New Story: The Good Girl

It’s funny how just when you think you have everything figured out in life, something or someone can come into your life and change it completely. Give you an entire new outlook on life. It could be an event that occurred, or someone who is determined to break barriers. For me, that someone was Spectacular Smith. Growing up, I have always been an introverted person, I keep to myself and do not like to get into other’s business. I never really had a lot of friends. It wasn’t because of the way I looked or the way I dressed, but more so the way I am. I do not need so called ‘attention’ from men like other girls do and only do to please myself. I figure, for every person I please, there will be 10 to whom I fail to please. Instead of looking for love in all the wrong places, I keep God in my life. He is the one that I tell everything to, I call him my Father, caregiver, and best friend. I am not perfect, but no matter what I do turn back to God in the end and put all of my trust in Him. I refuse to put my trust in man. Regardless of who, when I do let my guard down, and trust people, in return I receive nothing but heartache and letdowns. This is why I remain, The Good Girl.


Cast NOT needed.

This is my first story so constructive criticism is very welcome.
Any ideas are appreciated.

This message has been edited. Last edited by: **Virgo Babi**,

sounds lyke a very good story by the introduction already. and plus "Spec" is in it. And people make good story wid him in it..
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My name is Nicole Jones. I am 18 years old and I live in Miami, Florida. I live on my own due to family problems and enjoy being completely independent. I am currently attending Dade Country Correctional Secondary School. (Made-Up). I know it doesn’t seem in my place to attend that school, but I made poor decisions in my past and now go there. Due do the same decisions, once a week, on Tuesday’s, I meet up with my social worker and discuss my progression. I am in grade 12 and plan to attend University next year. I am also planning to get my degree in physiotherapy and obviously, become a physiotherapist. I have a part time job where I work after school at a grocery store.

I basically stay working hard, even though I find my self struggling, just to become my own success. As of right now, I am currently single, and not necessarily looking. I am waiting for the right one, and am done with the men out here. They are nothing but dirty dogs and only want one thing no matter how much of a front they decide to put on.

Today is a Monday and I am on the bus on my way to school. I hardly had any sleep last night, due to my procrastination and finishing up my essay till 3am. I finally arrived at my destination and walked up the steps to go to my locker when I saw my acquaintance Ashley.

She greeted me and I began telling her about yesterday’s church service, which evidently she was not trying to hear.

“Girl, I’m glad u had fun at your lil’ church but shoot, you should have came with me to Martin’s house, his cousin is hella fine, and I told him about you and gave him your number.”

“You did what?!”, I responded.

This was not the first time Ashley had done this to me and she would be damned if it was the last. She was always trying to hook me up with a man I could care less about. I mean it’s not that I’m looking for a quote unquote church boy, it’s just I want a man who can accept me for me.

“Nicole, you need to come out of your bubble, forreal tho, there is this party this weekend that Martin’s cousin is having and u know u need to come.”

“I don’t know but I will think about it, kay? But anyway girl, I’m about to head over to class, I’ll see you at lunch tho.”

“Aight girl, lata” And with that I headed to my first class.

I handed in my essay and got through the class, trying to do as much of my homework I could in class, resulting in less tonight. Before I knew it, it was lunch time. I headed over to Ashley’s locker to see what was good , but I seen her chatting up to a next man, she looked at me and I gave her the hint that I would be okay on my own for lunch today. I needed some fresh air so I decided to go walk around outside, eating my sandwich.

After lunch I went to my next classes, as tired as I was I got through the day managing to stay focused.

At the end of the day I saw Ashley we talked for a minute, nothing of importance and I continued to the bus stop. I hopped on the bus, grabbed a seat, and put on my mp3 listening to Kirk Franklin’s “You are”, followed by some Canton Jones. Sooner than I knew it, I got off the bus and headed to my one bedroom apartment.

I had no time to kill because I was working a 4-9 shift tonight so I quickly heated up some rice and beans, and chicken left over from yesterday. I guess that’s one of the joys of living on your own, no one to eat up your food. I ate my food, quickly washed my dishes, put on my uniform and headed to work. I got there, clocked in and worked to the best of my ability.

Finally, 9 o’clock. Happiest hour of my day. I clocked out, talked to my manager about a problem customer and left. Arrived home at 9:30, grabbed a quick snack, changed into some boxers and a beater and started on my homework.

Some people think I am too serious of a person and don’t know how to have fun, but I prefer the terms focused and ambitious. There was a time where I was a more less-determined person. But I stopped that and now have to time to play. There is a date and time for everything and that time was not now. And as far as I know it, it’s not going to be anytime soon. I finished off my homework, did a little of reviewing and placed myself in my warm comfy bed.


