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marketta harris
 
Posts: 671 | Location: st.louis | Registered: 20 April 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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thanks yall for getting me to page twelve, if i can i'm going to add tomorrow morning right before my first day of school. Smiler if not, after school. Big Grin


Everyone please check out my first story and let me know what you think. Thank you Smiler.
 
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alright yall, this next add i'm about to post is kind of short. but please continue to bump. Smiler.


Everyone please check out my first story and let me know what you think. Thank you Smiler.
 
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I got in and looked around to nothing more than a completely empty house. I was furious. I began rapidly searching through the house until I came to the bathroom. My heart beat came to an abrupt stop for nothing short of a moment.

I then snapped back to reality.

There she was. Lying on the dirty white tiled floor. Knocked out cold in her now filthy work uniform.
She was helpless. She had powder residue around her nose.

Hell fucking no.

I looked to her left and saw more of the same residue on a mirror. I couldn’t take in what I was witnessing. Not because I am stupid, but because I didn’t want to.

Marcus came after searching the rest of an empty house. As much as I wanted to go out and kill the mother fucker who did this. My baby’s well being had to be my number one priority at this point in time.

As lifeless as she was I picked her up. Enabling me to notice the obvious scratches on her body and a few light bruises. I remained calm. My brother helped me as he called Corey to go pick up the car and pick us up. As I was taking care of my boo, Marcus remained on the look out for Tremaine.

Corey rolled up, Marcus got in the front as I hopped in the back with Nicole’s head resting on my lap as I stroked her hair. Corey was informed on everything and he wanted to help with a plot of vengeance.

We got to my place and I didn’t hesitate to fix her up. I had to sooth her sores. I ran a warm bath for her. I tried to wake her up. She wasn’t responding. I undressed her to her bra and underwear, not wanting to unravel her any further out of nothing more than respect. Once her frail and abused body hit the water,
I got some movement.

“Baby, bay can you hear me? You awake?” I anxiously asked.

I got a slight moan out of pain. I grabbed a wash cloth and soaked it in the water and began to drizzle the warm water all over her body. I put peroxide on her now swollen scratches. She winced in pain. She finally after a few minutes, eased open her hurting eyes. They were half open revealing nothing but tears. She didn’t say anything, she didn’t need too. I knew something happened and knew she didn’t want to talk about it. I held her head to my chest and she buried her tears into my shirt. I didn’t care as to how wet I was getting from the bath water. As she cried she held onto my shoulder. She was hurting bad. It wasn’t fair.

At all.

“Hush baby girl, everything is going to be okay, I promise..shhh.” I comforted her as it was obvious the tears wouldn’t stop flowing.

I picked her up out of the bath water, water dripping everywhere and wrapped her up into a warm towel as I took her to my room. I dried her off as she was gasping for air from all the crying. I put her in my jogging pants and a warm t-shirt. Pulled her close beside me, her head once again residing in my chest, tears once again flowing. I turned off the light and listened to her cries for help.


Everyone please check out my first story and let me know what you think. Thank you Smiler.
 
Posts: 326 | Registered: 30 March 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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bump bump bump!!! dat was good!!!
 
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dont stop now!!!!


bumpz 2 da fullest
bump
bump
bump
 
Posts: 36 | Location: chillaxin up in vaaaa | Registered: 27 May 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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this is so heartbreakin` !
omg .
i feel raw inside =/
she's so helpless and pained ..
but i can`t wait for tremaine to get what's coming for him!


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grindz`


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Big Grin ups yall!!


Everyone please check out my first story and let me know what you think. Thank you Smiler.
 
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for a short a dat was excellent i swer im at the computer bout to cry dat was so omg i cant even explain girl it was just good dat was hot ma
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marketta harris
 
Posts: 671 | Location: st.louis | Registered: 20 April 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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•••••••NEW READER HAS ARRIVED••••••••••

you are doing a great job.

Spec is TOO sweet.
Tremaine needs to get murked.





Name: Brittney aka Britt
Age: W/E works
Look Like: Lauren London
Personality: Quiet until I get to know you. Sweet to a point, until somebody starts poppin off at the mouth. Loves her man. Always looks freshly flyyyy.
Man: Spectacular, Pleasure, T.I., or Soulja Boy


Rawk & Roll Baby.
 
Posts: 386 | Location: A little place called GEORGiA. | Registered: 22 August 2008Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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keep writin
bumps300000000000000000000000000x
 
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add more soon plz


------------------------------Fuckin hate that kind of shit, You know the kind of shit that just makes you feel shitty. Well I'm in that shit. They tryna take me away from a place I LOVE, I can't leave now, m y life has JUST begun.
 
Posts: 468 | Location: Still In My Home Town Where I Belong | Registered: 26 February 2008Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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~* BuMp DaT iSh *~*
~* BuMp DaT iSh *~*
~* BuMp DaT iSh *~*
~* BuMp DaT iSh *~*

«*´`*.(**.¸(`*.¸ ¸.*´)¸.*).*´`*»
«*´¨**.¸¸.*Erika ♥ Slick*.¸¸.**¨`*»
«*´`*.(¸.*´(¸.** **.¸)`*.¸).*´`*


*! Rep Exotic Ladiez*

 
Posts: 1889 | Location: ~South Carolina~ | Registered: 24 April 2005Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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omg, that was a good add, i dope everything turns okay, i cant wait 2 c wut happns with tremaine. UPSS


Cast Call Info:

Name: Jennifer aka Jen
Age:16 or w.e fits
Man: Spec, Plies, Trey Songz, Pleasure or who is available
Personality: Funni, down 4 her friendz, gud person, dedicated person
Role: whatever fitz best
Pic:





Hit me
All the chronic in the world couldn't even mess with you
You are the ultimate high
You know what i'm saying baby?
Now check this out
Take my money
My house and my cars
For one hit of you
You can have it all, baby
Cause makin love
Everytime we do
Girl it's worse than drugs
Cause i'm an addict over you
And you know that
I can't leave you alone
You got me feenin
Feenin you got me feenin
Got me goin crazy
I can't leave you alone
You got me feenin
Girl i'm feenin for you

Said i'm feenin for you
I don't have a mind
It's all blown on you, baby
Girl i'm so strung out
All i do is wish for you
So tomorrow if you're not here
Then girl i'm down
So i need you near
I just wanna make it through the night
So hold me tight
Then girl i'm alright
 
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