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::MARCUS::
I was in the middle of the big crowd, dancing with this chick that had been sweatin' me all night. I spoted Mia coming back down stairs and excused myself from the dance. I made my way through the crowd and met Mia at the bottom of the stairs. "Hey, you ok?" I asked. She appeared to be more drunk than when she left me. Her breathing was heavy, she was sweating and she couldn't even look me in the eyes. She bit down on her lip and ran her hand down my chest. "I'm fine marcus. Come on let's dance!" With that, she took my hand, and led me through the crowd. I went with her and as we walked to the side of the room. She pushed me up against the wall. And tugged a bit at my pants when "Closer" by NeYo came on. She turned around and placed my hands on her hips. She began to grind on me and I moved with her. I wanted her, more than anything, but something about this didn't feel right. She looked so good tonight, but she wasn't herself. I shouldn't have let her get so drunk her first night back. "Mia, you alright?" I asked as we continued to dance. "mmm I feel so good right now." She said as her breathing got heavier. "You need some water? You don't sound too good." I said ready to walk away. "No, Marcus! Don't let go. Just dance with me." she turned us around so that she was now on the wall. She pulled me by my collar and kissed me hard. "Mia, what's with you girl?" I asked confused. "I need to feel you marcus, please. I want you." She said with the blankest look in her eyes. "Mia..." I said to her. Her eyes closed, and she started sliding down to the floor. "I...I." She couldn't even speak. "MIA?! SHIT..." I picked her up and moved through the crowd back up to the stairs. "Marcus, are we going to bed now?" She asked as she held onto my neck the best she could. "Shhh. Don't talk ok?" I said rushing upstairs. I took her up to my room, closed the door, and put her down on the bed. I moved the hair out of her sweaty face and looked into her eyes. "Mia, are you...high?" I questioned noticing the glassy look in her eyes. "Me? Never. I've never done drugs. You know that." She said as she slurred her words. She fell asleep instantly and I had no idea what was wrong with her. I ran down stairs to Spec and he came back up with me. "Man, tell me what's wrong with her." I said with panic in my voice. "Ok, go get water, lots of it, and get some asprin." He said getting by her side. I did as he told me and set it on the night stand. "What's wrong?" I asked. "She got something in her man. She's fucked up. We need to find whoever gave her the drugs in her system and find out what it is. I will go handle that. You need to get her up and make her drink this water." He said walking towards the door. I got a cool rag from the bathroom and sat on the bed,took her in my arms, and pated her down with the rag. I called to her softly, nothing. I ran my fingers across her warm cheek, nothing. I leaned in and kissed her lips, nothing. "Please Mia, wake up baby. I gotta figure out what happened to you." She moved a little and I finally woke her up. "Hey Marcus." She smiled at me weakly. "Is the party over?" "No Mia. Not yet." I said softly. "Then why are we up here?" She asked as her breathing started to get heavy again." I was having fun." She said as her eyes slowly started to close. "Shh dont talk. Just drikng some of this." I handed her the bottle of water. "Is this like the drink I had earlier?" She asked me. "That was good." "What drink Mia?" I asked confused. "That drink the man in this room gave me earlier. He was nice to let me have some. You're nice too for sharing." she said with a smile. She wasn't making any sense. Spec came in the room. "Oh good she's up. Well this is what I found out: there was some guy that was spiking drinks with ecstacy. My dude, Dave told me what he looked like but I think he left." He told me. "ecstacy, huh? Well it feels really good." Mia said as she drank the water. "What should we do?" I asked Spec. "She can't go home like this, miss Laila would kill you. She gon' have to sleep it off here." He told me taking off her gold heels. "Just let her sleep in here tonight and we will figure the rest out tomorrow." He said moving her heels onto the dresser. "Alright man, thanks. Get these people out the house. The party's over." I said. "Yeah aight." He said before walking off, closing the door behind him. "Are we gonna have a sleepover Marcus?" Mia asked, crawling to the head of the bed and getting in the covers. "Um yeah shawty, we gon' have a sleepover." I said walking into my closet and changing clothes. I got one of my shirts out for mia and threw on some basketball shorts. When I came back to the bed she was sleep. I undressed her and put the shirt on her. I got on the other side of the bed and watched her sleep until I fell asleep beside her. ... leave comments. This message has been edited. Last edited by: c r e e, ____________________________________________________ CHECK OUT MY STORiES! 1ST[LOVES] NEVER DiE. ::TORCH:: |
