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Hey peeps since i did promise some of you slick'em fans a story about him since no one want to make but like 2 or 3 about him so ima make one. Well its from anotha board i used to be on, a msn Pretty ricky groups but i never finished it. So what ima do is bring i over here and re-start it and finish it here...so hopefully yall enjoy


CHARACTERS CONSIST OF:::
MAIN:: Zarita aka Z, and Ja'Cory aka Slick

OTHERS:: [will be introduced later in the story]

"Man, dont nobody wanna live in lame ass Miami," Zarita said all pissed off with her face scrunched up. "Look the judge ruled in favor of your mom for full custody, so you have to go," her dad said tryna reassure her there was nothing he could do. Still whining to get her way she continued,"but dad!" Having had enough of her babyish whining he slightly yelled,"but nothin!! Now go pack your stuff...you're leaving friday morning."Although it hurted him to say it he had no choice but to.
Zarita sighed a little but agreed and went on her way, "ok."

The name's Zarita aka "Z"...ok lemme get straight down to the point. So im livin da life up in chi-town,when I find out...I gotta move to miami with my crazy ass mom. First she broke, second she mental at times and third she a straight up hoe!!! I cnt stand dat woman, I dont see how im related to her, much less her own daughter. She could care less about anyone's feelings and how she treats them. To bad 5 years ago when my father left her she some how gained custody of my twin sister Zaria and my older brother Aidan. I miss them dearly but living with my mother aint goin be to peachy especially since we already hate each other. The only reason she got full custody of me was to get more money come tax time. Ol' broke golddigging bytch...pshh well let me go get packed...


May/26/01, exactly eight days before my birthday and ten days after her's. I had to bury my mama, the only one who ever believed in me enough to motivate me to be something and somebody. Everytime I think about her I cry but of course I neva allow anyone to see them tears. If anyone ever caught me dead crying shyt my rep' would be on the line and I aint tryna have that happen anytime. My thoughts were disturbed by my phone going off "A Milli, by Wayne."
Phone Convo::
Slick: yea

???: waz good baby

Slick: *smiles* hey Shawdae

Shawdae: you miss me?

Slick: now why you go and ask that for?

Shawdae: cuz I just wanna know.

Slick: you know I always do.

Shawdae: *smiles* want me to come over?

Slick: *looks at the time* umm hell yea.

Shawdae: ight...hold up ya pops not home right?

Slick: naw he gone for the weekend

Shawdae: oh goody i can stay the ight then

Slick: uhh, yea but call me when you on ya way ight shawty

Shawdae: ight baby

Slick: yea

End of Phone convo

Hmm Shawdae, Shawdae...what can i say bout her. Well once I was really feeling her back in middle school but now she kinda too loose but she still know how to get a ni&&a on tho. So hey ima keep dat numba in da celly till she worn out...yep dat how we do it down here

Z POV: I was still upset of course since i'm moving to Miami and leaving behind everything. My dad, bestfriend Janahyah, and the sweetest dude in this world, Evan. He my one and only and can't no dude ever, ever take his place or measure up to him. Anyways it was Friday morning and I know was boarding the plane. I looked back at my dad as a lone tear fell from his left eye. I wanted to run and hug him forever, cause me and him had father-daughter bond like no other. He been there since day one and now I had to leave him and for what? A stupid bitch of a mother. Turning my head my feet continued walking onto the plane but my heart stood still right in that airport and right in Chi-town forever...

OK I CHANGED HOW THE FIRST ADD WAS FROM THE FIRST TIME I TYPED THIS STORY CUZ THE OTHER ONE WAS BLAH...SO HOPEFULLY THIS WAS GOOD SO BUMP OR DUMP AND CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISIM PLEASE NO BASHING...THNX! Wink

This message has been edited. Last edited by: slicksnumba1[[RePs: DSC]],
 
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Good story! Smiler BUMPZ
 
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oooo yaya got another story lol upzz gurl

if u need anymore cast u alreadi kno i wanna b in it Smiler bumpzz


Cast Call Info:

