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La la- We read over your excerpt and found many errors. I decided to give you another chance to do it over. You should always got back and re-read.
Alaywa capitalize "I" when talking about yourself.
Always capitalize when starting a dialouge.
Example: "Shea ass is crazy."
Please re do your excerpt and try again.

Shavonne- Congradulations you have been accepted in to Jahari. While looking over your excerpt, we found only one thing incorrect goving you a 199 out of two hundred.

Monica: Congradulations you have been accepted into Jahari. I am the only one who looked over you application becuase you sent it to me through myspace. Condradualtions. And I hope we can help you continue your road to greatness.

Writing challenge comming soon!!!!!!!!!!
I need to speak with Tamiyah as well!


Fact:Yes shawty fresh yeah shawty bad yeah i had ya man and yes i know you mad.-Dont be fooled I made this shit.
-Fuck it I'm to pretty.-Rick Ross
-I'm comming straight from the district of corruption baby Yep thats D.C. Im kick bushes ass out iM so presidential so Im warmin up the seat for Obama baby..
-The precious gift of love give to me from you...hmmm...take that shit back and exchange it for some gum =]

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Congrats!!! We have new members!!! Woohoo!!!! lol


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yay! =]


Fact:Yes shawty fresh yeah shawty bad yeah i had ya man and yes i know you mad.-Dont be fooled I made this shit.
-Fuck it I'm to pretty.-Rick Ross
-I'm comming straight from the district of corruption baby Yep thats D.C. Im kick bushes ass out iM so presidential so Im warmin up the seat for Obama baby..
-The precious gift of love give to me from you...hmmm...take that shit back and exchange it for some gum =]

My StoriesThe Reason



Angel



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
Unique Critique

 
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welcome new members



I Marcus Cooper, take you Desire' to be my wife, my partner in life and my one true love. I will cherish our union and love you more each day than I did the day before. I will trust you and respect you, laugh with you and cry with you, loving you faithfully through good times and bad, regardless of the obstacles we may face together. I give you my hand, my heart, and my love, from this day forward for as long as we both shall live.
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Fact:Yes shawty fresh yeah shawty bad yeah i had ya man and yes i know you mad.-Dont be fooled I made this shit.
-Fuck it I'm to pretty.-Rick Ross
-I'm comming straight from the district of corruption baby Yep thats D.C. Im kick bushes ass out iM so presidential so Im warmin up the seat for Obama baby..
-The precious gift of love give to me from you...hmmm...take that shit back and exchange it for some gum =]

My StoriesThe Reason



Angel



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
Unique Critique

 
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[comes in from the back door] NEW MEMBERS! yay. welcome..[goes back out] Smiler


Siqqy Theme:|google ME|







Please read and bump dese followinq story
How That Special Sumone Chanqed My Life™ (.A Lauren && Spec Story.]

please BUMP & COMMENT! =]



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Aaliyah b.k.a. Lele is offically the shit.replay that..

closing down soon. gonna miss memories much.
 
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Fact:Yes shawty fresh yeah shawty bad yeah i had ya man and yes i know you mad.-Dont be fooled I made this shit.
-Fuck it I'm to pretty.-Rick Ross
-I'm comming straight from the district of corruption baby Yep thats D.C. Im kick bushes ass out iM so presidential so Im warmin up the seat for Obama baby..
-The precious gift of love give to me from you...hmmm...take that shit back and exchange it for some gum =]

My StoriesThe Reason



Angel



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
Unique Critique

 
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Originally posted by &&I|D I E D:
La la- We read over your excerpt and found many errors. I decided to give you another chance to do it over. You should always got back and re-read.
Alaywa capitalize "I" when talking about yourself.
Always capitalize when starting a dialouge.
Example: "Shea ass is crazy."
Please re do your excerpt and try again.

Shavonne- Congratulations you have been accepted in to Jahari. While looking over your excerpt, we found only one thing incorrect goving you a 199 out of two hundred.

Monica: Congratulations you have been accepted into Jahari. I am the only one who looked over you application becuase you sent it to me through myspace. Condradualtions. And I hope we can help you continue your road to greatness.

Writing challenge comming soon!!!!!!!!!!
I need to speak with Tamiyah as well!



some typos in there lol



But congrats yalls.






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lol.=]


Fact:Yes shawty fresh yeah shawty bad yeah i had ya man and yes i know you mad.-Dont be fooled I made this shit.
-Fuck it I'm to pretty.-Rick Ross
-I'm comming straight from the district of corruption baby Yep thats D.C. Im kick bushes ass out iM so presidential so Im warmin up the seat for Obama baby..
-The precious gift of love give to me from you...hmmm...take that shit back and exchange it for some gum =]

My StoriesThe Reason



Angel



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
Unique Critique

 
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Fact:Yes shawty fresh yeah shawty bad yeah i had ya man and yes i know you mad.-Dont be fooled I made this shit.
-Fuck it I'm to pretty.-Rick Ross
-I'm comming straight from the district of corruption baby Yep thats D.C. Im kick bushes ass out iM so presidential so Im warmin up the seat for Obama baby..
-The precious gift of love give to me from you...hmmm...take that shit back and exchange it for some gum =]

My StoriesThe Reason



Angel



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
Unique Critique

 
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Fact:Yes shawty fresh yeah shawty bad yeah i had ya man and yes i know you mad.-Dont be fooled I made this shit.
-Fuck it I'm to pretty.-Rick Ross
-I'm comming straight from the district of corruption baby Yep thats D.C. Im kick bushes ass out iM so presidential so Im warmin up the seat for Obama baby..
-The precious gift of love give to me from you...hmmm...take that shit back and exchange it for some gum =]

My StoriesThe Reason



Angel



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
Unique Critique

 
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Ok thank you, and I will


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your welcome.


Fact:Yes shawty fresh yeah shawty bad yeah i had ya man and yes i know you mad.-Dont be fooled I made this shit.
-Fuck it I'm to pretty.-Rick Ross
-I'm comming straight from the district of corruption baby Yep thats D.C. Im kick bushes ass out iM so presidential so Im warmin up the seat for Obama baby..
-The precious gift of love give to me from you...hmmm...take that shit back and exchange it for some gum =]

My StoriesThe Reason



Angel



JaHari C E O.



Thug Life


The down fall of a Model

The space page
Unique Critique

 
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I just added it. I proof read and looked over it and everything.


READ MY STORY
ASILENt CRY**{EXOTIC LADY PRODUCTION}**


~~my sigy theme~~
♥♥
color

I REP MY CLIQ BYTCH....WE EXOTIC LADIESS

What`s an exotic lady?We`re E X O T I C but U N I Q U E . we`re thee clique that has class and potential.... exotic ladies show high elegance and don`t take anything from anyone . Exotic Ladies is a sisterhood who show pride in their creativity and beauty . Exotic Ladies are unique but just like DJ Khaled WE THE BEST!!!!
 
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oooohhhh!!!!

¡lo siento que im atrasado!
I'M SORRY IM LATE!!! L0L BUT IM HAPPY I GOT ACCEPTED iNTO JAHARI!

=]! YEAH iM PART 0F A SiSTERH00d!


Shavonne is my name. Im an age i should be. I live where i'm wanted. And i'm currently apart of JAHARi
 
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