ALWAYS DUEN CAST CALLS!!!!

OKAY I WANTED TO START A STORY...
THIS WOULD BE MY FIRST STORY SO TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK ANY SUGESTIONS THROW EM ON IT IF YOU WANT TO BE IN IT LET ME NO PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK AND HELP ME OUT...SORRY LADIES PLEASURE IS TAKEN...

~CAST~

Y/N-TREY-PLEASURE
KIYA-BABYBLUE-4 NOW!!
KIKI-SPEC
KITA-SLICK

ENJOY



Y/N THOUGHTS: I WAKE UP ON A BED IN A PUDDLE OF WHAT I THINK IS BLOOD. WHERE AM I, WHAT TIME IS IT, I REACH DOWN AND FEEL FOR MY PANTS IN WHICH MY CELL FONE WAS IN THE POCKET, THERE NOT THERE, I LOOK AROUND FOR THE BATHROOM... SPOTTED IT, AS I WALK TO THE BATHROOM I STEP ON SOMETHING WET AND CREAMY, I PICKED IT UP, WONDERING WHAT IT WAS... I GET TO THE BATHROOM HOLD IT UP... ONLY TO FIND THAT IT WAS...

QUESTIONS:
WHAT WAS Y/N HOLDING
WHERE WAS SHE?
WHAT HAPPENED?

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BUMPS BUMPS BUMPS--->>CAN I BE IN IT WIT SPEC??

DIS STORY IS GONNA/DOES REMINDS ME OF
ZANE BOOK

NERVOUS

BUT IT GETTING GOOD...BUMP

bumps. can i be in it pleez
name: Aniyah
Age: wuteva needed
character: best friend to y/n
look like: Keish Knight Pulliam
Personality: cool, laid back, freaky but not extreme no bopper shytt. lol, will fight, loves to party,always has my friends back.

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ooh i 4got if u let me be n it can i be with Chris Brown, Plies, Young Kayso,

thanks. and i will bump.

NOTE TO: 2 BEAUTIFUL BEYOND REASONS:

DIS STORY IS GONNA/DOES REMINDS ME OF ZANE BOOK NEERVOUS

LOL FUNNY THING I WAS THINKING BOUT THE BOOK WHEN I THOUGHT OF THE TITLE LOL I LOVES ZANES BOOKS

OKAY N YEA U CAN BE WIT SPEC IMMA HAVE TO HAVE UR NICK NAME B KIKI COO?
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NOTE: ANIYAH YEA GURL UR GONNA PLAY A BESTFRIEND ND IMMA PUT U WIT PLIES K
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~CAST UPDATE~

Y/N-TREY-PLEASURE
KIYA-BABYBLUE-4 NOW!!
BRITANY BKA KIKI-SPEC
KITA-SLICK
ANIYA-PLIES

RECAP:
Y/N THOUGHTS: I WAKE UP ON A BED IN A PUDDLE OF WHAT I THINK IS BLOOD. WHERE AM I, WHAT TIME IS IT, I REACH DOWN AND FEEL FOR MY PANTS IN WHICH MY CELL FONE WAS IN THE POCKET, THERE NOT THERE, I LOOK AROUND FOR THE BATHROOM... SPOTTED IT, AS I WALK TO THE BATHROOM I STEP ON SOMETHING WET AND CREAMY, I PICKED IT UP, WONDERING WHAT IT WAS... I GET TO THE BATHROOM HOLD IT UP... ONLY TO FIND THAT IT WAS...

QUESTIONS:
WHAT WAS Y/N HOLDING
WHERE WAS SHE?
WHAT HAPPENED?

NEW PART: ITZ A CONDOM, I TOSS IT ON THE FLOOR I SPOTTED A TOWEL AND WRAPPED IT ROUND ME JUS AS I HEARD WHAT I THOUGHT WAS KEYS I TRY TO HIDE, TOO LATE

M/V: WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?
Y/N: I DUNNO WHERE I AM, I AWOKE HERE.
M/V: YOUR NAME?
Y/N: Y/N WHO ARE YOU?
M/V: IM THE LANDLORD, SAY, WHERE IS YOUR MOTHER YOUNG ONE
Y/N:PROBALLY AT HOME WAITING TO KILL ME, LOOK CULD I BORROW A SHIRT OR SUMTHING
(LANDLORD PULLS OFF HIS OVER SHIRT AND HANDS IT TOO HER, HE STARTS DIALING NUMBERS)
Y/N: WHA-WHA-WHAT ARE YOU DOING?
(LANDLORD PUTS UP HIS FINGER AND WALKS OUT TO THE BALCONY)
LANDLORD- YES I NEED POLICE AT ADDRESS...

