I heard the rain hitting hard against my window,As i sat here patiently waiting for my baby daddy to bring my baby home. He never knew how to be on time when it came to bringing her home.finally I saw his black navigator pull up in my drive ways.I grabbed my pullover rain coat and ran outside to get my baby.

As I approach his vehicle he got out running his mouth

"man girl i was gonna bring her inside" he said giving me a evil look

I just rolled my eyes, and opened his door

"hey mamas baby"

she looked at me and smiled...

i grabbed her diaper bag and unbuckled her car seat,and got her out..and shut his door

"thanks..now bye"

"DAMN nessa you don't have to be like that" he said trying to sound sad

"I can be however i want to now getcho ass out my driveway" i hollered while rushing to get ali'ciya inside.

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I stood out there and watched her go inside.
I don't know what i ever did to make her turn against me like this.I know i may have cheated a couple of times..and yea may have slept with a girl in her bed.. but she was the one i loved hell she had my child, she said she loved me, but she got over me soo quick..god i gotta get my baby back!!...i got in my truck and left.
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I watched him pull out the driveway

"oh pussy ass nigga" i said as i let my curtain fall back into place. I turned to see ali playing and bouncing up in down in her swing

i went and sat in front of her and started to bounce her

the phone started to ring..................

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Bummpzz!!!! I waNT 2 bE n the StorY!!!

NAMe:Latrice Aka Pooh

Looks Like-Lauren London or Mya

Role-Bestfriend or Sister

Man-Spect,Pleasure,or Plies

If U need aNYthaNg eLse 2 lEt Me knoW!

**LuVin the stORYY!!!!!**

I got up off the floor, grabbed my phone.

"Hey mama" I said plopping down on the couch.

"Baby, Ms.Nolland called an told me that you and Queshawn was arguing outside in the rain with the baby out there, Is this true?" she questioned me

"Man that nosey old lady needs to mind her business"

"Ma, no we was not arguing,as you know its raining hard outside so I ran out there and got her,After that I told him BYE, and he said I didn't need to be like that "

"Thats all"

"yes mama"

"Whatever happened between ya'll?..He was a Sweet guy."

"Ma leave it alone,we will never get back together, we are over FANITO"

"Alright, where's my baby at anyways"

I looked over at the swing and she was asleep

"She is in her swing asleep" I told her,yawning myself.

"You tired baby?"

"Naw,I don't know why I'm yawning [My other line beeped, it was my girl shalita]Ma can I call you back?"

"yea sure"

"love you bye"

"love you 2"

I clicked over

She heard me

"Man didn't it take you long enough" she said as if she was aggravated.

"Girl I was on the phone with my mama, whats up?"

"Nothing I'm bored,Did he bring my baby home yet?"

"yea she here, she sleep"

"Awwwz, what you doing"

"I'm just sitting here, thinking bout what I want to eat"

"ohhz..Girl how bout nicole called me talking bout that nigga dre' done hit her again"

"he hit her?"

"yeaa"

"Is she gonna ever gonna get enough of him"

"I know right, ain't no niggas dick that good to keep on going through that shit with"

"lol, how would you know about anything like that?,but I agree, I think tomorrow I'm going to make my way to greenville and see her since he never lets her come see her girls, You wanna go?"

"I wish I could but Im got to work" she sighed

"ohh, alright"

"But aye mamaz i gotta call you back"

"Alright girly"

We hung up the phone.I went and grabbed ali out the swing layed her up against my chest,and went up the steps to my room, and we layed on the bed, I made sure she was safe before I layed down beside her,I cuddled up next to my baby.I slowly drifted off to sleep thinking about everything.

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bout to do a post introducing the characters

MICHELLE

quote:

Originally posted by miss923:
Bummpzz!!!! I waNT 2 bE n the StorY!!!

NAMe:Latrice Aka Pooh

Looks Like-Lauren London or Mya

Role-Bestfriend or Sister

Man-Spect,Pleasure,or Plies

If U need aNYthaNg eLse 2 lEt Me knoW!

**LuVin the stORYY!!!!!**

You in the story mamaz, as the best friend!...
Anybody else?
Thanks for the love everybody
*michelle*

I wanna be in it. My name is Deanna

Deanna, Is there anybody you wanna look like? who you want to be your man?
i need this info so i can do my character post..

