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Birth Name: Encore
Nickname: Standing Ovation
Born: Today
Deceased: Whenever I finish
Soundtrack--
-----This is sorta like a movie everyone. If you haven't read Encore don't worry, because there aren't any characters, but three. Only three main characters. So don't get thrown off about the intro. You will enjoy, I promise you that.

It all started September 14th. Eighteen hours of pure hell, as I would say. But it was worth it for my little angel. September 15th I gave birth to a beautiful baby boy named, Kaylin Ahmir Santos Jr. And Kaylin was right there with me through it all.
I am Angel Lalita Fields ,for those who don‘t know me. I’m twenty and I have two kids. Sanaa, finally six. And you should know Kaylin Jr, KJ. I am happily married to my husband, Kaylin. We’ve been through a lot and you should know what I mean if you’ve read Encore. I love my life right about now. I have everything that I could ever dream of.
My mother is in jail doing twenty without parole for attempted murder of a minor. Thank God. I hope them dikes get her ass. I hope they shove a broom up her pussy so she could feel the pain I felt.
My father& sister are both now in me& my daughters’ life. We are so close now. I’m glad we all came together like this.
Well life has been easy since we left Miami for good, but of course trouble always follows us. By me being a hardcore rapper& singer the men always come along. Kaylin is of course the jealous type. You guys know how he is. I love him though. But anyways let’s just say that umm. Never mind.
But you thought I had problems before well watch& see what Bibi about to do with this pen.
The girl got skills. Brace yourself I present to you “Standing Ovation: I Gave You Encore”.


Chapter One: Life - Page 1,2,3,
Chapter Two: Catch My Heart- 3,4,6
Chapter Three: Little Secret- 7,8
Chapter Four: Homecomings Ain't So Sweet- 9,11
Chapter Five: Bruises Are Blue- 12,14,16
Chapter Six: This Ain't Gone Work- 16,17,19,
Chapter Seven: Need U Bad- 20,22,26
Chapter Eight: The Plan- 26,28
Chapter Nine: Hitting Rockbottom After Promises- 30,32, 34
Chapter Ten: Life- 34,, 36

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Encore/Stranger/Standing Ovation/Enough
--Merry Christmas to All--
He Took Off de Shirt!Ricky Ross

Thanks For the Grannys`Mel

He Got My Go-Rilla! Big GrinBerg

Merry ChristmasNicki Minaj

Wrap`em UpKanye West

Gimme Your LoveDawn&&Que

Sexy? Dats Heem. Knawmean?Brandon aka My Based God

______________[ despace; add me bBy` )
 
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Ch. 1
Life

“Angel what the fuck he doing calling you at this time of the night?”, Kaylin shouted.
“I don’t know Kaylin! Maybe if you woulda let me answer the damn phone I would be able to tell you!”, I yelled.
“Whatever.” he scoffed walking off.

I snatched my phone off the dresser and called Marcus back.

“Yea. It’s three in the morning.”, I angrily commented.
“Oh my bad. I was calling to let you know that you gotta be in the studio tomorrow morning. I got something for ya!”, he replied.
“Alright. What time?”
“12.”
“Alright. I’ll be there.”
“Aight. One.”
“Two.”

I hung up and laid back down. Kaylin walked back in after a while and sat at the edge of the bed.

“All he wanted was to tell me that I had to be at the studio at 12 tomorrow sharp.”, I assured him.
“He had to call you at three in the damn morning to tell you that?”, he questioned.
“Obviously. You know what why are you making this such a big deal?”, I argued.
“Because a nigga that you cheated on me with calling you at three in the fucking morning just to tell you you gotta come to the studio in the morning.”, he raised his voice.
I rolled over and ignored that last remark and drifted off to sleep.
My alarm woke me and I got up to get ready. Kaylin was gone with KJ& Sanaa. I called his cell but he pressed ignore.

“Whatever.”, I mumbled.

I put on my high waist jeans and the matching shirt and put my hair in a sloppy ponytail.

I was walking out the door when Kaylin pulled up.

“Where are the kids?”, I asked walking up to him.
“Over to Britt’s’.”, he replied walking past me.

