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::MiA::
I woke up in a house that wasn't mine, in a bed that wasn't mine, in clothes that weren't mine, next to a man that wasn't mine. I couldn't remember anything after meeting Marcus for a party last night. Why wasn't I at home now? Who was this man in bed with me? And why do I feel so drawn to him? I watched him sleep as he had his back turned to me.I slowly sat up in the bed and grabed the bottle of water on the night stand next to me.I took a long drink and and stared at the guy next to me. I slowly placed my hand in his shoulder and followed it all they way down to his hand. He started waking up and took my hand in his. He turned over and looked me dead in the eyes. Marcus. "Hi" I managed to say low. "You ok Mia?" He asked me still holding my hand. "I guess. What happend last night?" I asked taking my hand back and looking at the big shirt on my body. "Well what do you think happened?" He asked with a chuckle as he took the bottle of water and drank some. "Oh my god, Marcus, did we have sex?" I asked ashamed. "No, we didn't have sex Mia." he said giving the water back. "Oh" I said with a sigh of relif. "We didn't have sex Mia,we made love." He said. "WHAT?!" I shouted. "I'm just messing with you girl, you good. We didn't do anything." He said laughing. "Don't do that" I said pushing him playfully. "Ok I'm sorry." He said smiling at me. "But we do have to talk about last night." he said getting serious. He looked me dead in my eyes and told me everything that went on last night. I was speechless. All I wanted to do was run as far from him as possible. I had made a complete fool of myself. And had the headache to prove it. One night away from my fiance` and I lose all sense of control? What he must think of me. What can I possibly say to him? Just then Spec came in the room. I didn't move but he came and kissed me on the top of my head. I felt sick to my stomach. How could I be so careless? It was nice to know that the two of them took care of me like that. My head was killing me and all I wanted to do was go back to sleep. It was late afternoon and I had slept all day but I was still so out of it. "You feeling better mama?" Spec asked ploping down on the bed next to me. "Umm I dont know. I'm sorry you guys, and thank you so much for letting me stay, but I think it's time for me to head home." I said looking around the room for my clothes. "My mom is probably wondering where I am." I rambled on, not wanting to talk about the encounters that had taken place last night. "Umm ok I'll take you home since I'm on my way out anyways." Spec said. "That would be great." I said pushing the hair out of my face. "Here." marcus said handing me the bottle of asprin. "You look like you need this." he continued. "Yeah, I do." I said taking the bottle and popping two pills into my mouth. I grabbed my dress and heels and turned to Spec, letting him know I was ready. I didn't feel like getting back into that skin tight dress or my heels so I held them. Marcus grabbed my arm before I could leave and studied me hard. "We'll see eachother soon right?" He asked me. "Umm I dont know. I guess we will, but I am here for work so I will be busy." I said not looking him in the eyes. He stepped closer to me and lifted my chin so our eyes would meet. "We will see eachother again right?" He asked again. "Yes." I said reluctantly. He held me close in a tight hug and whispered in my ear that he was sorry he let this happen to me. I whispered back that I was sorry he had to see me like that. I then turned and walked out of the door with Spec. He drove me home, and for the most part it was quiet. I didn't want to hear the music because it made my head feel worse. I sat back with my eyes closed and let myself drown in my thoughts. We finally pulled up into my mother's drive way. "well thanks for everything Spec." I said with much regret in my voice. "He loves you Mia, you know that right?" He said catching me off guard. "What?" I siad confused. "Marcus, he loves you, he never stopped, and since you left, he has held all of the females in his life to your standars. Even...nevermind. Anyways, they are kinda impossible to meet." He said with his head hung low. "What do you want me to say to that Spec? I'm getting married." "Married? Wow. So you don't love him anymore?" He questioned. "That's not it." I started to say. "Well, look, he was my first love. But we have moved on from then. Can you understand that?" I asked him. "Well Mia, I personally, have never been in love but if I was, I would want the kind of connection I see between you and my brother. And thst connection leads me to believe first loves never die." He said. "Spec, what do you want from me?" I pleaded. "I just want you to be happy. That's it. I just thought you would