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michelle

gone:
spect [latrices man]
pleasure[m/c next main squeeze]

My man:Slick
Look like:Trina

Thanks Girl And Hurry Up And Post!!!

Story CharacterS

Vanessa Renea Hopkins
**Vanessa, is cool, crazy, and funny.She has high self-esteem.She was prom queen, She's very confident.Can't nobody get this chick down.She's a lover,But mess with her and you will breathe your last breath!.She has one 6 month old daughter. She is not the type who still has love for her baby daddy she hates him! She lives on her own. She owns her own salon. She has plenty of friends to keep her company, She's independent, she doesn't want a man, she has everything she could ever ask for in her little circle.

Ali'ciya Ja'nea Hopkins
** Vanessa's 6 month old little girl, she is such a sweetie pie.She is spoiled rotten,Everybody loves her. She loves her mama, She loves her daddy,but she gives him a hard time when he comes and gets her. she's a mamas girl.She loves her pooh bear and tinkerbell

Queshawn Keon Anthony
**Vanessas High School sweetheart. Her baby daddy.He's a sweet guy, he just can't stick to one girl,He loved nessa more than anything, but couldnt' control himself, now that he doesn't have her he still has his lil hoes, but is working to get her back in his life.He loves his little girl, he gives her everything that he can when vanessa ain tryna block him. He was the quarterback of there high school football team.He was prom king. He's working on getting in the NFL. He dropped his dream when he got out of high school.now he's back

Latrice "POOH" Jackson
**She is Vanessas Bestie! They have been down since kindergarten, When you seen latrice you saw vanessa, you seen vanessa you saw latrice, you wanted to fight latrice you had to go through vanessa first,You wanted to fight vanessa latrice was there. They were known as the doublemint twins back in middle school. She's a sweet girl, you don't wanna mess with her.
She loves her man Spectacular Blue Smith. They have been together since 10th grade.[5 yrs to be exact] .She loves to shop, do hair, and have her neice ali'ciya.She and spect are currently living in Miami, while everybody that she loves is back in LA.She has friends in miami but they don't compare to her girls.


Shalita Marie Andrews
** She is another one of vanessas best friends.Pooh and Nessa met her in the 3rd grade, they welcomed her with open arms.Shes a fiesty one. She is a Bisexual. Her Girls don't mind it. they know she would never cross them.She is currently working at " Misses" a women magazine that helps you through anything. She does the advice column. Her friends turn to her when they need help. Shes a down to earth girl and always there when you needs her.


Deanna Haynes
** Dee had the hardest time with Pooh. Pooh didn't like dee at first because she thought she was trying to get at spec in high school and pooh wasnt down for it.No matter how many times she tried to tell her she didn't want him she was wanted slick.Pooh wasn't still down for it. So deanna went to go talk to vanessa and showed her everything that had to do with slick and showed thats who she wanted. Vanessa talked to pooh.Pooh apologized for her actions. Vanessa, Pooh, lita, and dee started hanging out. they became the bestest of friends.Deannas down to earth, smart, funny, Crunk when she wants to be, and shes another one that you don't wanna mess with.

Corey "Slick" Mathis
** Deannas man. they been together for 4 years now. He buys her anything she wants even when she turns it down. he loves her to death. he's crazy all the time. he'll keep you laughing.He stays in the flyest gear. all of them do, but he doesn't never have a down day!..Hes ready for a baby but doesn't know how dee would ract...he know he does have something up his sleeve for her though

Spectacular Blue Smith
** He's so sweet, He loves to fight though. but he has done calmed down since getting in the rap industry. Him and his girl pooh lives in miami. He misses LA alot. He loves his girl pooh, he says she wifey, he wants a family with her. He would lay down and die for her. he protects her in everyway.She is his rock, He has no family, They all disowned him when he was 13 he stayed from then.They have the most funniest story of how it all started with them.


here goes a post telling about the characters
deanna and latrice hopes you both like yours ..
if not your welcome to redo it and send it to me.

ADD COMING SOON WHEN I GET BACK ON...!!

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michelle

I like mine. What he mean he got sum up his sleeves? He think he "Slick". Lol