Diamond AKA Blue

Jada/Chris


FAMILY
Kimora lee Simmons/Russel Simmons

Zahara AKA z(right)/lil sister/4 yrs old/

Layah AKA Lay(left)/6 yrs old


z-(cryin)ani, ani wake up
u-(pickin her up)wats wrong z baby....why u cryin
z-da backyardigans went off and dey not comin back(cryin)
u-(smilin and wipin her tears)come on z dont cry i'll turn it back on for u
z-(snflin)ok ani

*u went in her room and turned her show back on.*

z-thank u ani
u-u welcome baby

*u walked to ur room den washed up wen u heard a knock at ur door.*

u-who iz it
tai-its me
u-come in

*She walked into ur room.*

u-wats sup tai
tai-(sittin on ur bed)nuthin but pleasure downstairs
u-oh ight
u-wheres arab
tai-in my room
u-u lil nasties(smilin)
tai-i kno u aint talkin as much as u and spec be all up on eachotha
u-anyways get out heffa
tai-(laughin)fine den

*u walked downsaturs and seen pleasure layin on da couch and u went and sat on his stomach.*

pleasure-hey baby
u-(kissin his cheek)hey boo
u-wat u doin here so early
pleasure-i cant kick it wit my #1
u-(smilin)i was just askin punk
pleasure-(laughin)neva dat boo
u-mmmmhh*just den ur phone began to ring and u opened it and began to read a text message from spec.*

spec-u gon come through
u-i'm wit pleasure right noe
spec-ani yes or no mane
u-spec why dont u come ova here
spec-fuck it ani, and u wonder why we dont spend no time together
u-why are u actin like dat daym specacular
spec-its watever ma just holla at me wen u not busy

*u closed ur phone and sucked ur teeth.*

pleasure-wats wrong ur nigga trippin
u-yea a lil(irritated)
pleasure-ani go kick it wit him
u-no im wit u right now
pleasure-yea but u gon have dat salty ass atitude so u might as well go see ol dude
u-(pokin it ur lip)but i wana stay wit u
pleasure-dont trip boo i'll pick u up tomorrow and we got all day to kick it ight
u-ok(kissin his cheek)thank u baby
pleasure-it aint no thang ima hit u up lata
u-kay(gettin off of him)
pleasure-(standin up)gimmie hug

*u wrapped ur arms round his neck and he pecked u softly.*

u-love u
pleasure-love u to ma
layah-(jumpin into his arms)hey pleasure
pleasure-sup lah(kissin her cheek)ima see u lata mama
lay-ok




Comments yall and ima add.....


She is gettin soo big!!

My baby on her 1st birthday!!!





My beautiful banner that breeze made for me thanks girl!!!


 
Posts: 159 | Registered: 22 July 2008Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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Try writing this in novel form.
 
Posts: 1940 | Location: Somewhere listeninq to Lupe && GCH | Registered: 30 December 2007Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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Well its already written out but i've been thinking about trying that wit my next story that i write...thanks though!!!


She is gettin soo big!!

My baby on her 1st birthday!!!





My beautiful banner that breeze made for me thanks girl!!!


 
Posts: 159 | Registered: 22 July 2008Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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(girl you know that i love)
Girl i love you with her that was lust
(yea)
Shouldn't have happened I know I messed up
(yea yea)
One phone call started this whole thing now Look at the damage
(the damage)
Look at the damage
(the damage)
The damage, damage that I caused you, I know I broke your heart
Cause I did you wrong now look at the damage that I've caused.


- - - - - - but you`re just a boy.


*thanks neka.
 
Posts: 2738 | Location: up the street, around da corner. | Registered: 07 May 2008Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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*Pleasure left and u went up stairs and changed into thisshirtand these shorts. You then wen into your closet and found theseflip flops. u put ur hair in a dounut bunand put ur bags in a swoop.U walked downstairs into da kitchen and saw arab.*

u-hey bro
arab-sup ma
u-(grabbin a poptart)wat u doin in my kitchen negro
arab-niggas gotta eat too, where u headed
u-to spec's
arab-tell dat nigga i said wats sup
u-ight bye