Name: Jennifer aka Jen
Age:16 or w.e fits
Man: Spec, Plies, Trey Songz, Pleasure or who is available
Personality: Funni, down 4 her friendz, gud person, dedicated person
Role: whatever fitz best
Pic:





Hit me
All the chronic in the world couldn't even mess with you
You are the ultimate high
You know what i'm saying baby?
Now check this out
Take my money
My house and my cars
For one hit of you
You can have it all, baby
Cause makin love
Everytime we do
Girl it's worse than drugs
Cause i'm an addict over you
And you know that
I can't leave you alone
You got me feenin
Feenin you got me feenin
Got me goin crazy
I can't leave you alone
You got me feenin
Girl i'm feenin for you

Said i'm feenin for you
I don't have a mind
It's all blown on you, baby
Girl i'm so strung out
All i do is wish for you
So tomorrow if you're not here
Then girl i'm down
So i need you near
I just wanna make it through the night
So hold me tight
Then girl i'm alright
 
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thnx 4 da bumps and yep yaya gota new story lol and bump my story people and remember if it need improvement just let me know so i don't walk around with a bust up story Wink
 
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the intro was ok....can't wait to read a lil more so i can really get into it...also just proofread jus a lil ok lol...but other then that keep it comin =]












 
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thnx 4 da bumpz and tips and hey other folk read my it too and of course if you feeling it bump it up
 
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Girl: Am I pretty
Boy: No
Girl: Do you like me
Boy: No
Girl: If i walked away right now would you cry
Boy: No
Girl: (starts to walk away)
Boy: Your not pretty your beautiful, i don't like you i love you , and if you walked away right now i wouldn't cry i would die

~C/O 2009 Babii~ $up3R $t@R $3ni0R
 
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As I was sitting in the plane flying over florida all i could see were lovely palm trees and gorgeous beaches. Man this looked like a paradise but didn't and couldn't top chi-town. After the plane landed I slowly and miserably walked towards the outside of the airport. There i saw my mom eagerly standing waiting for my arrival. She was wearing a tight,leather,leopardd jumpsuit and then she tried to reach out to hug me but i held back.

Z's Mom:Zarita baby what's wrong
Z: *rollin her eyes*u know whats wrong
Mom: Z honey are'nt u glad to see me
Z: *suckin her teeth* can we just go now
Mom: *lookin sad and disappointed* uhh *pops gum* oh ok then

So we got in the car and the further she drove the worst the neighbor hood looked.No longer did i see paradise but now all i saw were runny nosed baebae kids running around. Pimps with hoes, thugs and gangsters alike and rowdy looking teens dancing in the streets. As the car pulled to an abrupt stop we pulled into a disgusting looking block. At first i thought it was jus the projects but it was mixed with lil ugly flat houses that looked abandoned but had folk sitting on the porches. Man i began to feel homesick until we pulled up to a small pink house. There was a medal fence surrounding it and a mini basketball hoop broken on the floor. Well basically the house looked busted up compared to what i'm used to seeing.The only thing that brought a smile to my face, was seeing my sister running out with warm welcoming arms.

Zaria: TWIN!!!
(she shouted,embracing me without letting me step out the car)
Z: RIA!! (I screamed in a high pitched voice while hugging her too)

Ok so after all that I walked into the house but to my surpise the inside matched the outside
just alike, it was awful.First off only two bedrooms, one bathroom and on top of that there was a family of three living there. So now im wondering how in the hell did my mom get the judge to rule in favor of her with this piece of crap as a so-called home!! Man I bet she slept with the judge and the damn plantiff. I laughed to myself, knowing she was most definetly capable of doing it too.

