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Characters:
Jazz / Plies

Adaseia/ Trey Songz

Diamon/ Jaylen

Tieese/ Markez

Spectacular
&&
Pleasure

[ they come in towards the middle of the story ]

About The Story

Adaseia moves in with her half sister Jasmine after her mother dies and has to adjust to life in Atlanta. It is the beginning of 10th grade and things really start to get tough for Charlese and Jasmine as they meet and start hanging out with the wrong crowd && start doing things that they don't normally do. In this story..their friends turn against them and things start to go downhill..At least so they thought..........Time for a real reality check.


[What yall think so far??]


**RULES**

YOU MUST COMMENT OR BUMP AFTER YOU READ.




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`upz.


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[*&& basically] you'll never be as cool as him


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BUMPZ GIRL GOOD START.
 
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UPZ^^^^^^ IF U NEED ANYMORE PEOPLE CAN U ADD ME ID LOVE 2 B N IT


--->LOOK AT MY BABY'Z DADDY PLIES<---


*CAST CALL INFO!!*
NAME:TIERA
NICKNAME:TIERA OR T
AGE:18
RACE:BLK/HAWAIIAN
PERSONALITY:FUNNY, LAID BACK PERSON.....CAN B COCKY WHEN I WANT....I LIKE 2 PARTY AND FIGHT
LOOK ALIKE: STACEY DASH
MAN:I'D PREFER LIL WAYNE..PLIES..SLICK..JUELZ..T.I...JODY BREEZE OR LLOYD
KIDS:1 GURL...MIQUAY






~*MY FAM*~
NINI<==MY MOMMY
NAT==>MY SEXY (NO HOMO)AUNTIE
NENE<==MY BIG SIS(THE DIVA!)
POOH BABY==>MY HOOD LIL SIS
RENESHA<==MY LOVELY SIS
WHITNEY==>MY CRAZY SIS
TITIANA<==MY GLAMOROUS SIS
VEE==>MY COOL ASS AUNTIE
ZEE<==MY FLY ASS AUNTIE
BABI CAKEZ==>MY AUNTIE
DEE DEE<==MY SIS
 
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Yeah i`ll try to put you in..
but it probably won`t be until the middle..
maybe I can put you with Plies cuz I won`t be needin him after a while....

[ hint hint ]

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Originally posted by ~S3x! Azz t!3Ra~:
UPZ^^^^^^ IF U NEED ANYMORE PEOPLE CAN U ADD ME ID LOVE 2 B N IT


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upz !


 
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Im bored so i`m finna add.....

here it goes:

[ a d a s e i a ]



Man I really can`t believe that my daddy would make me move to Atlanta when I’ve been in Miami all my life. Just because my mom died doesn’t mean that I have to move down there. He told me that he wants me and my half sister to have a better relationship since we didn’t grow up together but whatever. I hope he don’t think we gone be all close after this cause that’s not gone happen. I can already see whats gone happen; i`m gone get down there and she gone try and be all up in my face but I would just rather be by myself. I don’t need nobody else but myself now that my mom`s dead and gone. I have no one else to love……………



3 hours later


I just got off the plane and I see my half sister Jasmine and my dad looking all smiley. Don’t they know that my mom just died and yet they up here smillin....as far as im concerned there is nothing to be happy about.

Dad- hey adaseia how was your plane ride?
Adaseia- it was ok I guess
Dad- ok well let me get your bags so you can see the house and get settled in
Adaseia – yep
Jasmine- hey adaseia...long time no see girl
Adaseia- yea I knoe
Jasmine-yea well when we get home i`m going to show you the guest room and then we can jus chill
Adaseia- yea wateva

I got in the car silent as hell. I didn`t say a word because I just needed time to think. Things are so messed up right now. I don`t wanna be here man. 20 Minutes later we get to the house and I get out and go in.

Adaseia –(thinking to herself) yeah I guess this is gone be alright. I just wish Jasmine would shut up......

Jasmine- well here is your room and my room is next door so i`ma let u get settled in and then i`ma holla at you
Adaseia- yea ok well I guess I better get unpacked I just hope I don’t have to be here much longer..

After I unpacked I decided to go downstairs and see what they got to eat up in this house. Shit..after dat plane ride I got hungry………I get to the kitchen to see Jasmine making lasagna.

Jasmine-ummm...dinner will be ready in about 30 mins
Adaseia- ok (turns to go back up stairs)
Jasmine- wait...I figured we could talk while the food is cooking
Adaseia- naw I don’t think so...(walks upstairs to her room && shuts the door)


What yall think????
Good?
or
Bad??

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i know her mom jus died .. but that was rude

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Where the bump`sz at???


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