Would you read this if i put it on the board?
[After i finished my story The Reason]


Bloody DayDreams.
Writtien By: Breezze
Its Not actually written yet. Its more of a thought and Idea.


_{I parted my lips to speak but all i got was the back of his hand. I dropped to the floor and balled in the fetal position. I was used to this position. It happened everytime we swung his hard clenched fists at my frail body. I peeked and eye open when i felt the blows stop.
"Why do you insist on making me hurt you Trey?" He asked me
That was me. My name was Platreya Patirce Dean. I lived here with Dom. He was my boyfriend of 3 years. I have known him since i ran away. I am now 18 and i want to get away but i believe it's impossible. I didnt know how to go about it. Dom was always watching me. He had a time when he was gentle but mostly agressive and violent. See Dom grew up in the very same invironment i did. I grew up in The projects of Brooklyn. It was very hard to overcome the passive and destructive vibes of the family Drama. My mother was killed by her husband Gorege Standoff.He was not my dad but he was my little sister Keli's Dad. He was tall and drakskinned and never liked me and my brother. He wasnt ever convictd of the murder of my mother so he continued to take care of my sister. My sister would always share her over stuffed plate with me at dinner time. When my older brother came back from collage he stayed with us. Gorege always made sure he was polite to me. But one day my brother who's name is Trevone happened to come home and find me in the tub unconcious. He beat gorege to a bloody pulp and told him to never come back there. He took care of us untill he accuired AIDS and died. It was a very weary time for us. I was only 16. So i did the unthinkable and dropped my sister off at my grandmothers. In the mean time i met Dom. He was 21 and he was sweet. He let me move in with him. He was nice untill he cought me sucking his bestfriends dick for some money. It is now hard to even think of being unfaithful to him with out being slapped around a bit. Every woman needs to be put in her place. But if this abuse continues then i will be in a place forever. And it wont be earth.}

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I like it. Naw scratch that I love it!

lol.. Its just a idea after im done with The Reason.

it just seems like thee typical
abuse story,

Thats because i only gave you a little if i would have went into it and went all out. Its isnt typical.. And nothing i write is typical except for
-SuperHuamn

i think you could explain thee story
more without giving thee whole thing
away, because as of now, and based
on what i read it`s typical.

I get what you saying i was just saying instead of doing all of that. I could have made it longer to give you a better Idea of what im thinking of

Keep goin Breezze.

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, and based
on what i read it`s typical.

i know like you could`ve wrote it.
More like a whole-story summary
instead of a piece of thee story,
and already telling us about her life.

You get it?
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Keep goin Breezze.

LMAO don`t die.

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LMAO don`t die.

Wtf are you talkin bout?

don`t worry about it.

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Originally posted by streetshit.:
don`t worry about it.

Sure.

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_{September 8th 2007
My eyes fluttered open to a very bright scene. What the hell was this? All i could see were colorfull flurries and dark shadows.
"Trey?" I heard a voice say.
"Natalia?" I asked.
"Yes im over here." She said and i looked in the direction where i heard the voice. I was tired so i laid my head back down.
"Its going to be okay love" I heard her say. I smiled as she came close to me with a sharp object. My smile faded as she raised it in the air and pentrated my body with it. My eyes flew open this time to an empty room. I raised up and walked to the door with the glass window. Another day in the rehabilitation center. A very hard and tiring place to be. Not very live. Usually not a place you want to spend time in. This time i couldnt figure out why i was here. Tiffany, the only doctor that would attempt to help me came and unlocked my door. I was sorry for what i was about to do but i had to break free. Without warning i struck her in the head. I grabbed her keys and bounded out the door. Running for my life. I passed up the gaurds and unlocked the front doors to my freedom. I ran down barkley street. I would no longer live the way i did. He was no longer in control of my life. But where exactly would i go?}