I walked around the house kinda hoping to see atleast something decent but it jus got worse with each step I took...I walked in a room where i could see two mattresses laid out side by side with a small closet and the next room had the same thing too.
Z: Ria!!
ria:*she came runnin quick* yes
Z: what da hell is dis?
ria: what?
Z: yall actually sleep in this hell hole every night
ria: yea..but dont worry the family who live here moving soon so that goin give us an opprtunity to fix the place up
Z:*chucklin kinda aggitated and mad* oh no,no I doubt this place goin eva luk decent

She now wore a look of embarassment on her face...

ria:lol um yea sure i guess

Z:where's tae

riaRed Face him he dont really live wit us no more

Z:what?why?

ria:he live full time on the streets and part time here

ZFrownershocked look)word! dng man can dis family get any worse

ria:*sigh*tell me about it

Z:so where u sleep at

ria:in here with ma on da otha mattress

ZRed Face wow!I came from a 6bedroom home wit 3bathrooms to this! mom must really hate me

ria:dont say that

Z:no it's true all our life she's been dictating it and when im fianlly happy with dad she goin mess it up

ria:well she's worked hard her whole life and she just tryna help us

Z:wtf is u tlkn bout mama done got in ur head

ria:no she has'nt(gettin kinda agitated)

Z:yea she has what happn to da ria who could'nt stand her

ria:well look u kno ur dad and i dont and mama da only parent i got right now so dammit if i wanna stick up for her dat wat im goin do

She slammed da rickety door and stormed out.

Z:*talking to self* whoa wat da hell was that?
[[o yea lemme explain da thing is me and ria are twins but got different daddies, yea weird huh i kno but dats how it is 2 tell da truth idk how dat happen but its all this science stuff]]

Lata on...
I got settled in the best I could and started 2 fall asleep till' my mom came in...
mom: baby are you hungry
Z: naw not really
mom: well i know you had a long flight...so I made your favorite
Z: *thins:wow she remembered my favorite*baked macaroni with spam
mom: *smiled* yup
Z: oh great i'll be out in a minute
Yea,yea i know what yall thinkin i dislike her but still her cooking is da bomb and a sistah was hungry,shoot ya feel me...

Saturday
Z pov
Doing what I do best I started writing a poem but the thing is when I put pen to paper all my emotion start 2 pour out like a waterfall. I wrote a five page poem about my dad and life back in chi-town. Then one of my departure. Man ima miss it back there, but I kno there's something I could do to go back but I just didn't know what yet...

SLICK POV:: Man as big as my rep' was down here truthfully I hated that. It was like everyone was scared of me...even the damn cops sometimes. The only people not afraid of me was my cousin, my brother and some of my bitches i kept on lock. Well they hard core females who play with fire like me no matter how many times they get burned. *Smiles to self* I admire chics like that but not the hoing type tho. But anyways I got some street business to take care of.

LATER ON...
Slick: man ni&&a this the last time ima ask for my money and you to hoe!

Referring to this dude he got running his left corner and got the dude girl working the right corner. Basically he was pimping her and bossing him. Now slick aint like to get violent but if he had to...trust he would. Not a good side either so people tend to stay on his good side.

girl: *close to tears* im so sorry slick iii-tts juu--ssstt daa---t

boy: *slaps her in the back of her head* damn girl quit stuttering fo' he kill us...damn!

slick: exactly!!! listen to him and man ima give yall this chance but this da last gotdamn friday im giving yall a chance for tho! so dat green betta be in my right muthafuxn left and right hand come next friday at 11:59 and nooo later den dat...ya digg?!?!



BUMP IT UP....HOPE YOU ALL ENJOYED SO STAY READIN FOR NEXT TIME AND YEA SLICK KINDA CRAZY IN THIS STORY LOL OH YEA AND IMA BE CHANGING THE NAME TO ::STEPS:: SO NEXT TIME YALL SEE DAT IT'LL STILL BE DA SAME STORY BUT JUST A DIFFERENT NAME OK HOLLA BYE...BYE!
Big Grin
 
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bump! i better be in here somewhere with 4play yaya or i'ma be mad i'm reading this lmao ! juss playing girl!! keep it coming


 
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waiiiit hold up

nah i wanna be with aidan fine ass !
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shiiit idk who i want girl
hook me up though !


 
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lol i wasn't taking request since this a story i made up a lil while back but you might fit in just right if you want aidan tho lol so since u my buddy on here sure why not but later on cuz that when he goin really be in the story
 
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yay! now u know i'ma be in here bumping until i get my mannnnnnnnnnnnnn wooot!


 
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lmao!!! yea i kno how u get and if liyah come in here she goin be doin da same thing
 
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