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If You Came In This Post and You are like WTF You need to Read Following My Mother's Footsteps Another Story In My Siggy But If Not Enjoy I Can Take Criticism So Speak Your Mind After All It Is the Internet What Can I DO?
Tanisha My life has been good since I moved from Florida. I’m twenty-three years old and I’m raising my three kids happily in New York with Marcus. Everything has been so perfect. I let Jeremiah have my house, run my stores, and let Teyonna run the label. I started a new one and I’m richer than ever. I have not talk to my mother in three years. I only talk to my father and my little brother and sister. Sometimes even Monique. All I wanted was an apology. I didn’t get it so what. My baby is the queen around here. I treat all of my children equally. “mommy mommy.” “What Destiny?” “Daddy ate my candy.” “Tell your daddy I’m going to get him.” “Daddy.” She took off. I was in my little office in the house. I was doing work and faxing it to the other office. They were trying to get me to come down there to a meeting and I was trying to avoid it. Marcus came in holding her by her pants. She was squealing. “Hey baby.” “Hey boo.” He walked over and kissed me. I smiled. “You done yet?” “Almost I’m just waiting for the paper to get to them and Teyonna to tell me she got it.” It buzzed and I laid back in the chair. “Mommy me hungry.” “What do you want sweetie?” “Fry fry.” “Okay where’s your brothers.” “Game.” “Okay.” Marcus put her down and she went down the hall somewhere. I got up and Dre hugged me. “How you feel?” “Tired.” He rubbed my back. “That feels so good.” “Yeah. I bet.” I closed my eyes. Jr. came in. “Ma can you tell Destiny to stay out my room messing with stuff.” “Boy go on in there I’m tired.” “Okay.” “You did your homework?” “Yes.” “Well you and Jabari wash up and get ready to eat and tell Thumbelina I said come on.” “Okay.” He walked out. “That boy looks just like you.” “I know.” He smiled. “Marcus he’s six I feel old.” “I know me too.” He laughed. I heard Jabari about to come in and Jr. stopped him. “What her doing?” Jr. made some smacking noises as if I was kissing Marcus. “Jr. I’m going your knock your head off.” He started laughing. He smiled. We kissed anyway. “You got a little time?” “Not right now I got to cook and then we can.” “Alright.” HE rubbed my ass. This message has been edited. Last edited by: My emphasis is to get it, _________________________________________________________ Check Out My Stories Months at a time (completed) $c@nd0l0u$ Follow my mothers' foosteps POD Turning the Table (Comedy) In Love With You A Keysie And Midnight Story Waiting To Exhale The Space's www.myspace.com/06vixen www.myspace.com/dabaddestsgoodie |
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Of Course I expected Not to Get Any Bumps
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And Look At ALL Those Views
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smh....
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smdh
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<Teyonna> “Baby that’s still not working because she did everything and she’s staying.” “Well why don’t I call her and tell her that ma’s sick?” “She wouldn’t give a rat’s ass if Neisha was sick.” “Well what then because I miss my sister.” “Me too baby.” “I bet Jr. has got so big.” “Yeah he’s six she sent a picture look.” HE looked at the screen. “Wow.” He smiled. “Hold on another picture.” I pulled it up and saw them. All of them. “Oh My God.” I smiled. They were so big. Jr. finally got his earring and Jabari got one too. I smiled. Destiny was so perfect. “I got an idea. I’m going to play sick.” “How?” “Never mind I can’t lie to her about anything like that.” “I know.” “Well how about tell her our secret and let her come down here and see her new little nephew.” “Alright.” Oh yeah I’m pregnant with a little boy. I’m seven almost eight months. I’ll call her now. “Hello.” “Hi.” “Hello.” “Tanisha?” “What who is this?” “Your sister butthead.” “Oh hey Te-te what you doing?” “Nothing but calling you to tell you I would like for you to come and visit.” “You can come up here?” “Pregnant women can’t fly.” “What?” “You get another nephew?” “How far long are you?” “Seven months.” SHe yelled. I put the phone down and started laughing. “Teyonna I’m coming at the end of the week and I’m kicking your ass.” I picked the phone up. “Bye.” I was happy.