Y/N THOUGHTS: WUT IZ HE OUT THERE TALKING ABOUT I WULD GO SEE BUT THEN AGAIN IT PROBALLY HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH ME: YOUR THOUGHTS WERE INTERUPTED...

LANDLORD- HEY...U HUNGRY
Y/N- YES VERY
LANDLORD- N WUT WULD U LYKE
Y/N- RITE NOW I CULD EAT N E THING
LANDLORD-I'LL BE RITE BACK
(HE LEAVES)

10 MINUTES LATER-

Y/N-(TALKING TO HERSELF SITTING ON THE BED) IT'S BEEN 10 MINUTES WHERE IS HE IS HE COMING BACK, PLEASE SUM 1 CUM AND HELP ME...

M/V: 3,2,1(BOOM IT'S THE POLICE FORCE THEY BUST IN THE DOOR
Y/NSCREAMS A LITTLE)OMG WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE...


TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK?

WHAT WILL THE POLICE TELL HER?
WHAT WILL BE Y/N REACTION?
IS SHE IN TROUBLE?
WHAT DID THE LANDLORD TELL THE POLICE?
IS THE LANDLORD GONNA CUM BACK AND FACE Y/N?
DID HE REALLY GO AND GET HER SOME FOOD?

add more plz

RECAP:

M/V: 3,2,1(BOOM IT'S THE POLICE FORCE THEY BUST IN THE DOOR
Y/NSCREAMS A LITTLE)OMG WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE...

NEW PART:

IN COMES A LAST POLICE MAN WHO Y/N THOUGHT LOOKED FAMILIAR, IT WAS HERE DAD, HE WAS A POLICE OFFICER TOO.

Y/N- DAD WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?
Y/N DAD- NO QUESTION IS WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE AND WITH ONLY A SHIRT ON
Y/N- DAD I WA-(SHE WAS CUT OFF)
Y/N DAD-GO TO THE CAR, IMA DEAL WITH YOU AT HOME

YOU LEAVE AND GOES TO THE CAR, THOUGHTS ARE GOING THROUGH YOUR HEAD: I CANT REMEMBER NOTHING FROM YESTERDAY MY CAR IS GONE MY MONEY IS GONE MY CLOTHES IS GONE AND MY CELLY GONE HOW AM I GONE EXPLAIN THAT TO HIM, I AM N MUCH TROUBLE...

Y/N DAD: WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU DOING IN A HOUSE AND BED THAT WASNT YOURS WE FOUND EVERYTHING SO WHO DID U OPEN YOUR LEGS TOO, WHERES YOUR CAR, AND WHY DIDN'T YOU ANSWER YOUR MOTHERS' CALL HUH?

Y/N- IT IZ TOO HARD TO EXPLAIN IT I DO NOT NO ANYTHING

Y/N DAD- YEA LETS SEE WHEN YOU GET HOME GET YOUR SHIT PACKED...

Y/N-(STARTING TO CRY) Y DAD I DIDNT DO ANYTHING

Y/N DAD- I WISH I COULD BELIEVE YOU, U ARE NOT INNOSCENT AS YOU MAKE UR SELF LOOK, YOU'VE BEEN HAVING SEX SINCE 12 AND YOU'VE BEEN SAYING THAT SAME THING SINCE, YOUR 16 I THOUGHT U WERE BETTER THEN THAT, IM TIRED AND IM NOT COVERING FOR YA FAST ASS NO MORE ME AND YOUR MOTHER IS TIRED OF WAKING UP AND YOU NOT BEING THERE, U TOO BUSY AT SOME NIGGA HOUSE LAID UP, AND TREY IM TELLING HIM ABOUT THIS.

