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 [[big thanks to breeze for the banner!]] This is a story about a girl named Mia Ramirez and her 1st true love, Marcus cooper. Marcus and Mia have been friends for as long as they can remember. Their mothers were bestfriends theire entire lives and so they grew up together. They shared their first kiss at the age of ten, Mia lost her virginity to Marcus when she was 16. And got her heart broken by Marcus when she was 18. Marcus stayed in Miami and persued his dream of becoming a singer and Mia went to college in New York to become a fashion designer. Now, Marcus,who is 22 and Mia who is 21(going on 22 in the summer.) dont know it, but they are about to get a blast from the past. Mia has two sisters. There is Yasmine who is three years younger than her. She is a dancer and in her senior year at bayside high in miami. Then there is Sonya,who is a year and a half older than her, living in miami working as a nail tech in her own salon. Marcus has 1 brother, Spectacular is a year younger than him. Mia is home for the summer of her senior year in collge and interning for a new and upcoming fashion designer named Anya McBride. ---------------------------------------------------- Mia got off the plane and immediately called her mother, Laila. "Hey mami." "Hey sweetie. Did u land?"Laila asked with excitement in her voice. "Yeah. I'm on my way to pick up my bags right now. Are you here yet?" "Yes im waiting outside." "ok great! I will get my bags and be right out." Mia said before hanging up. She picked up her bags and made her way to her mother's car. They hugged and were on their way back to Laila's house. "Are you hungry baby? We can stop off for luch if you want." she offered. "No I'm ok. I'm just really excited to see Yasmine and Sonya! How are they?" "Just as crazy as ever Mia. I dont even know what to do with Yasmine anymore. That's why I'm glad you're here this summer. Maybe you can help her with a job? She doesn't want to go to school, I think she just wants to spend my money for the rest of her life!" Laila joked. "And Sonya as ben so caught up in her salon I haven't seen her lately. She calls at least once a week though." She informed her. "Well i will help anyway I can mami. I'm just so glad to be back. I'm sorry I stayed away so long, I've just been living the busiest life." Mia stated. "So you keep telling me in your emails. When do I get to meet this fabulous fiance' of yours anyways?" She asked curiously. "Greg? He wants to come down for about two weeks in july for my birthday. So, soon." She said admiring her engagement ring. "Oh I'm so excited!" "Oh and guess what, If this internship goes well, when i graduate at the end of the summer, Greg and I plan on moving back down here to Miami!" she said with excitement in her voice. "Oh baby, that is just the best news!" She said excitedly. They made it to the house and caught up on everything that had gone on in New York for Mia. And how things had changed back home In Miami. An hour after being home, Mia's little sister Yasmine came home and joined them. "I've missed you Mia." Yasmine said as she hugged her sister. "Hey ma, do you think I can take Mia out to dinner?" she asked. "I dont see why not. As long as she's ok with it." Laila said from the kirchen. "Sounds fun. Lets go!" Mia said hopping up. Yasmine took her sister to a local restaraunt. Where they laughed and caught up about everything for hours. When they got ready to leave a man approached them. "Mia? Mia Ramirez?" said the dark chocolate man in front of them. "I'm sorry, do I know you?" Mia asked as she took a step back. "Yeah, I'm an old friend." He said. She took a deep look into his eyes, and it clicked instantly. "Marcus Cooper?! Is it rerally you?! leave comments. This message has been edited. Last edited by: c r e e, ____________________________________________________ CHECK OUT MY STORiES! 1ST[LOVES] NEVER DiE. ::TORCH:: |