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I CANT EVEN BELIEVE THAT. EXTACY? DEN HE GONE LEAVE LIKE HE AINT DO NOTHIN LOL
BUMPZZZZZZZZZZZZZ Me and my sis Lauren  Me and Candy Poo  Me and Triyanna  Me and some of my girlies  |
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'upz' `SiGGY`.ft. AALIYAH  ♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥. |
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BUT UNTIL DEN, LUV YA LEAD, FOLLOW, OR GET OUT THE WAY!!!!!! IF OPPORTUNITY DOESN'T KNOCK BUILD A DOOR!!!!! CAST CALL INFO: NAME: JAZZALYN AGE: 16 OR WATEVA U NEED MAN: PLIES, SPEC, PLESSURE, MARIO, TREY SONGZ LOOK LIKE: GABRIELLE UNION OR  |
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im gon try to add today but its gon be short because i got final exams tomorrow wednesday and thursday but ill do a lil something 4 yall!
____________________________________________________ CHECK OUT MY STORiES! 1ST[LOVES] NEVER DiE. ::TORCH:: |
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ok really gonna add 2day...happy birthday to my big sis lael! the big 18!ily.
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Upz..u need any more ppl?
♥ DeAnna ♥ |
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motherfucker i fucking hate u.write me back dottop@yahoo.com.u all ready known bitch.Where u be at? because i want to fight.
real name... Alrena |
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wow umm do we know eachother? ____________________________________________________ CHECK OUT MY STORiES! 1ST[LOVES] NEVER DiE. ::TORCH:: |
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::YASMiNE::
I woke up and looked all over for Mia, but she wasnt home. I knew she would be happy to see Marcus, but spending the night with him? Did she forget she's engaged to be married? I will have to talk to her later. I have a job interview to go to, at Vivid with my best friend pooh! Where is she? Always late! I looked myself over in the mirror and was satisfied with what I saw. I had on some light blue jean shorts and and a white tank that complimented my chest and belly ring just right. The sound of Yung Joc's "I know you see it" interupted my thoughts. I grabbed my phone, and answered knowing it was pooh. "Where you at?" I yelled. "I'm outside slut damn!" She yelled back. "Alright, I'm coming out." I said and hung up. I grabbed my coach purse, threw my phone in it, grabbed my keys off the kitchen counter, and left. I got in the car and we were off. It took us about 25 minutes to get there and were 10 minutes early for our interview. We entered the empty club and sat at the bar. A few minutes later, a man came out from the back and talked to us. "Hello ladies, are you Yasmine and Paige?" He asked as he stood behind the bar. "Yes." We said simotaniously. "Ok great, I'm Jaylen. Now, how do you ladies want to do this? Would you feel ok doing the interview together or apart? "Together." We said again simotaniously. "Alright, so do you have verification that you are both 18?" He asked. We took out our id's and continued the interview. He seemed to really like us and we liked him too. He was very laid back and the job seemed like alot of fun. We talked for about forty five minutes total before he had to go. "Oh, I'm sorry to cut this short, but I have some things I need to take care of before we open." He said. "You both seem really great and I would like to offer you the job right now. You both say you have been dance for a while right? Well I just need to see how you would be on stage, other tha that I think you're perfect." he continued. "Really?!" Pooh said excited. "Really." He replied. "Oh wow thank you so much!" I exclaimed. Just then, a beautiful woman came in through the front entrance. She was tall, dark and thick. She looked at us, smiled and came our way. "Hey Jaylen, is this the