Y/N- CUM ON DAD YOU CANT

Y/N DAD STARTS TO PULL OUT THE DRIVE WAY, Y/N SPOTS SOMETHING THAT LOOKS LIKE HER FONE

Y/N- DAD PULL OVER MY FONE, MY FONE(SHE GETS OUT)

Y/N DAD- CUM ON GET IN

THEY LEAVE, YOU OPEN YOUR FONE 36 MISSED CALLS 19 VOICEMAILS, AND 1 TEXT MESSAGE, MOST CALLS 4RM YOUR MOM,2 4RM KIKI,1 4RM ANIYA AND 1 4RM TREY, VOICEMAILS ALL FROM YOUR MOM AND THE TEXT 4RM TREY, IT READ:
BABY GURL U WERE GOOD N BED THANKS 4 THE 4 SOME, ITS OVER, GO GET CHECKED OUT I THINK I GAVE YOU AIDS LOL TREY...

YOU SILENTLY CRIED TO YOURSELF AT THE THOUGHT OF HAVING AIDS YOU GOT THOUGHTS OF WHAT COULD OF HAPPENED LAST NIGHT YOU THOUGHT TO YOURSELF IM PATHETIC AND U SAID NONE MORE UNTIL U GOT HOME...

WHAT YAW THINK SO FAR?
DO Y/N HAS AIDS?
WILL HER FRIENDS HELP HER THROUGH?
WILL SHE GET KICKED OUT?
BUMP TO FIND OUT

IMMA WRITE JUS CUZ IM BORED

RECAP: YOU SILENTLY CRIED TO YOURSELF AT THE THOUGHT OF HAVING AIDS YOU GOT THOUGHTS OF WHAT COULD OF HAPPENED LAST NIGHT YOU THOUGHT TO YOURSELF IM PATHETIC AND U SAID NONE MORE UNTIL U GOT HOME...

NEW PART: YOU WALK IN THE HOUSE AND STORM PAST YOUR MOM...

Y/N DAD: WOE WOE WOE WHERE THE HELL U GOEN GET BACK OVER HERE

Y/N MOM: YOU HAD ME WAITING AND N CUM MY SLUT DAUGHTER WITH NOTHING BUT A SHIRT ON.

Y/N: IM NOT A SLUT IF IM A SLUT DEN DAT MAKES U ONE TOO...

YOUR MOM SMACKS YOU CROSS YOUR FACE YOUR DAD SNAP OUT OF DAZE

Y/N DAD: I NO U DIDNT JUS CALL UR MOM A SLUT IMMA SHOW U A SLUT...

HE SMACKS YOU TO THE GROUND, PULLS YOU BYE YOUR HAIR AND DRAG YOU ACROSS THE DINING ROOM YOUR MOM TRIES TOO STOP EM

Y/N MOM:JAMES STOP

HE STOPS AND PAUSE 4 A MINUTE

Y/N DAD: BYTCH DID I TELL U TO SPEAK

YOUR MOM STOPS IN LOOKS IN SHOCK

Y/N MOM:N-NO (SHE STUDER OWT)

Y/N DAD: WELL SHUT THE FUCK UP YOU ONLY SPEAK WHEN YOU SPOKEN TO...NOW GO PACK UP UR DAUGHTERS STUFF

Y/N MOM: OKAY...

Y/N DAD: BYTCH DID I TELL YOU TO SPEAK HUH? NOW U SPEAK...

Y/N MOM: NO

Y/N DAD: YEA IMMA SHOW YOUR ASS BYTCH I GOT U AFTER I GET DUN WITH YOUR FAST ASS DAUGHTER NOW DO AS I SAY...

YOUR MOM GOES TO PACK YOUR THINGS, IN YOUR HEAD YOUR THINKING BOO PLEASE CUM HOME PLEASE...
A/N: BOO IS WHAT YOU AND YOUR MOM CALL PLIES...
YOUR DAD THROWS YOU ON THE PORCH
A CAR PULLS UP AND OUT HOPS PLIES

Y/N U SCREAM OUT IN PAIN)BOO!!!
PLIES LOOKS OVER AND RUNS TO YOU
PLIES:JAMES GET THE FUCK OFF MY LITTLE SISTER LIKE THAT, NIGGA QUIT HITTEN HER.!!!!
YOUR DAD PUSHES EM AS HE RUNS OVER
Y/N DAD: MOVE TAKE YO ASS N DA HOUSE DIS IS BETWEEN ME N DIS LIL HOE U CALL A SISTER
PLIES: (GETS UP AND TWIST HIS HAT TO THE BACK)NAW FUCK DAT YOU NOT BOUTS TO BE DISRESPECTING MY LIL SIS LYKE DAT NIGGA IT'S GOEN DOWN...


