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Chapter one. Virginia Rhanae Thomas

The harsh words of Virginia’s step-dad cut her deep causing her to bleed internally. How could someone be so cruel, and misunderstanding. She closed her eyes and imagined she was in Miami on the beach soaking up the sun’s rays, and watching all the sexy guys walk past in nothing but swim trunks. A smile silently crept onto her causing the cut in the left corner of her mouth to stretch opening wider and let small trickels of blood to pour onto her tongue.

“You just a dirty little bitch. Get the fuck out of my face and clean yo’self up before yo’ mom comes home.” he raged and stormed out of her room leaving her in a dazed state on her plush queen size bed.

Snapping out of her daze as he slammed her bedroom door Virginia hurried and locked it behind him. Dabbed at her mouth finally tasting the blood, which had started to dry up in the corner of her mouth. She didn’t even bother “cleaning herself up” because her mom wouldn’t be home until 12 that night, and by then she planned on being sleep. She looked around the room which held some of deepest secrets, and would continue to hold them until death did them part. She could feel the wetness of her tears on the walls, and the screams that escaped her lips every night bad dreams troubled her.

Her thoughts were rudely interrupted as the room became engulfed in the hook from “Hello Brooklyn” signaling that Anna was calling her. Virginia searched her room frantically trying to find her phone, and finally after it stopped ringing she found it sandwiched in-between her pillow and her mattress.

“Hey why’d you call me heffa?’ she joked.

“Me and some of the girls is goin out tonight. You want in, or daddy got chu on lock again?” her best friend of six years joked right back.

Virginia rolled her eyes knowing her friend as just saying that to get under her skin.” Fuck you. I’ll be there. Hush?”

“Of course where else. 9 o’clock don’t be late.” the silence on the other line signaled to her that anna had already hung up.

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“The spot is packed tonight. I wish you would have told me you know how I get when lot of people is close to me.” Virginia yelled over the loud music. In all actuality no one was touching her and she breathing since the club was so big. Exaggerating just came second nature to her. The eyes of roaming males continued to fondle her as she sipped her apple martini. The bartender was fully aware of the underage teen that he had served the drink to; but beauty had it’s perks.

Virginia waltzed onto the dance floor leaving her martini unattended, she let go of all the stress that made up her life and let the music wash away her troubles. Still aware of her surroundings she swayed from side to side singing along with Ciara’s goodies, and watched her fellow clubgoers.

Walking diamonds caught her attention causing her to stop dancing, mouth ajar, guard let down. Words couldn’t describe the feeling racing through her veins at that very moment. The diamonds sat in her unoccupied moving her empty martini to the side with a look of calm on his face. She had to get to know this man, no this god before the night ended.

“Is anyone sitting here?” she questioned diamonds showing off her pearly whites.

“Unless my invisible friend decided to tag along no no one is sitting there.” he retorted.

She was taken back by the rudeness flying off his tongue slapping her in the face forcefully. Those words were the end of there short conversation, but the beginning a new friendship.

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good start!
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Bumpz I like it...if you do a cast call put me in it plz but add more while you at it and i want slick


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http://boards.atlanticrecords.com/artists/prettyricky/f...471201/m/82110666601

Cast Call info:

Name:Shatrice aka ShaSha
age:14 or wateva
relation:next door neighbor or lil sista or homegurl
man:Pleasure,Soulja Boy or Spec or Slick
personality: stay fly all da time, a certified chick dat can bam, a honors student, does school work before gettin crunk, loves to shop,read, write, and talk on da phone
pic:Nivea
 
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Nice start. Upz!


 
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((wonders who diamonds is...lol))


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lovin it already and how rude lol but if u need cast my info is down below bump to the fullest


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Thanks for the feedback!!!!....Im not going to do a cast call for this story peoples.
 