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__________________________ NAME::Paige Brown Nickname: Muffin , Pooh, New New, Twix AGE::16 or 18 PERSONA:  own To Earth, Goofy, Shy If I Just Met You,Shy to sing around a whole of ppl, Boi-crazi,Always Trying To Make Someone Happy, Always Trys To Help Even If I Know I Cant, Funny, Loves Music, Not a fighter buh if yuh mess wit ma fam, friendsz or me, expect to get cussed out, Unless Someone threatinsz Me First, Likes To Have The Last Word, Truthful , Always Says Whats On My Mind. Loves Life And Plans To Live It To the Fullest, sorta scary KYDSZX::A GiRl NaM3D S3R3NiTY n' A Boii NaM3D Rickii Gomez ___________________________ Month One Mommy, I am only 8 inches long, but I have all my organs. I love the sound of your voice. Every time I hear it, I wave my arms and legs. The sound of your heart beat is my favorite lullaby. Month Two Mommy, today I learned how to suck my thumb. If you could see me, you could definitely tell that I am a baby. I'm not big enough to survive outside my home though. It is so nice and warm in here. Month Three You know what Mommy, I'm a girl !! I hope that makes you happy. I always want you to be happy. I don't like it when you cry. You sound so sad. It makes me sad too, and I cry with you even though you can't hear me. Month Four Mommy, my hair is starting to grow. It is very short and fine, but I will have a lot of it. I spend a lot of my time exercising. I can turn my head and curl my fingers and toes, and stretch my arms and legs. I am becoming quite good at it too. Month Five You went to the doctor today. Mommy, he lied to you. He said that I'm not a baby. I am a baby Mommy, your baby. I think and feel. Mommy, what's abortion? Month Six I can hear that doctor again. I don't like him. He seems cold and heartless. Something is intruding my home. The doctor called it a needle. Mommy what is it? It burns! Please make him stop! I can't get away from it! Mommy!! HELP me!! No . . . Month Seven Mommy, I am okay. I am in Jesus's arms. he is holding me. He told me about abortion. Why didn't you want me Mommy? Every Abortion Is Just . . . One more heart that was stopped. Two more eyes that will never see. Two more hands that will never touch. Two more legs that will never run. One more mouth that will never speak. Put this in your signature if you don't belive in abortion! ++__________ paige Mz.Spec Mz.N3WN3W2008 Mz.Pooh Bear |
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YEAH U CAN BE IN IT LET ME GET UR INFO ____________________________________________________ CHECK OUT MY STORiES! 1ST[LOVES] NEVER DiE. ::TORCH:: |
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The three of them stood in the middle of the restaraunt and stared at eachother. Yasmine spoke first. "Hi Marcus. I'm sure you remember my sister mia." she said with a smile on her face. "Of course I remember her. How are you?" He asked curiously. "Im fine." she replied still in shock that he was standing right in front of her. "Well I'll let yall catch up." Yasmine said as she headed for the door. "Wait yasmine, where are you goin?!" Mia asked. "Out. Marcus can take you home." she said. And with that, she was out the door. They sat down at a table and sat in silence. They looked at eachother and smiled then looked away again. Marcus broke the silence. "It's really good to see you again Mia." he started. "Yeah you too.Wow, you look the same." she commented. "I dont look any different? Not even the hair on my face?" he said pointing to the hairs on his chin, making her laugh. "Well that is different." She sat quiet for a moment before speaking again. "You look really good. How are things? You still singin'?" she asked as she studied his face. "I'm really good. I am actually about to release my first album this fall." He told as her shuffled the salt and pepper shaker back and forth on the table. "What are you doing back?" He asked. "I'm here interning for the summer. I'm graduating at the end of the summer instead of this spring because i wanted to graduate with high honors." she said proudly. "That's great Mia...I'm happy to see your doing so well and looking so good." He said eyeing the way her dress crept up while her legs were crossed. "Why, thank you!" She said with a smile. "So you got a man these days?" She laughed and shook her head a little. "So now we get down to the real huh?" "Well I mean, do you?" He asked again. "Yes, I'm actually engaged." She said noding her head. "Damn! engaged? That's big." He said with a change of tone. "I know." She said looking down. "Do you love him?" Marcus aked seriously. Mia looked at him in his eyes before she answered and had to answer carefully. "Um yeah, I really do. He's a good man and he really loves me. He's always been there for me through it all." She admitted. His heart sank low in his stomach. "You love him like you loved me?" Her heart skipped a beat as she searched for the words to answer his questions. "Marcus." She said