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This story is inspired by my poem exclusive you will see individual lines or sections from the poem as the story goes on. The cast is very big so I don't need any extra people to be in the story. Enjoy

What does it take to receive exclusive status? It still is a topic that has yet to be explained to all those trying to step out of their comfort zone and do something spontaneous. It takes a real person to understand that total exclusive status. Envious individuals will try to get every once of juice out of a person who crosses those purple velvet ropes into V.I.P. with the rich and famous.

Chapter One

“You can’t go back there miss.” The body guard said. The girl stood five foot two, blue eyes and she was light skinned. She showed the guard her pass and he let her back stage. This was her second chance at meeting Pretty Ricky. She had arrived at the arena in Washington DC several hours before the show was supposed to start. She had butterflies in her stomach. She clutched her exclusive Bluestar access pass that was around her neck. She ran into another bump in the road which happened to be their manager and uncle Killa.

“You must be Emily.” He said. He signed his name on a wristband and put it on her wrist. “Is it too tight?” Emily shook her head then he spoke again, “You can use this wristband to get into any Bluestar event anywhere in the United States or overseas.” Emily nodded her head because she understood that the wristband was worth more than anything else that she would get during the show. Killa then escorted her to Pretty Ricky’s dressing room. Butta Crèame walked passed them as they made their way to Pretty Ricky’s area.

“She must be one of the lucky ladies that got that exclusive pass.” Coco Butta said. They noticed the pass around her neck as Diamond walked up to them. Diamond escorted Emi the rest of the way to where the rest of the group was eating at since they weren’t in the dressing room.

“Where are you from?” Diamond asked. He sensed Emi was nervous. Spec walked up to them laughing.

“Who is this?” He asked. Spec was very observant and noticed the pass around her neck and flipped it over where her name was printed in big blue bold letters. “Well Emily, nice to meet you but you don’t want to go over there right now because….” He stopped in mid-sentenced as Slick ran pass them with 4 Play and Lingerie right behind him. Diamond and Spec laughed as Emi followed them back to the dressing room. Once they got there, 4 Play and Lingerie were playfully beating on Slick. Slick was laughing hard as hell at them. They all stopped when they saw Emi with Diamond and Spec.

“Who is that?” 4 Play asked. He didn’t see the pass around her neck or the wristband. Diamond and Spec laughed.

“This is one of the lucky girls that got those Bluestar passes. Her name is Emily and she’s from Virginia I think.” Spec said. Emi just nodded at the fact she was from Virginia.

“She can’t talk.” Slick joked. Emi started laughing at his little joke.

“Well,” Emi said. She couldn’t even finish her comment without being interrupted by someone entering the room.

Who came into the room?

What will Emi's next move be?

Who will be the first to speak?

What do you think is going to happen next?

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I LIKE IT SO FAR. CONTINUE
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Body: Body: if your a nice guy.. read this
if your a jerk...learn this

ladies: this will make you tear up
fellas: read it, all of it!


1-touch her waist
2-talk to her
3-share secrets
4-give her your jacket
5-kiss her slowly


are you remembering this?


6-hug her
7-hold her
8-laugh with her
9-invite her somewhere
10-let her be with you when you're with your friends


keep reading


11-smile with her
12-take pics with her
13-pull her onto your lap
14-when she says she loves you more, deny it. fight back
15-when her friends say i love her more than you, deny it. fight back and hug her tight so she cant get to her friends. it makes her feel loved


Are you thinking about someone?