like to know, Marcus never stoped loving you. You mean so much to him, and me. You are family to me and I-" He began to say before he got cut off by a knock on his window. "What are you guys doing?" Yasmine said as he rolled his window down. "Nothing, Spec just dropped me off." I said kissing Spec's cheek and using the interruption to get out of the car. "We were talkng until you interupted us shorty." He said annoyed that the conversation was cut short, but caught himself staring. "Well I'm sorry. I saw this car pulled up and I just wanted to see who it was."she said sticking her tongue out at Spec. "Man, whatever. You need to get in the house and put some clothes on though." He said trying not to stare. "Mia!" he yelled before I entered the house. "What?" I said not wanting to talk about Marcus anymore. "Come here!" He said. I walked back to his car and he gave me his number and told me we still needed to talk. I dragged Yasmine away from the car and Spec took off. I went straight up to my room and went to sleep still wearing Marcus' shirt, that smelled just like him. I didn't know what exactly I felt for Marcus anymore, but I knew something big was going to happen this summer that would change my life... ... This message has been edited. Last edited by: c r e e, ____________________________________________________ CHECK OUT MY STORiES! 1ST[LOVES] NEVER DiE. ::TORCH:: |
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::MARCUS::
It's been about two weeks since I last saw Mia, that day when she left my house with Spec. I thought maybe she might be avoiding me. Then I remembered she would be here all summer, for work. Maybe she just needed time to get on her feet with this new job. I couldn't stop thinking about her. She just came in and turned my whole life around in the blink of an eye. I gave up on ever seeing her again, and there she was in that restaraunt with Yasmine. I gotta get her back now. She's not married, she's engaged. That tells me there's still time to make her realize she needs to get with me! I had just finished getting dressed when I heard my doorbell ring. I put my chain on and headed down to get it. I opened it and there in front of me stood Mia. She was dressed up in a suit with her hair pulled back in a tight ponytail. She stood there with a smile that warmed my heart. "Mia, I wasnt expecting you." I said shocked. "You weren't?" She questioned walking past me, into the house leaving the scent of the strawberry shampoo. The same shampoo she had been using all her life. "Um no. I wasn't. Should I have been?" I asked closing the door and following her to the couch. She sat down and crossed her legs, exposing her beautiful thighs just slightly. "Well, you were the one that said we would see eachother. And here I am." She said with a smile, exposing her deep dimples. I was mezmorized by her. I always thought she was the most beautiful woman that I had ever met. "Is this a bad time Marcus?" She asked breaking my trance. "Uh no, why would you think that?" I asked back. "I dont know, you just seem a little distracted." She said looking me up and down. If I was distracted it was because she was distracting me! I watched her lips with every word she said. Damn." Come on Marcus, focus" I kept telling myself. "Distracted? No, not at all." I said as my phone started to vibrate on the counter. I got up and answered it. It was my nigga Clete, telling me he was ready for me to come to the studio so we could finish up the track we had been working on. "Now? Yeah nigga I got you." I said looking over at Mia who was watching me. "Hey man, I got a friend coming with me today. Ok see you in 10." I said before hanging up. "You wanna ride with me Mia?" I said with a smile. "Ride where Marcus?" she asked with an even bigger smile. "To the studio. I want you to hear me sing." I said licking my lips. "I've heard you sing Marcus." She said folding her hands. "Just come on girl!" I said pulling her up off the couch and over my shoulder. "Okay Marcus! Okay! Just put me down!" She laughed. I put her down and we walked out. She got in my car and we were off. On the way there, she told me about her first couple of weeks workng and how excited she was. I loved to watch her talk aout her job. Her face lit up like a little kid on Christmas. I could tell she was happy. I liked that .When we pulled up to the stuio,I took her in and introduced her to Clete. "Clete, this is Mia Ramirez, an old friend." I said smiling. "Oh damn P you couldn't warn a nigga? Baby girl is gorgeous!" He said, then kissed her hand. "Why thank you. Nice to meet you." She said smiling big. "Dimples too?!" He said excited. "Can you do a lil' spin if you dont mind?" He asked her. She did and giggled a little. "Now you need to be thankig god for this one right here P! She got a body that