I pulled his arm and he looked back at me.

“Do you wanna ride with me there?”, I asked.
“Naw you go head.”, he said turning back around.
“Kaylin why are you acting like this?”, I asked.
“Acting like what?”, he hissed.
“Like that. What the fuck wrong with you?”, I cried out.
“Man whatever. Just gone to the studio with Marcus and leave me alone.”
“Fine then. Whatever you say.”, I stomped off, “Jealous ass.”
“What was that?”, he asked walking up to me like a mad man.

I backed back but I was still talking noise.

“You heard me. You’re jealous for no damn reason.”, I yelled.
“Let’s take this in the crib.”, he said looking around looking for the paparazzi.
“Naw. I’m out.”, I replied before getting in the car and driving off.

I rolled up in the studio to see my man Swizz Beats working the table while Marcus laid something down in the booth. I sat in the seat beside Swizz and helped.

“Aight. Come on in here Lita!”, he demanded.

I walked in and he put my headsets on.

“Sing this part for me.”
“What?”
“Sing this part right here.,”, he pointed to a couple of lines, “I need it to go with my new release. Play the beat Swizz.”, he shouted into the mic.

The beat begin to play and Marcus stood in front of me.

“Do your thing.”, he demanded.

I let out a soft sigh and got down to work.

“Sing it louder baby.”, he demanded while signaling Swizz to start the beat over.

The beat began to play and I sung a little louder.
“Your love is so good. Deserves an encore.”, I sung with a weakness in my voice box.
Truth was I was getting wet thinking about the studio love we once made. He put on a big smile and nodded his head.

“Marcus I can’t do this today.”, I complained.
“Alright. How about tomorrow?”, he asked.
“Yea tomorrow. Why you can’t get another chick to sing for you?”, I teased.
“Cause I want you.”, he said, “I mean I wanted you to get on.”

I blushed and walked out the booth with him trailing behind.
I sat beside Swizz and watched him work, “So what ya got for me today?”

Swizz began to play this beat and I nodded my head to the beat.

“I like that.”, I nodded.
“Yea me too.”

After about a hour in the studio recording me, Swizz,& P decided on lunch at Olive Garden.

“Damn.”, I mumbled as fans rushed us.
“Hey Miss Saucy can I please have your autograph.”, a young girl asked.
“Sure. Whom do I make it to lady?”, I asked.
“My boyfriend Josh. He loves you.”, she went along.

I gave him a big signature with a print of my lips.

“Thanks.”

A lot more to come.

After we finally got to sit we ordered.
After lunch, we headed back to the studio to lay down a few tracks.

“I got this crazy beat for you Lita. P wrote the melodies for it too. It’s not that much of a song, prolly just a snippet but long enough to get the meaning out. Just revamping J. Lo.”, Swizz explained.
“Oh really. What’s it’s called Marcus?”, I questioned.
“Wrong When You’re Gone.”
“Sounds cool.”, I commented.

We walked back into the studio and Swizz instantly played the beat for me.
Marcus started to sing the words, and I nodded my head in awe. Wrong When You’re Gone.

“When do I start on this mofo?”, I asked excitedly.
“Right now. Gone inside.”, Marcus replied messing with the equalizer.

I followed instructions and put on my earphones. I readjusted the mic and read over the lyrics.

“Ready?”, Marcus asked.

I nodded my head and the beat began to play. I got into the mode and started to sing what was written on the paper.
Marcus cut me off.

“Sing that shit like you mean it baby. Sounds like you’re reading ma. Push it out.”, he demanded.

I stared at him and the feelings I once had for him came rushing back. That night flashed before my eyes and I caught myself staring at him.
I snapped outta my daydream and assured him that I was ready.

The beat started over, and like he demanded I got into. Or so I thought.
Chills ran up and down my spine when he walked inside the booth with me. I took off the earphones and stared at him.

“You doing good. But it’s like you ain’t in yo zone today. Something on ya mind?”, he asked.
“Actually yea. Me and ole boy having a couple of problems. We got into a heated argument before I came here, about you calling last night.”, I sighed.
“About that I’m sorry. I wasn’t thinking until you called back. It won’t happen again. Tell ole boy my bad.”, he apologized.
“No need to apologize. I think I’m gonna call my manager back, since I keep avoiding her.”, I joked.
“Oooh she gone get you.”, he teased.
“Whatever.”