16-always hug her and say "i love you" when you see her
17-kiss her unexpectedly
18-HUG HER FROM BEHIND AROUND THE WAIST, and hold her there, just like that and whisper something into her ear.
19-tell her shes beautiful!
20-tell her the way you feel about her!


oh, and on that last one... you need to show her you mean it too


21-Open doors for her, walk her to her car- it makes her feel protected, plus it never hurt to act like a gentleman
22-Tell her she means everything to you, but mean it
23-if it seems like there is something wrong, ask her- if she denies something being wrong, it means she doesn't want to talk about it, so just hug her
24-make her feel loved
25-kiss her infront of other girls you know


we might deny it but we actually like and kinda want you to tickle us


26-don't lie to her
27-dont cheat on her
28-take her anywhere she wants
29-txt messege or call her in the morning and tell her have a good day at school or work, and how much you miss her
30-be there for her when ever she needs you, & even when she doesn't need you, just be there so she'll know that she can always count on you


are you still reading this? u better be, its important


31. Hold her close when she's cold so she can hold you too.
32. When you are alone hold her close and kiss her.
33. Kiss her on the cheek; (it will give her the hint that you want to kiss her).
34. While in the movie, put your arm around her and then she will automatically put her head on your shoulder, then lean in and tilt her chin up and kiss her lightly.
35. Dont ever tell her to leave even jokingly or act like you're mad. If shes upset, comfort her.


remember this next time you are with her


36. When people diss her, stand up for her.
37. Look deep into her eyes and tell her you love her.
38. Lay down under the stars and put her head on your chest so she can listen to the steady beat of your heart, Link your fingers together while you whisper to her as she rests her eyes and listens to you.
39. When walking next to each other grab her hand.
40. When you hug her hold her in your arms as long as possible


MAKE SURE SHE KNOWS SHES LOVED


41. Call her at night to wish her sweet dreams.
42. Comfort her when she cries and wipe away her tears.
43. Take her for long walks at night.
44. Always Remind her how much you love her.


you..ll never know when she needs just a lil more love
 
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thanks more coming after a few more people read and comment = ]

make sure to respond to the questions


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I THINK EMILY WILL SPEAK AND I THINK ANOTHER GIRL WITH THE BLUESTAR PASS IS GONNA COME THROUGH THE DOOR
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Body: Body: if your a nice guy.. read this
if your a jerk...learn this

ladies: this will make you tear up
fellas: read it, all of it!


1-touch her waist
2-talk to her
3-share secrets
4-give her your jacket
5-kiss her slowly


are you remembering this?


6-hug her
7-hold her
8-laugh with her
9-invite her somewhere
10-let her be with you when you're with your friends


keep reading


11-smile with her
12-take pics with her
13-pull her onto your lap
14-when she says she loves you more, deny it. fight back
15-when her friends say i love her more than you, deny it. fight back and hug her tight so she cant get to her friends. it makes her feel loved


Are you thinking about someone?


16-always hug her and say "i love you" when you see her
17-kiss her unexpectedly
18-HUG HER FROM BEHIND AROUND THE WAIST, and hold her there, just like that and whisper something into her ear.
19-tell her shes beautiful!
20-tell her the way you feel about her!


oh, and on that last one... you need to show her you mean it too


21-Open doors for her, walk her to her car- it makes her feel protected, plus it never hurt to act like a gentleman
22-Tell her she means everything to you, but mean it
23-if it seems like there is something wrong, ask her- if she denies something being wrong, it means she doesn't want to talk about it, so just hug her
24-make her feel loved
25-kiss her infront of other girls you know


we might deny it but we actually like and kinda want you to tickle us


26-don't lie to her
27-dont cheat on her
28-take her anywhere she wants
29-txt messege or call her in the morning and tell her have a good day at school or work, and how much you miss her
30-be there for her when ever she needs you, & even when she doesn't need you, just be there so she'll know that she can always count on you


are you still reading this? u better be, its important


31. Hold her close when she's cold so she can hold you too.
32. When you are alone hold her close and kiss her.
33. Kiss her on the cheek; (it will give her the hint that you want to kiss her).
34. While in the movie, put your arm around her and then she will automatically put her head on your shoulder, then lean in and tilt her chin up and kiss her lightly.
35. Dont ever tell her to leave even jokingly or act like you're mad. If shes upset, comfort her.