don't quit!" he complimented. "Thank you." She laughed. "Ok so you wanna get in first or what? I asked cutting their laughter short. "Yeah man, let me get in there." He said walking into the booth. I sat at the controls and pulled up a chair next to me. Mia sat down and folded her legs. She kills me with that. I started the song and watched her reaction as my voice came out strong. She looked im pressed. That made me smile. We sat as Clete layed down his first verse and I fumbled around on the controls. I paused the music and asked him how he felt about that. "Let's take it one more time man." He requested. I replayed it and he tried again. "Pleasure P huh?" Mia said to me as Clete was doing his thing. "Yeah, that's my stage name." I replied. "I like it, that's cute." She said smiling. "Thank you, a lot of the ladies like it too." I joked. "Oh, I'm sure." She said with laughter. I paused the music again and Clete came out. I walked in and told him I wanted to redo the begining. He started the music, and I sang my heart out. Fuckin' in the bedroom, clothes by the door, shawty what it do Got a nigga goin' cause that pussy tight, keep ridin', takin' dick all night I listened to Clete rap and picked it right back up again. Fuckin' in the bedroom clothes by the door, shawty what it do Got a nigga goin' cause that pussy tight, keep ridin', takin' dick all night Pussy got grip like an animal it stay wet like a waterfall Gettin' off deep feels so right keep ridin, takin' dick all night [x2] shawty keep takin' it, takin' it, takin' it i'ma take you to the boom boom room i'm like zoom zoom zoom I could see Clete talking to her and she noded her head at me. She was impressed. And she liked what she heard. I told Clete to let me do the chorus once more and the whole time I did, our eyes were locked. I sang to her. Only for her. I came out and let Clete get in again. He began his second verse. "So what you think?" I asked her. "You were amazing Marcus. I mean, "Pleasure"." she smirked. "No, call me Marcus. That's who I am to you. Not pleasure." I said. "Ok marcus, you were amazing. I loved every second of it." She said with a sincere smile. She loved every second of it. Wow. That felt good to hear her say that. I'm so glad she got to hear me sing. Clete finished up, and stayed in for the third verse. He knocked that out in one try. I went back in and did the bridge. Then we played back our finished product "So, what you think Miss Mia" Clete asked as the song ended. "I loved it." She said excited for us. "Why, thank you shawty!" He exclaimed. "Your man really came through and blessed this track just right." He said pating my shoulder. "Oh, he's not man. But I will agree he did sound great." she said proudly. "Not your man?" He asked. "Well shit, what you doin' tonight shawty? I would love to take you around palm beach." He said slinding his chair closer to hers. "I'm gonna have to pass on that Clete, but thank you." She said with laughter. "Ok shawty, well if you ever wanna chill, or you're ever in palm beach, give me a call." He said handing her his card. "Will do." She said putting the card in her purse. "Ok, well, we are gonna get out of here Clete." I said motioning for Mia to get up. "Oh, alright nigga I'll get at you later." He said giving me dap. "It was nice to meet you miss Mia Ramirez." He added kissing her had again. "Nice meeting you too Clete." She said with a smile before we walked out. We walked to my ride and sat in the car for a minute. "Dude was all on you." I laughed. "Well what can I say? I look good." She said puting her hands on her hips. She aint never lied. "A blind man could see that." I said sitting back in my seat as I studied her. I couldn't take my eyes off her...She had this way about her, she just made me feel so...good. ___________________________________________________ ::MiA:: I could tell he was staring at me and I was doing the same. I loved how important he made me feel. Like I was the only other person in his world. Then again, it worried me, because I was engaged to be married. We wern't together, so there was no reason for him to look at me the way he did. We wern't going to be together, so there was no reason for him to love me the way he did. But how can you stop loving your first love? Is that even possible? "What?" I giggled, interupting his trance. "Nothing." He siad putting on his seatbelt and starting the car. We got back to his house and I walked over to my car. "So, I guess I will see you later?" I said unsure of why I should stay. "You dont wanna stay a while?" He asked. "Well, I have to go home and shower and get relaxed and I-" I said befroe he cut me off. "You can do all that here." He sid with a smile. "I dont have clothes here Marcus." I stated. "You can put on some of my clothes. We can order a pizza and chill