with a sigh. "Do you Mia?" He questioned. "I love him marcus, but its not like our love, because you were my first love. I will always love you and you are always gonna hold a special place in my heart, but i do love him." He thought about her words. First love. "You're not just my first love Mia." He watched as she played with her fingers on the table."You are the love of my life mia."he said with hurt in his eyes. She looked up a him in shock and at a loss for words. "It's true mia. I have never loved anyone like you and I kno I never will." he commented. "Ok! This conversation is getting a little heavy. Tell me about you. Are you with anyone right now?" she asked trying to change the subject. Marcus sat quiet for a moment and thought about what to say. He had moved on after Mia. He hadn't forgotten her, ever, but he did move on and his life had changed in a big way. "No actually I'm not. I was but we broke up." He said. "Why did u break up?" She asked. "Well, we just grew apart and thought we would be better friends that's all. And we are." "Oh, well I'm glad that worked out for you. How about your brother Spectacular? How is he?" She asked with a smile at the thought of him. "He is really good. I'm proud of how he is growing up. You should come back to my crib tonight and chill with us tonight. We are having a little party around 9:30. Do you wanna come?" "Um sure. Should I change?" She asked. "Yeah. This is more of a grown and sexy party. Not that you don't look sexy right now." he said smiling. "Ok. Sounds cool." She said smiling back. "Will you take me home then? Since I am out of a ride?" she joked. "Sure baby." he said as he got up from his chair. "I mean Mia..."he said quickly. Mia smiled a little and got up too. They left and Marcus dropped Mia off at home and said he would call her in a couple of hours before he came back to get her. They hugged goodbye and she went in the house to get ready. ::later that night:: ... be back later. leave comments. This message has been edited. Last edited by: c r e e, ____________________________________________________ CHECK OUT MY STORiES! 1ST[LOVES] NEVER DiE. ::TORCH:: |
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::later that night::
::mia pov:: After I got home, I took a nice hot bath and let my mom know about my run in with Marcus. She always loved Marcus because she had known him his whole life. I unpacked my clothes and picked out a little black dress that huged my figure just right, with a brand new pair of gold heels and gold accessories.I did my make up and waited for Marcus' phone call. About fifteen minutes later he called and told me he was 5 minutes away. When he got there he came in and my mom called me down. I felt little butterflies in my stomach like the first time we ever went out on a date. I walked down the hallway to the stair case and looked down at Marcus, who was looking up at me. "Wow." was all he could say. I smiled and walked down. He was dressed in all black with a pair of gucci stunnas on. "Wow yourself." I said sounding a little nervous. "Aw! Don't the two of you look like a sight for sore eyes." Mami said as we stood next to eachother. "Thank you Ms.Ramirez." "Yall have fun tonight kids." Mami said before disappearing into the back of the house. "We will Mami. Night."I said as I opened the door. We walked out the door and to the car. He opened the door for me like old times and we were off. "So am I too over dressed for this party of yours?" I asked hoping I wasn't. "No, you look beautiful." He told me with a smile. "Thank you. So how's your mom doing?" I asked watching him as he drove the once familiar streets of my hometown. "Oh she's fine. I'm sure you'll be seeing her while you're here. Our mothers are closer than ever. All they do is shop all day." He said laughing about the two of them. i laughed too. "Really? I can believe it." I said imagining them together. We sat in silence again and then I busted out laughing. "Do you remember when we were like, 11 and we were in my room and u were showing me your lil' "manhood" so I would show you mine?! And my mom walked in on you with your pants down?!" I asked between my giggles. He laughed and shook his head. "Man do I ever. She about broke my arm off when she dragged me the two blocks back to my house screaming at me in spanish." He remaniced. I laughed as i remaniced too. "Oh man, that must have been the worst." I stated. "It was. My mom tore my ass up when I got home