Tuesday, I woke up to the annoying sound of my alarm. Got up, did my morning routine, lotioned up, got dressed, grabbed a granola bar and coffee and headed to school. Ashley wasn’t there today so I spent my lunch in the library, which was extremely beneficial to me because I have to meet up with the dreaded Mrs. Clark, my social worker.

It wasn’t her that I couldn’t stand, it was more of the fact that it occupied 2 of my precious hours, where I could be at work, making money or at home doing homework.

The end of the school day finally came, I went home and cleaned up a little bit while cooking up some food as well. I left just in time to catch the bus to go to Mrs. Clark’s office. I brought my current grades which we just received last week and also brought some of my assignments, to show her my progress and just to keep her informed. I arrived at her office and had a seat. Nothing special, just going through the basic inquires.

In a way, I was appreciative of having my Tuesday’s off because I could finish up my homework early and relax the rest of the night.

At about 8:00 my phone was ringing and it was a number I didn’t recognize. I picked up and found out it was Martin’s cousin, the one Ashley gave my number too. Damn, is all I could think to myself.

His name was Jelani and I have to admit he did have a sexy voice. He was talking most of the time, asking basic questions including my age, what school I go to etc. He wasn’t really like a lot of the other guys Ashley tries to link me up with.

By that I mean he didn’t ask what I looked like, or any sexual related questions. He suggested that if I wasn’t busy he and I could go get some food tonight because he was hungry. This wasn’t a usual thing for me so I didn’t see anything wrong with it, even though it was a school night. I finished getting ready by 9:30.

I was wearing some tight dark blue skinny jeans with a brown fairly revealing, yet classy tank top that had a bow wrapped around it. Topping it off with my brown and gold flats, gold purse and gold accessories. I had my hair down with some loose curls in it. I was said to meet him outside of my building on the steps, and so I did.

He pulled up on time, got out of the car, insured my identity, gave me a hug and we hopped in his ride. He was dressed in some nice jeans, a fresh white tee and some fresh white forces. He was tall 6’1, had a nice fresh line up, medium complexion, mad cute and looked like he kept himself together.

Kudos for Ashley, she finally stepped her matchmaking game up. I couldn’t stop cheesin’ we were vibin’ pretty well. He was 19, one year older than me. Said he is taking a year off before going to college because he was not yet sure of what he wanted to become.

“Do you have any specific place u want to eat at?” Jelani questioned.

I told him whatever place he wanted to go to was cool with me and that I wasn’t picky. We decided on the olive garden. We were seated, ordered our drinks followed by us ordering our food. We were just talking about anything that popped into out minds, he was funny as hell, telling me about some stupid stories about things he did when he was younger.

I couldn’t deny it if I wanted to, even though we just met, I was feeling him hard. I don’t know if it was his cute dimples when he smiled, but I fell in love with his features. His personality just topped it off. We got our food, continued talking, laughing and eating. We got the cheque, I offered to pay for mine, because that was one thing I am considerably good at. He insisted on getting the bill and left me obligated to allow him. We walked out, he opened the door for me and we got in his ride.

It was 11:30 and although it wasn’t late, I didn’t want to ruin a perfectly good night by us getting bored of each other. He asked me if I wanted to go for a walk by the beach and I refused telling him I had a long day ahead of me tomorrow. He understood and continued to drive me to my place.

We arrived, and he leaned across to the passenger seat and we began kissing, his lips were so soft and warm and luscious , it was sending chills down my spine while giving me goosed bumps all over. He began to rub my thigh and this is where I pulled back and told him good night. He said he would call me tomorrow and I told him the appropriate time to do so.



------- Any constructive criticism is welcome
Also, I know the story is starting out slow and boring but this is just so that you can get a look into her everyday life and the type of person that she is.

BUMPZ and COMMENTS are also appreciated.

Also, if the story is not good, let me know so either i can do what i can to improve it or not waste my time with it, THANKS.

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i thought yu said "Spec" was gonna be in dis story.. {shurgs shoulders} hope he comes in very soon. her lyfe is B-O-R-I-N-G! i hope dat party looses her up..
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Specs coming in, dont worry i got you.

I spent the rest of the week talking to Jelani on and off, we didn’t chill or anything though because I do have to keep up with work and my homework. It was now Friday and I didn’t know how it happened, but Ashley, alongside the help of Jelani convinced me to go to his party tonight. On Friday’s I only work until 7 which gives me time to get ready.

Ashley came to my apartment when I got home for work to help get me get ready and what not.