for a while." He said with excitement. "I dont know Marcus." I said unsure. "Come on Mia. It's been such a long time, and I feel like we still have so much to catch up on." He said pouting. "Ok Marcus." I said with a sigh. "Cool" He said, taking me under his arm into the house. We walked up stairs and Marcus let me pull out a pair of his shorts and one of his shirts. I selected a pair of blue basketball shorts and a black wife beater. He got me out a towel and everything I needed to shower. I walked into the bathroom, and turned on the shower for me. It was huge! He could fit 10 people in there! "I'll go order the pizza and let you dou your thing" He said walking out and closing the door. I undressed and walked into the shower. He had the biggest shower, and shower head I had ever seen. The hot water quicky filled the bath room with steam. I let it hit my body and relax my muscles. It felt so good that I just closed my eyes and let the water consume me. I thought about my day and how I liked my boss and how Marcus had taken me to the studio. I had a lot of fun. Suddenly I felt a soft kiss on my shoulder. I turned around to see Marcus standing infront of me. _____________________________________________________ ::Yasmine:: I was running late and weaving in and out of traffic. I finally got to ViVID(the name of the club I was working at.) I ran inside and tried to sneak past Jaylen. "Yasmne, I see you girl." He said walking up to me. "Why are you late? Again." He asked sternly. "I'm sorry Jaylen, it's just that I had to wait until my mom left out so she didn't ask where I was going, and she took longer than expected to leave. It won't happen again, I promise." I said out of breath. "Alright, girl, you make sure it don't happen again. Go in the back and get ready. We got a big baller coming through tonight. You think you ready to hit the big stage?" He asked me. "Um..I'm not too sure." I said scared. "Well, then, you are gonna be working the private room. We got some very powerful dudes in miami coming throuh. Do what ever they ask as long as they are within the rules. Can you handle that?" He asked. "Yeah." I said. I knew what he was getting at. There were some thug ass dudes coming throuh here tonight and they were gonna test how far I would go tonight. I was confident that that I could handle my own. I enjoyed the dancing more than being on the pole anyways. So I always tried to stay in the rooms giving lap dances and what not. I headed to the back and saw that my girl Pooh was already there. She was talking to one of the girls (DeAnna). I put my things in my locker, and headed over to where they were sitting and greeted them both with a hug. "Hey yall." I said tiredly. "Hey girl you alright?" D asked. "Yeah. I'm just tired. What are yall doing tonight?" I asked them. "I'm working the private party." Pooh told me. "Im working the front stage twice tonight!" D said. "Oh ok! Getting that money I see." I laughed. "Hell yeah." she laughed. We sat and talked for about 45 minutes until Jaylen came back and told us to get up and get ready for tonight. By then, there were about seven of us in the room all joking with eachother and getting dressed. I put on [a tight fited blue outfit and did my make up. I sprayed myself with my victoria secret glitter and was ready to go. I waited for Jaylen to come back and tell me I was on. He did so and I enter through the back. I could hear the men enter the room, I got butterfles in my stomach, waited for the music to start playing and then walked my sexy walk out into the middle of the floor. I saw a familiar face in the crowd and my mind went blank. It was Marcus' younger brother Spec. Right there in front of me. "So who here is the birthday boy?!" I said over their cheers. They all raised their hand except Spec. I knew he had figured out who I was and was in shock. Pooh, soon walked in after me wearing a black outfit that was similar to mine. "So I hear we got a birthday boy in her!" She said taking some of the attention off of me. One of the guys acrossed the room called me over and asked me if I would give them a lap dance. I did as requested and I held nothing back. Out of the corner of my eye, I could see Spec watching me. I had to talk to him before he left. If he told my sister, she would kill me. Pooh and I did a dance together and had them all going crazy. I danced my way over to Spec and seductivly sat on his lap. "Is this seat taken?" i said smiling. ... leave comments and bump to see know what happens next. This message has been edited. Last edited by: c r e e, ____________________________________________________ CHECK OUT MY STORiES! 1ST[LOVES] NEVER DiE. ::TORCH:: |
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wowwwww!! u r hella talented girl
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