Encore/Stranger/Standing Ovation/Enough
--Merry Christmas to All--
He Took Off de Shirt!Ricky Ross

Thanks For the Grannys`Mel

He Got My Go-Rilla! Big GrinBerg

Merry ChristmasNicki Minaj

Wrap`em UpKanye West

Gimme Your LoveDawn&&Que

Sexy? Dats Heem. Knawmean?Brandon aka My Based God

______________[ despace; add me bBy` )
 
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Ups



Encore/Stranger/Standing Ovation/Enough
--Merry Christmas to All--
He Took Off de Shirt!Ricky Ross

Thanks For the Grannys`Mel

He Got My Go-Rilla! Big GrinBerg

Merry ChristmasNicki Minaj

Wrap`em UpKanye West

Gimme Your LoveDawn&&Que

Sexy? Dats Heem. Knawmean?Brandon aka My Based God

______________[ despace; add me bBy` )
 
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Originally posted by BiiBii Bebii| 0'11:
Ups



Encore/Stranger/Standing Ovation/Enough
--Merry Christmas to All--
He Took Off de Shirt!Ricky Ross

Thanks For the Grannys`Mel

He Got My Go-Rilla! Big GrinBerg

Merry ChristmasNicki Minaj

Wrap`em UpKanye West

Gimme Your LoveDawn&&Que

Sexy? Dats Heem. Knawmean?Brandon aka My Based God

______________[ despace; add me bBy` )
 
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ups yessss u started!


I got the perfect thug. Kyree real, funny,sweet,hood,and straight freaky
 
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Bumps.

I Love It Bibi. ♥


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sincerely, mia ♥
 
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Big Grin



Encore/Stranger/Standing Ovation/Enough
--Merry Christmas to All--
He Took Off de Shirt!Ricky Ross

Thanks For the Grannys`Mel

He Got My Go-Rilla! Big GrinBerg

Merry ChristmasNicki Minaj

Wrap`em UpKanye West

Gimme Your LoveDawn&&Que

Sexy? Dats Heem. Knawmean?Brandon aka My Based God

______________[ despace; add me bBy` )
 
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Bumperz Child. I likely dat.



Truth be told ; LA`BRITTNEY BRIANNA is fucking crazy as hell . I do da stupidest things in the world . I laugh at NOTHING at all just cause I think it's funny . I don`t yell at folks cause I'm rude I yell cause I care . Plus Im just out der .Family. It's all I know & got . Trust me I know & do mo' things than you could ever imagine. I call myself a LOSER cause shit thats how I see myself . A rockstar is what I call myself . Lol . Sad thing is if you dont like me den you missing out on a hella person .
 
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lemme see she finally had kj! now kaylin trippin which i understand why but I hate that it affects litas work. im loving the intro and the banners to cute ups Smiler


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Yea.
Thanks.
Bahja made de banners.
Big Grin
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Originally posted by ~imari~regaining back her suicidal swag:
lemme see she finally had kj! now kaylin trippin which i understand why but I hate that it affects litas work. im loving the intro and the banners to cute ups Smiler



Encore/Stranger/Standing Ovation/Enough
--Merry Christmas to All--
He Took Off de Shirt!Ricky Ross

Thanks For the Grannys`Mel

He Got My Go-Rilla! Big GrinBerg

Merry ChristmasNicki Minaj

Wrap`em UpKanye West

Gimme Your LoveDawn&&Que

Sexy? Dats Heem. Knawmean?Brandon aka My Based God

______________[ despace; add me bBy` )
 
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Okay I'ma read the first one then read this post.


Bumpz


 
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Oh yeah bibi I'ma call my cousin today about the number.


 
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go bibi, go bibi!! lol bumps!
 
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( bookmarks )

imma read this later mama.


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I dropped all that baggage
Let go of that habit
The pain you can have it
Now I`m content with me.

The definition of love is you.

 
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