*u got in ur carand drove to Spec's house. U got outta da car and knocked on da door.Spec came to da door wit a mad look on his face but it softend once he saw it was u.*

spec-i thought u was wit marcus
u-well now im wit u

*u walked through da door and seen faith sittin on da couch.*

u-hey faith wat u doin here girl
faith-just finishen up our project but i was bout to leave so call me lata
u-ok bye
faith-bye ani, bye spec
soec-ight den

*she left and spec sat down on da couch and pulled u on to his lap and kissed da side of ur neck a couple of times.*

u-i see ur done PMSIN
spec-i neva was
u-watever spec
spec-(pinchin ur side)
u-owee dat hurt(hittin his cheast)
spec-quit sayin watever to me
u-(silent)
spec-i aint tlakin to myself
u-ok spec(slidin off his lap)
spec-quit poutin aint nobody hurt u girl(grabbin u)
u-leave me alone
spec-chill out ani u kno u dont want me to leave u alone do u(gettin inbetween ur legs and kissin u)
spec-how long u gon love me baby
u-(smirckin)until da end
spec-dats ur word my destiny

Author's Note::He sometimes calls u that because he says ur his destiny

u-isnt it always
spec-(kissin u passionately)tell me it is
u-it is babe(wrappin ur arms round his neck)
spec-it better be
u-(smilin)

*He carried u up to his room and made love to u. Ur feelings for spec are so deep u cant even began to explain den. U layed ontop of spec as he ran his fingers through ur hair and kissed on ur forehead.*

spec-u stayin wit me tonight(strokin ur hair)
u-mmmhh(s/v)
spec-i love u
u-until da end baby


[COLOR:BLUE]Add comin again soon comments yall....!!!

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She is gettin soo big!!

My baby on her 1st birthday!!!





My beautiful banner that breeze made for me thanks girl!!!


 
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the baby in the siggy is cuteeeeee
 
Posts: 2736 | Registered: 06 January 2008Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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Lol Thanks dats my lil baby girl


She is gettin soo big!!

My baby on her 1st birthday!!!





My beautiful banner that breeze made for me thanks girl!!!


 
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Come on yall comment plz i see people are reading but not leaving any comments.....


She is gettin soo big!!

My baby on her 1st birthday!!!





My beautiful banner that breeze made for me thanks girl!!!


 
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*u fell asleep in his arms and at 6am u heard Spec's alarm clock go off.*

spec-(smackin ur ass)wake up girl
u-(whinnin)spectacular ooowww u aint got to hit me shit
spec-aaawww she ctin like a baby
u-fuck u(grabbin da sheet and gettin up)
spec-wen right now gladly(followin behind u)
u-ur such an asshole
spec-i love u to sexy(puttin his dick against ur butt)
u-(smilin)
spec-there go my smile(takin da sheet from around ur body)
u-(kissin him)ur goin to mke us late for school spec
spec-(pickin u up)but u want it dont u
u-(half moanin)spec stoop it

*Spec put u agaonst da wall and put his dick deeply in u and u moaned out loudly and dpec kissed u to muffle ur moans. He gripped ur shaking thighs tighter and thrust harder.*

spec-(manin)mmm destiny u feel so good
u-ummm baby(wrappin ur legs tighter round him)
spec-daym girl(grabbin ur breast)

*30mins lata u guys came and u got in da shower. U changed into a blue and white babyhpat halter top wit some white capris. U put ur hair in water fall curls and put on some cute heels. u and spec got in da car and he looked u up and down and licked his lips.*


spec-i don like dem pants
u-why not
spec-cause dey too tight
u-no they arent
spec-dont wear dem no more
u-(lookin at him lik he's crazi)and since wen do u tell me wat to wear my daddy dont even tell me wat to wear
shad-u heard me ani

*Da rest of da ride was silent u hated wen he tryed to demand u and shit like u were pose to do wat he tells u. u guys got to school and u saw da crew.*

faith-hey spec
spec-sup(irritated)
tai-spec isnt da only one standin here
ray-farreal
u-anyways, hey guys
e/b-hey, sup ect.

Author's Note::no one really likes faith but u

blue-nigga wats wrong wit u(talkin to spec)
spec-nuthin im out, faith lets go work on our project
faith-ok
tai-umm u aint goin to say bye to ani spec
spec-she got a mouth(kept walkin)
arab-wats wrong wit him ani
u-he's actin like a bitch
u-im goin to study hall
tai-ight sissy u betta watch dat girl wit ur man
ray-farreal
u-ight u guys


She is gettin soo big!!