<Tanisha> “All flights headed to Miami are taking off in ten minutes please make sure…” “Marcus ya’ll situated?” “Yeah baby.” I waited. My jet was taking off in a few seconds. Marcus put his head on my shoulder once we were in the air. Destiny was sleep and Jr. was sleep. Jabari was playing some kind of Game that Marcus bought him. “Baby?” “What boo?” “Meet me in the bathroom.” “Alright.” He got up. “Bari we going to see about ya’ll getting some snacks.” “Pizza.” “Okay baby.” I saw the only flight attendant I had on the plane. “Can you bring my son some pizza.” “Sure Mrs. Cooper.” “Thank you.” “Sure.” I knocked on the door and he opened it. He pulled me in. He locked it. We kissed. “My baby.” It was funny. He pulled his pants down just enough and went to work on me. He closed his eyes like he had not had none in a while and he had just got some this morning. I just held on and kept from screaming. He had me so folded up that my knees were hitting the wall every time he went in. I just breathed as quiet as I could and held on. <Teyonna> I went to the airport and picked her up. I couldn’t wait. I was about to jump out of my skin. I saw the plane when it landed. I covered up my little belly. Okay big belly and went out the door. They stopped and were getting off the plan. Marcus first. I guess that was Jr. He was second. Jabari next and then her and Destiny. “Oh My God.” She handed Destiny to Dre and ran over to me. We hugged. “Aw man you’re huge.” “I know.” She smiled. She was just like I remembered had not changed a bit. “I missed you man.” “I missed you too.” Jr. ran over. “Te-te.” I hugged him. “Hey Jr.” “Where’s Jaden?” “With your Uncle Jay. Man you are too big.” “So are you?” “Shut up.” He laughed. Jabari acted shy and Destiny looked. “Destiny come here sweetie this is your Aunt Te-te.” She walked over. “Hi.” She waved. I smiled. “Can I have a hug?” She nodded. I bent down as far as I could and hugged her. “Tanisha she’s adorable.” “I know it. Jabari come tell your auntie hey.” He waved. He wouldn’t smile because he didn’t have any teeth. Jr. didn’t care he said he looked better with out them. “So you ready?” “Yeah sure.” Marcus smacked. “Nigga I was playing come here.” We hugged. He was bigger. Muscular and he smelled nice. We went to the car and went to the house. “You changed everything?” “Well.” She looked around. “So where am I sleeping?” “In here and the boys in here.” “Wait I added two bedrooms downstairs and that meant it should be eight rooms in this house.” “Jay turned one into an office, another one is the baby’s room, Jaden’s room.” “Who are the other rooms?” “Jamir stays here and when S’Miyah comes she has a room.” “Damn.” “I know.” <Tanisha> Marcus had showed them where to put their stuff. “Look nice. You have a pool?” “Well Jay wanted one so we got it.” “Oh.” I smiled. “Wow Teyonna you really kept the place up.” “I tried.” “Hey um how’s Simone?” “She’s fine she misses you. She comes over. She should have been here though she was bringing S’Miyah.” “Oh.” I was somewhat nervous. The doorbell rang. She walked in. “Hey.” She just stared like she couldn’t believe it was me. “Hey.” She smiled. “Bitch I thought you were never coming back.” I smiled. We hugged. She was so happy. “We have so much to catch up on.” “Yeah.” She frowned. “Where the kids?” “Jr.!” They all came running. “Oh My goodness Tanisha they are big. “Simone.” Jr. hugged her. “Hey sweetie.” “Where’s S’Miyah.” “Here she comes.” She looked out the door. She was coming in with Jamir. He smiled. “Well I’ll be damned.” We hugged. I had not seen my big brother since that day I walked out of the county when my mother slapped me. “I missed you apple head.” Destiny laughed. “Mommy he called you apwle head.” He laughed. “She’s so big.” “Yeah.” I sighed. He hugged all of them. Marcus and him shook hands. I smiled. Simone watched. “So Simone you and Jamir back together?” “No, we just friends.” “Fuck friends?” “Something like that.” I laughed. I yawned. “Marcus baby watch the kids and take them to see Angela.” “Okay I get to see my mommy.” He smiled. I kissed him. He wrapped his arms around me. “You know baby when I come back I want a little love from you.” “You just got some on the plane and this morning.” Everybody was in our mouth. He looked at them and backed up. He back into the bedroom. I smiled. “Marcus you’re not getting any butt.” “I’ll kiss whatever you want me to kiss baby.” “Um. Kiss my ass.” He smiled. He unzipped my pants, pulled them down, and kissed my ass. “Alright. Hurry back.” He kissed my cheek. “I love you.” “I love you too.” We hugged. “Mommy.” I heard Destiny. She didn’t know anybody so she was probably scared. She opened the door and dre picked her up. “Come on we’re going to see your grandma.” “Neisha?” “Nah Jr. Angela.” “Okay.” He was happy.” They all went out the door. I sighed and fell back on the bed. They all came in and sat down. I began to tell about everything that happened up until now. _________________________________________________________ Check Out My Stories Months at a time (completed) $c@nd0l0u$ Follow my mothers' foosteps POD Turning the Table (Comedy) In Love With You A Keysie And Midnight Story Waiting To Exhale The Space's www.myspace.com/06vixen www.myspace.com/dabaddestsgoodie |
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Well you can space things out, because it hard to read..and you should think about re-writing the way you type your story, bcecause you not going to get as much support as you want...
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cool
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~*:iM HiSTORY iN THE MAKiN SO SHUT THE FUCC UP ND LET Mii MAK iT:*~ |
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I was gonna say the same thing...space it out a bit but other than that it's good....UPZZZZ
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