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 Me and my girl Chels walked down the empty dark halls of Marie Ellen High School with our dark "Senior" pullovers on searching for Aaron and Dylan. The four of us have been classic trouble makers for ages. I looked at my watch... "3:00am", I said to Chels "Where are those fools at? Damn. Always fuckin up shit, ain even got time for dis." Chels said with anger in her voice. I laughed at her vernacular, being that she's from ATL she has the funniest speech. "Whatever," I said trying to keep my composure,"lets just check in the gym." We walked to the gym looked over the rails under the bleachers, everywhere with our flashlights. Then I thought about it. Girls Locker Room. Chels looked at me and she could tell what I was thinking. We walked to the locker room and saw Aaron looking through "Big Boobed Betty's" gym locker with her bra in his hands. He saw us and dropped his flashlight in shock. "Nukka!" Squeaked Chels. " I knewed yo ass was nasty!" "Man whatever, I got hormones just like the next man!" Retorted Aaron . Chels jumped at him. He jumped back. Dylan came out of the shower area with tampons sticking out of his curly fro with some chicks bra snapped over his t-shirt. "You've got to be kidding me!" I said aggrivated with my hands on my hips."We're here for business not for play people!" Dylan laughed and shook the tampons out of his head grabbed the flashlight and walked out of the locker room and we followed. "Um, Dill. You gone take off that boob holder you got." Asked Chels. "Naa," he said chuckling,"It kinda matches my body don't you think?" We all laughed and headed to the library where they control all the TV's in all the classrooms at. "Okay" Said Aaron. "Chels, ima need you to go into Ms.Williams room to make sure that it works." She did as she was told. Aaron pulled out a big black VHS out of his duffle bag and popped in the VCR. "Damn nigga, upgrade your shit!" Joked Dylan. Aaron ignored him like everyone else did. "It Works!!!" yelled Chels from down the hallway. "Good shot." Aaron whispered to himself. We left the tape in, ran to our Chels car and pushed the petal to the metal down the highway. We dropped off Aaron. We pulled up at Dylans house and waited for him to get out the car but he never did. I turned around to look at him, "Umm, what's up?" "Naa," he said in a serious tone of voice which he never uses,"I can't go in there, parents going through the divorce thing still." "Oh" me and Chels said in apoligetic voices. "Well, you can spend the night with me, i'm sure my sister wouldn't mind." I obliged. He touched my shoulder in a way of saying thank you. I always liked seeing that soft side of Dylan. We pulled up to my place and my older sister beat me and Dylan to the door. "What the hell are you two doing out this late?!" Yelled my sister for the whole neighbors to hear. Swinging her straight blonde hair everywhere and her blue eyes about to pop out of her head. She's full blooded European, my parents adopted her before I was born. She was my guardian now since my parents died in a fire. Dylan gave me that 'it's your sister, you talk' look and headed upstairs towards my room. "Umm. Emergency." I said pulling off a fake cough,"I had to go to the ER, had a high fever." "Uh huh..." she said in a way that said she didn't beleive me. But I didn't care as long as she wasn't still asking questions. I ran upstairs where I saw Dylan looking through my things. "Excuse you." I said not even looking at him, turning on my TV. "You don't have nothing good to snoop through anyway. Dylan replied. "So." "So? You need to get some stuff for me to snoop through." "Oh, I have things to snoop through but you just don't know where they are." "Oh Yeah?" He said with a smirk. "Yeah." I replied and jumped across my bed. He reached under my bed without taking his eyes off me and pulled out an old Nike shoe box smiling. My eyes widened. He opened the box, pulled out the papers and read. "Dear chels, I know we've all been friends since the third grade, but for some reason, Dylan is starting to look cute to me. Gross. I know. Write me back!" I sat there, face red. He just smiled. "So, where will I be sleeping?" He changed the subject fast. "I-I-Um..Well." I slurred and stuttered. I saw this seductive look come across his face, sexy but weird. I never thought he could even be serious like this. I was so wrapped up in thinking of what to say, the next thing I knew it was pitch black and my room and I felt strong hands and soft warm lips all over me. This message has been edited. Last edited by: [Mel.] 21.;;, |
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His warm breath gave me the chills as he kissed my ear with his hands rubbing on my stomach while he sat behind me.