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well imma still read it cuz it good


Miss ShaSha da TRuCe

Yupz I rep Exotic foreva til I die


My New Story: A Day In the Life of a Plus Size Chick
http://boards.atlanticrecords.com/artists/prettyricky/f...471201/m/82110666601

Cast Call info:

Name:Shatrice aka ShaSha
age:14 or wateva
relation:next door neighbor or lil sista or homegurl
man:Pleasure,Soulja Boy or Spec or Slick
personality: stay fly all da time, a certified chick dat can bam, a honors student, does school work before gettin crunk, loves to shop,read, write, and talk on da phone
pic:Nivea
 
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Chapter two. Analiese Lynn Rodriguez

Analiese half listened to her best friend Virginia re-tell the story of some mysterious guy named nicknamed diamonds. She wasn’t aware of the fact that Gin had even talked to anyone last night, but was glad she did. Even though from the snippets of sentences she had heard the guy wasn’t the least bit friendly, and the conversation was less than short. She knew before she even called her last night that her friend wasn’t into the “club scene”, but she didn’t want her in the house with her step-dad. Virginia didn’t know that Ana was aware of the verbal beatings her step-dad served whenever he felt she needed it. Knowing her friend hated people meddling in her business Ana decided to keep her thoughts on the situation to herself, instead of losing one of the most important people in her life.

“I have to go mother wants me down for tea cheerio.” her friend laughed on the other end of the phone.

“Haha bye girl. Don’t do nothin I wouldn’t do.” she added with an unseen smirk.

After getting off the phone Ana slowly walked down the stairs of her fully furnished two-story estate. The silence of the house pounded against her ears, as she made her way into the kitchen. The cold tile floor sent chills up her spine as she proceeded to get a beverage out of the fridge. Maybe someone else would be a little shaken up waking up to an empty house, but for Ana it was just routine. Her mother-Louisa- was never home; always away on business, and her father-Carlos- didn’t live with them preferring to stay in Chicago with his sick mother. She sighed as she looked at a picture posted on the fridge with a banana magnet. A family of four; smiling. She’d always wanted a family like that, a family that talked out their problems instead of leaving troublesome rocks unturned. A REAL family that loved one another not just lived under the same roof. Ana shook her head violently snapping herself out of her daydream. She knew things didn’t happen like that, she lived in the real world not fairytale land. She finished off her drink and went back upstairs to finish her morning routine.

&&&

“I’m leaving right now Sharon damn hop off.” Ana yelled at one of her associates. She couldn’t stand Sharon for the most part. But kept her around because...well she wasn’t really sure why.

Ana hopped into her brand new Mazda RX 8, and sped down the road to east side mall. Her heels clicked on the concrete as she made her way up to the doors of the mall, seeing her friends waiting for her.

“Damn here comes late ass right now. You always taking forever Ana, one day we just gone jump yo ass in a dark alley.” one of the groupies clowned. Ana threw her a dirty look and her laughing died in mid-air.

“Where is Gin at?” she asked not wanting to be here if Virginia wasn’t going to show up.

One of the groupies quickly informed her that she would be arriving shortly ,and they all went on their way.After Gin finally came Ana left the groupies to stroll the mall with her bestie.

“I don’t even wanna be here. I hate coming to the damn mall every weekend. Ain’t shit changing, and I damn sho’ ain’t seein no find niggas dig it?” Virginia exclaimed as they made their way to the food court.

“Oh shut up damn girl, you always got somethin to complain about. Just chill out and enjoy the hussle and bussle.” Ana said with a sly smile.

“Yeah well you’re buying my food because....”

‘Because of what. Why you starin like that for.” she asked as her friend locked eyes with someone across th ecourt.

“That’s him Ana. That’s the guy from the club last night. Oh my damn he’s sex on the beach forreals.”

Ana shook her head at her friend’s giddy demeanor. How could she want to talk to that guy after he basically dissed her last night; she would never know.

When she turned around Virginia was halfway down the court shoving through old ladies and babies trying to catch ol’dude;s attention. As Virginia passed by him the guy seemed to note her ,but turned away as if disgusted. She could see her bestfriends face dropped instantly as she sulked back to the table. Ana sighed knowing she would get an earful about this guy

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Feedback would be greatly appreciated ghost readers. =))
 
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i like it add more


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hey gurl im a new reader and im lovin ya story add more soon ma..bump bump bump


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upsz, ol dude bogus wit hiz punk ass lol


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