If i gave a summary if would tell you what was going to happen. And thats not what i intend to do. And all of this is just something im bouncing around in my head.
I still have editations to make it's not official

i like thee second part better.

Thats what i was saying if i would have added that to the first part you wouldnt have thought it was typical.

i think you should take out thee
part about her brother, and dad.
So people can just figure that out
during thee story. then add that 2nd part.

okay thanks. I dont want to put this story up yet though. I will discontinue my other 2 stories if i do one was stopped twice and i dont want to do that again.

awright.

But when i do pu this one out it will a very interesting sotry and i think some will like it

uppz

wondering.....

up

i need feed back

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Phukk that