"Dylan." I whispered. "Hmm?" He said lowly kissing on the back of my neck. "We have to wake up in the morning." I said cringing. I really didn't want him to stop. He exhaled loudly."You're right" He said, got the extra comforter out of my closet and made a pallet on the floor. He layed down silent. I grabbbed my phone off the nightstand and saw that it was 5:30am. I had an hour and a half to go to sleep. I couldn't. The wetness that Dylan mad was bothering me way too much. [moRniiNg WiiCKeDneSS] Me and Chels sat side by side in Senior Orientation. It was the first week of school. And last night, we started it off right. And the whole school would know in about 10 minutes when the bell rings. Our principal spoke the same speech we've been hearing for four years now. About dress code, PDA and blah blah blah. I leaned over to Chels to tell her about last night. Then the the prinicipal called me on stage. "Miss Allen!" He said through the mic. Everyone turned to look at me."You woulnd't mind coming on stage now would you?" Knowing that I might get in trouble if I didn't go up. I walked on stage with my heart beating fast, everyone giggling and the jocks hooting. "Mr. Cleveland!" he yelled through the mic. I looked around the auditorium and spotted Dylan Clevelands big fro really fast. He jumped up and ran on stage, he loved attention. He stood next to me and smiled. I kept a straight face. The last place I wanted to be was on stage. "Now. I would love to use you two as an example of what PDA is." he said on the mic. Everyone started cheering and hooting, my face turned beet red. The bell rang. The Lord had to be on my side! Everyone ran out of the auditorium, Chels and Aaron ran onstage, grabbed our hands and we raced to the next class. We sat at our usual table in the back of Ms. Williams class where we usually crack a joke about each person that came in. But today, we were TOO excited. The late bell rang. Students raced in the door so they won't be tardy. The four of us stared at the screen. I noticed Dylan holding my hand. I liked it, I just hope that no one noticed. IT HAPPEND. The TV's all through out the highschool came on at its schedualed time for the news...instead. All of Marie Ellen High School got a full eye of hard-core porn on their screens. We fell out of our chairs with laughter. Some students laughed, some students were in shock. We could hear reactions from neighboring class rooms. All day, that was the talk of the school. You walk down the hall, all you hear is, "yeah..dat gurl on there had a phatty." ...and..."I cant believe this!.." [GyM WiiCKeD] It was Gym class. Since we were seniors, we usually get out of school around this time, but me and Dylan volunteered to help out the freshman during this time. Me and Dylan were in the washing room washing gym clothes and towels. We washed in silence. I was dying inside, just hoping that he would do the same thing he did last night. He walked towards me with that same look in his eye he had last night, I close my eyes and licked my lips, waiting for his to touch mines. "Excuse me." He said reaching behind me. "Trying to get to the washing powder." I did a fake laugh, "Yeah." I said, and handed it to him. He walked back to his washer. "Dylan." I said and looked at him. "Yes?" He said. "I like you Dylan, alot." "Okay." I just stared at him, not believing he was acting like this. "So...what's up, you were'nt acting like this last night." I said. "Look." He turned around and looked towards me."I'm a guy, to tell the truth even though you are my best friend, all that I was looking for from you was sex. I felt the opporitunity, so I tried to take it, but I guess you weren't giving the goods." I stood there in shock. "So what about when you held my hand in class?" I shouted. He shrugged and folded clothes."Nerves." I didn't know what to say. I tried to hold back tears because I would never let a guy see my cry. I just didn't know how I was going to deal with him coming back home with me tonight. This message has been edited. Last edited by: [Mel.] 21.;;, |
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Aaron and Chels rode along with me and Dylan to my house. I would have told Dylan to just not come, but then it would be awkward. Chels was sitting on my bed while Aaron sat in between her feet so she could braid his short curly hair. "Somethings upp.." Chels sang under her breath. "I don't want to talk about it." I said laying at the top of my bed without even thinking. "Umm...okay. Even though I wasn't even thinking about what's wrong with you. Um, me and Aaron are...kind of seeing eachother." Said Chels in a squeaky voice. I looked at Aaron and he had a huge grin on his face. I smiled, even though I wasn't in the mood. I watched as Dylan got up out of the recliner in the corner of my room to give Aaron some dap. I clinched my jaws when I saw him look at me. "So.." Dylan said loudly as he walked towards me and laid beside me on the bed. I could feel my blood boil. I wanted to hit him so hard."Does that mean that me and Amber have to get together?" Everyone laughed, I gave up a fake chuckle, knowing that he said that to agrivate me. If they only knew how I felt. [Later That Night WiiCKeD] Everyone except me walked Dylan home, I guess his parents stopped arguing. I got that old Nike box from up under my bed and read the letters I had wrote to Chels about Dylan. If you would have read them you would think he was the greatest guy in the world. Hey. I even thought he was the greatest guy in the world. After all, he his my bestfriend. Was anyway. I ripped up each letter after I had gotten finished reading over the mushy nonsense. I felt a tear roll down my face, I wiped it away quickly trying to figure out why the hell was I crying. My cell rang. "Chelloo" I sang in the other end, I knew it was Chels because the 'Barbie Girl' ringtone played. "Amber..." I heard worry in her voice.."I need you to come over Dylan's house right now...just come upstairs to his room..and don't ask any questions.." "Oka-" She hung up fast. [At home WiiCKeD] I put on my Senior hoody and drove my sisters Honda to Dylan's house. When I got there I jogged upstairs and saw Chels with her knees tucked to her chest and tears rolling down her face and Aaron standing in the doorway of Dylan's bathroom door looking like he was trying to hold back tears. This message has been edited. Last edited by: [Mel.] 21.;;, |