WHAT WILL PLIES(BOO) DOO?
WHERE WILL Y/N GO?
BUMP TO FIND OUT

[QUOTE]Originally posted by ~*CH3W*@W*0N*MY*BUBBL3GUM*~:
NOTE TO: 2 BEAUTIFUL BEYOND REASONS:

DIS STORY IS GONNA/DOES REMINDS ME OF ZANE BOOK NEERVOUS

LOL FUNNY THING I WAS THINKING BOUT THE BOOK WHEN I THOUGHT OF THE TITLE LOL I LOVES ZANES BOOKS

OKAY N YEA U CAN BE WIT SPEC IMMA HAVE TO HAVE UR NICK NAME B KIKI COO?

lol yuh kiki scrate wit me...bump..its real gud!!!

ooo i like, i like!!
keep goin

`upsz

thannkz 4 asking me. I think she gunna move in wit BOO, he gonna keep her safe from all the drama. um i hope and pray dat she dont have aids, and i hope Trey get fucked up real bad 4 doing her dirty. EXCELLENT STORY
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I AM SO SORRY YAW I HAD A LITTLE BIT OF THANGZ GOEN ON PEOPLE DUEN PUT DOWNS N I LOST INTREST BUT I GOT OVA IT...

RECAP:PLIES (GETS UP AND TWIST HIS HAT TO THE BACK)NAW FUCK DAT YOU NOT BOUTS TO BE DISRESPECTING MY LIL SIS LYKE DAT NIGGA IT'S GOEN DOWN...

[COLOR:YELLOW]NEW STUFF[/COLOR:
PLIES REACHES FOR SUM10 IN HIS PANTS AND JAMES(YOUR DAD) RUNZ, YOUR MOM CUMS DOWN STAIRS WITH SUM OF YOUR CLOTHES, U RUN OVER TO HER, PLIES RUN UP STAIRS AND CALLS ANIYAH TO TELL HER WUTS GOEN DOWN

YOUR MOMWHISPERING SO JAMES WONT HERE)LOOK BABYGURL IM SO SORRY U NO UR DAD, AND I JUS WANT THE BEST, THIS WUZNT MY DECISION(KISSES YOU ON THE CHEEK WHY TEARS JUST FALL FROM YOUR EYES)IF U WANT I'LL LEAVE THE BACK DOOR UNLOCKED AND U CAN SLEEP N BOO ROOM WITH HIM IF ANIYAH'S NOT COMING..BUT ONLY 4 TONITE

Y/NPULLS AWAY)MOM TELL ME YAW NOT JUS GONE LEAVE ME N DIS ALONE,I CAN NOT DO THIS ALONE MOM(AT THIS MOMENT UR EYES WERE FILLED WITH TEARS)UR THROWING OUT YOUR BABYGURL BECAUSE U SCARED OF WUT JAMES THINKS?

YOUR MOM:LOOK U N I BOTH NO JAMES IS NOT UR REAL FATHER BUT HE HAS BEEN THERE SINCE U WERE 2 WHEN YOUR DADDY LEFT YOU, THE LEAST YOU CAN DO IS THANK EM 4 THAT!!

Y/N: MOM DU U NOT GET IT Y THANK A MAN WHO MOLESTED YOUR DAUGHTER U AND I BOTH NO HE BEATS YOU THEN COMES AND RAPE ME, U NEVA STOOD UP FOR ME OR YOURSELF, MOM, N U LET HIM DO IT IN YOUR FACE. THEIR WUZ NO SNEAKIN U ACTED AS IF U AINT CARE U DUN LOVE ME, ALL U THINK ABOUT IS HAVING SOMEONE TO CUDDLE UP WITH AT NIGHT, YOU N JAMES BLAME ME FOR HAVING SEXX NO IT'S UR FAULT BECUZ HE EXPOSED IT 2 ME AT 12...