My baby on her 1st birthday!!!





My beautiful banner that breeze made for me thanks girl!!!


 
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COME ON YALL GET ADD NO MORE TILL I GET SOME COMMENTS!!! Smiler


She is gettin soo big!!

My baby on her 1st birthday!!!





My beautiful banner that breeze made for me thanks girl!!!


 
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Can ii be in dis && wid marcus....


__________________________
NAME::Paige Brown

Nickname: Muffin , Pooh, New New,
Twix

AGE::16 or 18

PERSONA:Big Grinown To Earth, Goofy, Shy If I Just Met You,Shy to sing around a whole of ppl, Boi-crazi,Always Trying To Make Someone Happy, Always Trys To Help Even If I Know I Cant, Funny, Loves Music, Not a fighter buh if yuh mess wit ma fam, friendsz or me, expect to get cussed out, Unless Someone threatinsz Me First, Likes To Have The Last Word, Truthful , Always Says Whats On My Mind. Loves Life And Plans To Live It To the Fullest, sorta scary

KYDSZX::A GiRl NaM3D S3R3NiTY n' A Boii NaM3D Rickii Gomez

___________________________
Month One Mommy, I am only 8 inches long, but I have all my organs. I love the sound of your voice. Every time I hear it, I wave my arms and legs. The sound of your heart beat is my favorite lullaby.

Month Two Mommy, today I learned how to suck my thumb. If you could see me, you could definitely tell that I am a baby. I'm not big enough to survive outside my home though. It is so nice and warm in here.

Month Three You know what Mommy, I'm a girl !! I hope that makes you happy. I always want you to be happy. I don't like it when you cry. You sound so sad. It makes me sad too, and I cry with you even though you can't hear me.

Month Four Mommy, my hair is starting to grow. It is very short and fine, but I will have a lot of it. I spend a lot of my time exercising. I can turn my head and curl my fingers and toes, and stretch my arms and legs. I am becoming quite good at it too.

Month Five You went to the doctor today. Mommy, he lied to you. He said that I'm not a baby. I am a baby Mommy, your baby. I think and feel. Mommy, what's abortion?

Month Six I can hear that doctor again. I don't like him. He seems cold and heartless. Something is intruding my home. The doctor called it a needle. Mommy what is it? It burns! Please make him stop! I can't get away from it! Mommy!! HELP me!! No . . .

Month Seven Mommy, I am okay. I am in Jesus's arms. he is holding me. He told me about abortion. Why didn't you want me Mommy?

Every Abortion Is Just . . . One more heart that was stopped. Two more eyes that will never see. Two more hands that will never touch. Two more legs that will never run. One more mouth that will never speak.

Put this in your signature if you don't belive in abortion!


++__________
paige
Mz.Spec
Mz.N3WN3W2008
Mz.Pooh Bear
 
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this is really good, add more pls!!!



 
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Cast Call Info:
Name: Kerrian aka babi cakez
Age: 14 (or wateva age u need
Man: Chris Brown, Zay Zay (from da lax boyz), Lil' Fizz, or Soulja Boy
Role: lil sis, bestfriend, cousin
Pic-
Personality: loves to rap and play basketball. Im goofy, n crazy. lovesz 2 have fun i love to laugh, im rude to people i dont like. people say im mean but i personally think im da nicest person in da world. looks innocent but im not. im a lover not a fight but i will fight if i have to. im a ride or die chick n im down 4 ma cliq. always has an attitude.

DA FAM
SiSTA:WHiTNEY
SiSTA:RiSSA
BiG SiS:QUOiA
AUNTiE:MESHA
NiECE:TiERA
COUSiN:KRYS
COUSiN:WAYNE
COUSiN:SHONDA
GODSiSTA:NESHA
LiL SiS:POOH BABY
LiL SiSTA: DEE-DEE
FRiEND:LORi
BiG SiSTA: AiESHA
LiL SiSTA: SHAY AKA LOVELiiE
LiL SiSTA:TASHAUNNA AKA SHAUNNA
NiECE: ASHLEY
 
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