Welcome to The Review, a spot dedicated to both story writers as well as story readers. In this post, you can expect to find reviews of several stories that I’ve read. If you would like to have your story reviewed, go ahead and post your link and I’ll get back to you as soon as possible.

About The Review
The review is an idea that I came up with on my own shortly after joining Unique Critique, formerly known as Ambush Squad. Known as the nice one of U.C, I decided to offer constructive criticism to story writers in hopes to help the writer fix their mistakes before their story got blasted by unhappy readers. Although I thought I was being nice, some writers became offended and some of their readers were also offended. I figured starting this post would let some of you know that I’m not out to convince you to end your stories. Instead, I only want to help you improve on your writing skills.

The Review is also for story readers. Perhaps if you’re interested in reading a good story, you could stop by here to pick up a link to a story that I’ve reviewed. Personally, I think I did a good job of keeping my story readers happy, so I think you all will be pretty satisfied with my story reviews.

Things You Need To Know
1. This is my post, so only MY opinion matters in this post. (No offense, but this was my idea and I hate when other people jump on my ideas. I got this)
2. If you don’t respect MY opinion, leave. You don’t have to ask for my help or accept the help I offer you.
3. I will be reviewing more than just the stories ya’ll ask me to review, especially if ya’ll aint asking me to review anything.
4. I will be posting an index of the stories I reviewed and what page the reviews are on.
5. Last but not least, you might want to check my credentials. I have three stories in my siggy. Only one is active at the moment, For the Love of Money.

Rules
1. Don't post any more than 2 stories at a time.
2. Don’t rush me.
3. Don’t expect me to read your whole story if it’s long. I’ll read enough for an opinion
4. You can ask me to review it more than once if you’re not happy with your first review, but that’s only if you’ve edited your story.


That’s all I can think of right now. I’ll post more if I think of something else.

Index
Lies && [C O N F U S I O N] - pg 2
Unbreakable - page 2
( misinterpreted) endeavors - pg 3
Stranger - page 4
*A Untold Story*Novel* - page 4
*DEATH BEFORE DISHONOR* - page 4
UnExpected - page 5
Not So Perfect - page 6
How It All Began |A Slick Story| M21 - pg 7
Thug Life - pg 7
The Down Fall of a Model - pg 7
*~~*The truth about us*~~* - pg 7
Fatal Desire - pg 7
Fast Lane - pg 8
Vibrator - pg 8

This message has been edited. Last edited by: Literary_Assassin,

Okay

love the concept.
-happy the nice one is doing this lol

lol thank you

What she mean by thee " nice one "?

Anyways, big upps to SHAY
=]

since we talkin` about stories . . . uhhh when you adding to your`s ??

How`s about you go && review mines?
Thanks.

shonda.. u know better

quote:

Originally posted by `thee arsonist||:
How`s about you go && review mines?
Thanks.

Lies and Confusion?

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Originally posted by Literary_Assassin:
shonda.. u know better

sorry !

yeah. that`s my only story.
=]

Unbreakable

yayyy. i got two stories to review. i feel like i got my own lil lemonade stand now.

lmao.

[ throws you five cents )

lol i'mma use that