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  *({N£W Stor¥} ƒorßidd£n R£lations*-CØMING §ØØN *Preview* I finally got free and made my way to the downstairs bathroom, I tried to run in and lock The door but failed, HE pushed the door in, pushing me to the floor. “Give me my money” HE yelled. “I didn’t take your money” I screamed back. HE took me by my hair again and started banging my Head into the bathroom sink counter; I cried for freedom but got none in return. “Please” I begged “you’re hurting me…..STOP” I screamed in pain. HE finally stopped after HE saw blood dripping down my forehead and all over his hands. HE let go of my hair and backed away slowly with an astonished look on HIS face as if He had just realized what HE had done. “Im so sorry baby, I didn’t mean to hurt you I swear” HE whispered in a hushed tone. HE picked me up gently, put me on the couch, and treated my wound, crying, I tried to ignore the throbbing pain. HE gave me some ice to put on it, apologizing the whole time. HE laid down with me and minutes later I fell asleep on his chest. I had disregarded the fact that HE had beat me, and told myself that HE wouldn’t do it again, but this wasn’t the end….and it was far from it. Little did I know this was just the beginning. Production email Speak_No_Evil_productions@yahoo.com thee space www.myspace.com/wudsgood |
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*({N£W Stor¥} ƒorßidd£n R£lations*-CØMING §ØØN *Preview* I finally got free and made my way to the downstairs bathroom, I tried to run in and lock The door but failed, HE pushed the door in, pushing me to the floor. “Give me my money” HE yelled. “I didn’t take your money” I screamed back. HE took me by my hair again and started banging my Head into the bathroom sink counter; I cried for freedom but got none in return. “Please” I begged “you’re hurting me…..STOP” I screamed in pain. HE finally stopped after HE saw blood dripping down my forehead and all over his hands. HE let go of my hair and backed away slowly with an astonished look on HIS face as if He had just realized what HE had done. “Im so sorry baby, I didn’t mean to hurt you I swear” HE whispered in a hushed tone. HE picked me up gently, put me on the couch, and treated my wound, crying, I tried to ignore the throbbing pain. HE gave me some ice to put on it, apologizing the whole time. HE laid down with me and minutes later I fell asleep on his chest. I had disregarded the fact that HE had beat me, and told myself that HE wouldn’t do it again, but this wasn’t the end….and it was far from it. Little did I know this was just the beginning. Production email Speak_No_Evil_productions@yahoo.com thee space www.myspace.com/wudsgood |
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I walked closer to the bathroom and gently pushed Aaron out of the way. I saw Dylan sitting on the floor of the bathroom with his fist balled up and saw something white peaking out of it. I was curious. I walked closer to him slowly and kneeled down to him and opened his hands and revealed a handful of tiny white pills. He closed he has quickly when some of them spilled out of his hand. He cried loudly. "You know Amber..it's all fucked up. It aint all good how I act like it is." He said in a loud whisper. I looked at him with concern in my eyes. "My parents always argue, take the focus off of me. Never talk to me. I feel neglected Amber.." He nodded his head and looked at the pills in his hand. "But if you came here to watch the show, just sit down and shut up." I thought about what he said in the gym. I can be a really cold hearted person at times. I got up, walked out of the bathroom put my hood on and start pacing the floor. I shook my head and shrugged. "Let him do it." When I said that, it seemed like the world paused. Chels stopped crying and stared at me. Aaron looked back at me and gave me an evil glare. "What..." said Dylan sounding shocked. I walked back into the bathroom and squated in front of him. "Go ahead." I smirked. "Obviously you don't give a fuck about any of us, why should we give a damn about you? Do it! I would love to see you do it!" He clinched his fist tighter. "You're so selfish Dylan. You only care about yourself, not how Aaron or Chels would feel if you would be gone. And I exclude myself from that because I could care less about what happend to you." I stormed out of the room, out of the house. I hoped in the Honda and headed back home with my Marylin Manson blasting. I'm sure I was the only black chick who listened to him. Two miles down the road, I pulled over, thought about what I said. Wondered was he bluffing. Wondered if Aaron and Chels would look at me the same. An abulance zoomed passed my car coming from the direction of Dylan's house. I cried. Not for Dylan. But for his parents, his friends. This message has been edited. Last edited by: [Mel.] 21.;;, |
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