and your mom told her what happened. And on top of that, I didn't even get to have my chance to see your goodies!" He said with a little laugh. We laughed and continued to remanice on the good times and even some bad. "Remember when we were in the third grade and I kissed that little girl on the playground and you came up and pushed her face in the woodchips?" He asked. I remembered that day. "I have no idea what you're talking about!" I lied. "Ok, do you remember when we were freshmen and I was going out with Terry Johnson and you fought him because he bumped into you and apologized?!"I shot back. "Man, he only apologized because you made him. He really wasn't sorry, but I bet he was after I got in that ass!" He said. I laughed. "You were just jealous that I wasnt with you." I stated. "I still got you in the end though." He said as we pulled in front of a house blasting music. "yeah, you did." "And now, we have been reunited after what? Has it been three or four years now?" He asked, wondering to himself. "It's been too long Marcus." I said as we looked at eachother with deep intensity. "So, let's go inside." I said braking the silence. I jumped out of the car and walked over to marcus and grabed his arm. "Now I'm gonna be envied by every nigga up in my house." He said excitedly. "And why is that?" I asked. "Because," He started, giving me the once over. "I now have the sexiest girl in miami on my arm." He said with confidence. I smiled and we walked into the crowded, hot, noisy house. "Hey everybody, Marcus has arrived!" said a familiar voice, followed by a crowd of cheers. "I probably should've told you, Spec is djing the party. So you might not get alot of time to see him. He will be busy for most of the night." He said as he nodded to people as he made his way to the turn tables with my hand in his. "So you basically told me to come out tonight to see Spec when really I won't be able to hang out with him at all tonight? Then what are the real plans?" I asked confused but excited. "Just go with the flow, ask no questions." He said walking through the crowd. So that's what I was going to do. I held his hand tight as he took me over to see Spec. "Hey Spec, Mia is here." Marcus said into his ear. "Mia?! as in lil' sexy ass Mia that got away? Oh where she at?" He asked looking over me. "Hi Spectacular." I said with a smile on my face. "Mia?! It cant be!" He said shocked. "Its me." I said showing myself off. "DAAAAAAMMMMN! You look better than I remember girl!" He said checking me out. We huged and I kissed him on the cheek and he fell out. Marcus took my hand and led me to the kitchen. Along the way I was gettin all sorts of looks and hoes bumping into me. One even stopped me and asked me if I was his woman. Marcus made her move and we made our way to the kitchen. He got me a drink, and another, and another. Before I knew it I was gone. We danced to song after song all night. "Marcus, where's your bathroom I need to use it." I said trying my best to stay standing in my drunken state. "It's up the stairs, straight back" He told me. I made my way up the stairs. There were a few people in the hallway and in the bathroom. I made my way into a big room that was finally empty and went into the bathroom. I did my business, and when I came out a man was walking in. "Oh, I'm sorry, I was looking for another bathroom." He told me. "Oh, right through here." I pointed at the bathroom door. I took it and drank some and handed it back to him. "Thanks." I said grateful. I stumble a bit over to the door and held onto the wall for a minute. He laughed. "No problem shawty." He said with a chuckle. "Now, you enjoy the rest of your night." He disappeared into the bathroom and I walked out. As I made my way down the stairs I started to feel something taking over my body, it made me feel warm and happy inside. I coul feel myself become a little moist inbetween my legs, then everything went black. ::marcus pov:: ... leave coments. This message has been edited. Last edited by: c r e e, ____________________________________________________ CHECK OUT MY STORiES! 1ST[LOVES] NEVER DiE. ::TORCH:: |
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DANG....DIS IS GOOD STUFF GIRLIE=)....UPZ
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alright thanx 4 the suggestion. ____________________________________________________ CHECK OUT MY STORiES! 1ST[LOVES] NEVER DiE. ::TORCH:: |
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