remember this next time you are with her


36. When people diss her, stand up for her.
37. Look deep into her eyes and tell her you love her.
38. Lay down under the stars and put her head on your chest so she can listen to the steady beat of your heart, Link your fingers together while you whisper to her as she rests her eyes and listens to you.
39. When walking next to each other grab her hand.
40. When you hug her hold her in your arms as long as possible


MAKE SURE SHE KNOWS SHES LOVED


41. Call her at night to wish her sweet dreams.
42. Comfort her when she cries and wipe away her tears.
43. Take her for long walks at night.
44. Always Remind her how much you love her.


you..ll never know when she needs just a lil more love
 
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I don't know any of the answers...lol...but i like it Kris. What's gonna happen next?


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thanks nae = ]

how have you been doing lately?


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Body: Body: if your a nice guy.. read this
if your a jerk...learn this

ladies: this will make you tear up
fellas: read it, all of it!


1-touch her waist
2-talk to her
3-share secrets
4-give her your jacket
5-kiss her slowly


are you remembering this?


6-hug her
7-hold her
8-laugh with her
9-invite her somewhere
10-let her be with you when you're with your friends


keep reading


11-smile with her
12-take pics with her
13-pull her onto your lap
14-when she says she loves you more, deny it. fight back
15-when her friends say i love her more than you, deny it. fight back and hug her tight so she cant get to her friends. it makes her feel loved


Are you thinking about someone?


16-always hug her and say "i love you" when you see her
17-kiss her unexpectedly
18-HUG HER FROM BEHIND AROUND THE WAIST, and hold her there, just like that and whisper something into her ear.
19-tell her shes beautiful!
20-tell her the way you feel about her!


oh, and on that last one... you need to show her you mean it too


21-Open doors for her, walk her to her car- it makes her feel protected, plus it never hurt to act like a gentleman
22-Tell her she means everything to you, but mean it
23-if it seems like there is something wrong, ask her- if she denies something being wrong, it means she doesn't want to talk about it, so just hug her
24-make her feel loved
25-kiss her infront of other girls you know


we might deny it but we actually like and kinda want you to tickle us


26-don't lie to her
27-dont cheat on her
28-take her anywhere she wants
29-txt messege or call her in the morning and tell her have a good day at school or work, and how much you miss her
30-be there for her when ever she needs you, & even when she doesn't need you, just be there so she'll know that she can always count on you


are you still reading this? u better be, its important


31. Hold her close when she's cold so she can hold you too.
32. When you are alone hold her close and kiss her.
33. Kiss her on the cheek; (it will give her the hint that you want to kiss her).
34. While in the movie, put your arm around her and then she will automatically put her head on your shoulder, then lean in and tilt her chin up and kiss her lightly.
35. Dont ever tell her to leave even jokingly or act like you're mad. If shes upset, comfort her.


remember this next time you are with her


36. When people diss her, stand up for her.
37. Look deep into her eyes and tell her you love her.
38. Lay down under the stars and put her head on your chest so she can listen to the steady beat of your heart, Link your fingers together while you whisper to her as she rests her eyes and listens to you.
39. When walking next to each other grab her hand.
40. When you hug her hold her in your arms as long as possible


MAKE SURE SHE KNOWS SHES LOVED


41. Call her at night to wish her sweet dreams.
42. Comfort her when she cries and wipe away her tears.
43. Take her for long walks at night.
44. Always Remind her how much you love her.


you..ll never know when she needs just a lil more love
 
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thanks nae = ]

how have you been doing lately?


I've been good. It's been a while since I've been on, but it feels good to be back on Smiler


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that's good man I can't wait to transfer to the university at the end of January 2009


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That's good, which university?


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california state university sacramento


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HEY KRIS! =]
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I love it I think another Bluestar Supastar gone come in.

_wink-wink_ I know who it is!

Don't worry Kris my lips are sealed =]


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