new talent?" she asked, refering to me and pooh. "Yeah." he said sounding pleased. "This is Yasmine and Paige." He said. "Call me pooh." she said holding her hand out. "Alright pooh, nice to meet you. You too Yasmine." she said shaking our hands. "do me a favor Diamond, show the girls around before they go.I'm just leaving. I'll be back later." With that he walked out. "Ok girls lets go." She said walking into the back. She gave us open lockers across the room from eachother and told us to make sure we locked our shit up. "Bitches is theivin' in here." She said. We laughed and kept looking around she took us back stage, to the private party rooms and finally to the main stage. It was so big and shiny. The club was pretty big. There were 2 big purple and green fuzzy swings on each side of the stage and tables all around the room. "You all will probably be starting on the swings until jaylen can watch you dance." She said pointing at them. "What ever you do, don't try to stand on them unless you have practiced. You will bust your shit." she continued. "Good to know." I joked. "So, you guys must have experience in dance right? He wouldn't have hired you if you didnt. So show me what you got." She said to us. We looked at eachother a little intimidated. We were dancers. Broke dancers, and that's why we descided to try stripping this summer. To get money in our pockets, so we could save up for an apartment closer to school. She sighed in what sounded like disappointment and walked up to the pole. "Ok! So you guys need help, am I right?" She said holding the pole. We both noded yes. She kicked her flip flops off, pulled herself up the pole, wraped her thighs tight around it and let the pole go from her hands. She made it look so easy, she just sat up there looking down on us. "It's not that hard. Coming up is both upper and lower body srength and coming down," she said slowly bringing her body back down. "is mostly lower body strength." She explained. We looked at her amazed. "Ok look,i have a pole in my basement. How about for the next two weeks the two of you come to my house? I will help you learn. And in two weeks you're on your own." She said putting her flip flops back on. "Really? Thank you." Pooh said. "But why would you do that for us?" I asked. "Its like this, If you come out here looking bad, we will lose customers, and that fuckin' with my money, not an option." she said. "And after two weeks you'll be able to hanlde yourselves. I will have taught you only the basics, because any more than that could cause you to be better than me, also not an option." she said walking off the stage and behind the bar. Diamond made a lot of sense. She was a hustler and i admired her for that. She took us under her wing and she let us know how it was up front. We walked over to the bar and watched as she fixed herself a drink. "So we will start tomorrow. Good?" She asked. "Yeah thats fine. What time?" I asked. "nine a.m. don't be late. You're on my time. And I hate waisting time." She said taking a sip of her drink. "Now you are free to go." she said. We said our goodbyes and left. I was excied. I was gonna be making good money, the way I wanted to, and Mami had nothing to do with it. I got this job on my own. But how would I tell her I'm a stripper?....What she doesn't know wont hurt her. Me? a stripper? I thought to myself. I knew having this job would change things. I just had no idea how much. This message has been edited. Last edited by: c r e e, ____________________________________________________ CHECK OUT MY STORiES! 1ST[LOVES] NEVER DiE. ::TORCH:: |
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THIS SHIT IS SO TRUE ~* MY FAM *~ SHANDREA {LIL SIS} SHEYONTAY { LIL SIS} WWW.MYSPACE.COM/SHERICAEATON WWW.MYSPACE.COM/KEMONDAVIS_61607 WWW.SHERICAGRANDBERRY52086@YAHOO.COM ~* MY STORIES *~ ~IF U LOOK IN MY LIFE WHAT DO U SEE?~ ( A TINKA & SPEC STORY) ~*~LOVE 2 HATE BACK 2 LOVE~*~ |
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`SiGGY`.ft. AALIYAH ♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥.♥. |
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i'm getting " true love never dies " tattood on my hip in chinese writing.
=] BYE, BITCH. ♥ |
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ooh really?!that sounds so cute! ____________________________________________________ CHECK OUT MY STORiES! 1ST[LOVES] NEVER DiE. ::TORCH:: |
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