YOUR MOM: CUM ON Y/N BE FAIR WITH THIS, DONT PIN THIS ALL ON ME, CUM ON NOW U KN(GETS CUT OFF)

WIT PLIES

PLIES: NOW BABY U NO I WANNA CUM C U IT'S JUS ALOT OF SHYT GOEN ON MAYNE, U NO HOW IT IZ

ANIYAH ON THE FONE: NO I DUN WANT U TELL ME

PLIES:BABY CUM ON NOW

ANIYAH ON THE FONE:SO UR 4REAL NOT CUMING...WELL WUT SHYT IS GOEN ON DEN "BOO"

PLIES:CUM ON YOU NO...

ANIYAH ON THE FONE:NO I DONT GUESSING GAME IS OVER, WUTS GOEN ON, HOLD ON BABE(ANIYAH CLICKS OVA)HELLO

F/V:HEY I NEED A BIG FAVOR

ANIYAH:Y/N WUTZ GOEN ON

Y/N:WELL I GOT KICKED OUT MY HOME AND I NEED TO STAY THERE FOR A DAY, MAYB A WEEK, A MONTH, SUM YEARS...

ANIYAH:UMM WELL U NO I DONT GET MY APARTMENT TILL NEXT MONTH AND MY MOM MYTE TRIP...LOOK I WANNA HELP IMMA C WUT I CAN WORK UP OKAY...

Y/N:OK WELL CALL ME, AND THANK YOU SIS...

ANIYAHONT STRESS IT(THEY HANG UP, N ANIYAH CLICKS BACK OVER)PLIES

PLIES:YEA

ANIYA:LOOK IMMA HIT U BACK

PLIES:NO UR NOT, U GONE STAY ON THIS FONE

ANIYA:ALL OF A SUDDEN I DUN FEEL LYKE TAWKN

PLIES:OKAY NIYA BABY I UNDASTAND CALL ME WEN U FEEL BETTA OK, BABY LOVE YOU

NIYA:I LOVE YOU TOO AND WILL DO!!!

~WIT JAMES~
WELL JAMES IS HIDING OUT IN THE BATHROOM WAITING FOR PLIES TO LEAVE, HE SITTIN IN THE SHOWER WITH THE BATHROOM DOOR LOCKED CRYIN LYKE A LIL BYTCH LOL

~WIT YOU AND YOUR MOM~
YOU GAVE YOUR MOM THE COLD SHOULDER AND YOU TOOK UR STUFF AND START WALKEN,IT WUZNT MUCH JUS A DRAW STRING BOOKBAG,U WUZNT GETTN AW UR STUFF TILL U HAD SUMWHERE TO GO N E WAYS IT WAS THIS CAR FOLLOWN U SO U STOPPED WALKEN AND THEY STOPPED

A/N:U DID GET DRESSED SO LOL

M/V:HEY BEAUTIFUL Y SUCH A LONG FACE

Y/N:I HAD A LIL PROBLEM AT HOME

M/V:WUTS UR NAME BEAUTIFUL

Y/NU GAVE EM UR NAME)WHATS URS

M/V:THATS A BEAUTIFUL NAME MY NAME IS MARCUS, SO CAN I TAKE U OUT SOMETIME?AND GET YOUR NUMBER IF YOUR INTRESTED?

YOU THOUGHT TO YOURSELF DAMN HE IS TOO CUTE

Y/N:YEA 2 BOTH(U GAVE EM YOUR NUMBA)

MARCUS:HEY IMMA CALL Y(HE GOT CUT OFF BY UR FONE RINGEN)

Y/N:IM SORRY CAN U WAIT 4 A MOMENT(U ANSWER YOUR FONE)HELLO

NIYAH:HEY LOOK IT'S COO IF U STAY HERE AND WHEN I GET MY APARTMENT U CAN STAY WITH ME BUT EXCUSE THE BUMPEN U'LL HEAR ON THE WALL DAT'LL BE ME N UR BRO

Y/N:EWW NASTY, THANK YOU SO MUCH AND I AM ON MY WAY...(YAW HANG UP)

MARCUS:HEY U NEED HELP GETTN THERE?

Y/N:YES PLEASE...

OKAY BRI YOU GONE B IN DA NEX SCENE K!!

OK YAW IS HE REALLY GONNA TAKE HER WHERE SHE NEEDS TO GO?

IS JAMES EVA GONE BRING HIS ASS OUT THE BATHROOM?

MORE DRAMA TOO CUM

if u have room fa one more can i be in it plz!!!!

can i be in it plz