Searching through my closest, we finally found an outfit we could both agree upon. It was some tight turquoise short shorts, and a white tank top that had ruffles on it, topped off with turquoise earrings and my white flats. My hair was straight with my baby hairs gelled up. I was looking pretty damn good.

Ashley was wearing a tight red dress, very casual though, not too dressey with gold flip flops and matching accessories.

We left my apartment at 9:30 and got there for 10. The place was packed people all over the front lawn, backyard, upstairs, basement….everywhere. We were there for a couple of minutes when these two guys tried to come and cop a bubble from me and Ashley. Just then I saw Jelani coming so Ashley was dancing with the one guy and I greeted Jelani.

“You look good gurl” Naturally, I blushed and returned the compliment telling him he looked sexy.

Ashley was happy that I was actually talking to someone, not to mention Jelani.

“Do you want something’ to drink?” Jelani asked me, I accepted and he returned just a moment later with a cup.

“What is it?” I asked him, me not being a big drinker.

“It tastes like juice, it’s just a cooler gurl chill” I rolled my eyes and took the cup. I drank it in no time and Jelani grabbed me another one.

“You wanna dance?” I said yes, Just then hot fuk came on.

Even though I am a church girl and all, I kno how to hot fuk. We started dancing and I was working it on him hella good. I knew because I could feel him rising. We got so into it that it turned into straight slackness. I was feeling kinda tipsy and next thing you know I was on my hands with him holding me by my legs. I was working and twurkin’ it on him so good that we had a few people watching. He was touching and feeling all on my booty and I was wet as could be and he knew it. I haven’t done anything like this in so long and had to admit that it was mad fun.

We finally finished dancing and he had me pushed up on the wall with my legs wrapped around him, he was touchin’ me any and everywhere and was trying to finger me, I then pushed his hand away from there and he played it off.

“C’mon baby gurl, lets go upstairs.”

“Iono if I want to”, I replied.

“Gurl I’ll only do what you allow me to”, Jelani said insuring me that nothing would happen.

I accepted, and by now I was feeling crunk with what I had in my system. I knew it couldn’t have only been two coolers that I drank, I can handle that, he must have mixed something else in it. We got to this room, he automatically pushed me on to the best.

“Mmm..gurl u don’t even know how good you look tonight.” I didn’t say anything, I was enjoying the feeling that he was giving me by kissing on my neck and caressing my breasts and ass.

He once again, after a failed attempt, tried fingering me but I told him I didn’t want to do that with him just yet. Next thing I know he was ripping off my shirt, which I was not comfortable with at all and was sucking on my chest, not removing my bra yet. He was kissing on my stomach, making his way down to my panties which were already soaking wet. He tried to remove my shorts and I told him I wasn’t ready to do this with him.

“Nonsense gurl, I know you want me right now just like I want you.”

With that I pushed his hands off of me and he told me, “Look I don’t know what intentions you had coming to see me tonight but I do know what my intentions were.”

I looked at him dumbfounded, not wanting to take in what he was saying.

“Look Jelani, I don’t even know u like that and I don’t get down like this”, I pleaded trying to get up and put my shirt back on.

He pushed me back down with my hands held behind my head continuing to kiss and lick on every inch of my upper body. Suddenly, tears began to form in my eyes.

I’d be damned if he thinks im not going to put up a fight. I attempted kicking him but that resulted in me getting slapped. I really didn’t want this to happen. By now I was full out crying begging him to stop. He ignored my wishes. He now ripped off my shorts, leaving me in my bra and panties.

I was trying to scream but even if my calls escaped his hand, no one would hear me, the music was too loud. Just as he was about to take off his pants and boxers, the door busted open.

There was a guy, light skinned, single braids, looking fly as can be and a girl behind him holding his hand. I guess they were looking for a room to get to business in.

Instead they found me, tears rolling down my cheeks and a look of plead on my face.

Jelani was knelt on the bed trying to act as if everything was cool and nothing was going on. The two people at the door were not stupid and the guy came in, asked me if I was okay with me responding “No.” while shaking my head.

He quickly gave Jelani and upper cut, surprisingly knocking him backwards. He then told the girl he was with to help me with my clothes while he continued to kick Jelani in his ribs.

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dat light-skinned nigga must have been Sexy Spec..lol..I can't beleive Jelani tried to have sex wid her..{bastard}but dat was a good add gurl..
her and Spec bought to get talking some..
CAN'T WAIT TILL YOU ADD MORE..{hope tomorrow}
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once again i'm bumping for you to add more..
cuz i want to know who dis nigga is dat punched Jenali in his ribs..
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