This Is A Story.

.5feet 5inches
.Pretty thick long hair
.Thick in all the right places
.Birthday Oct.31
.Cooks And Cleans
.Can fight
.Can keep a secret
.Does'nt tell what does'nt need to be told
.Can be bold/mean
.Hobbies..Ipod,and dancing
.Has one girlfriend..Tieshawnna-Shawnna
cousin/bestie
.Enjoy's Sex
.Black,Purple (colors)

Intro.
Their was Marcus eatin cereal, watchin Basketball, a little happier than usual. "Who have you goten into lately?" Cory asked.Marcus put's his spoon back in the bowl sat back."Do you really wana know?" Marcus Asked."I dont just wana know Blue and Spec do too" Cory replied."Well I'll tell you about her" He say's."She's brown skin, thick, beautiful face, pretty hair, She stands at 5'5, Has pretty dark brown eye's that shine in the light" He Continue's."Great Sex and plus what makes this so great, She knows me, This Is'nt just another street girl". "Im Comfortable with her, She's Smart too" Marcus added.He Turn's Toward the door."There She Is"He smiles, then licks his lips."You Sex'n Our Bestfriend" Cory Shouts.

I Know This Is Short But Tell Me What You Think.
I've Spaced The First Add Out.Now I Can Move On.

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I think you should keep going.
But, space out your commas, and periods.
It makes people uncomfortable.
Proof read, and ... that's about it for now.
Update!

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BUT UPS!!

Thank You Guy's For Your Comments.Ill Add Tomorrow...

I step throught the door, with my leggings, and shirt, lookin cute! All the boy's stood there in shock,while Marcus is cheeses, Blue a.k.a Diamond sat there eating his cereal Lol."You ready Marcus"I asked.He stands."Yeah".We ran upstaires.Baby blue continues to eat, while the boy's questioned."What happend" ?...Cory Explained. "Ooooh".Diamond Sounded

I'll continue later but until then...Let me know what you think

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Nevermind what Diamond and the boy's were doing.Me and Marcus was having fun playin the game.We really were, most girls aint up for it but me..Yeah your regular tom boy."So you gone be gone for the week huh?"(Marcus) Focused on the game."Yeah." Continue's to play. "Can I get sum?"...Stares with lust in her eye. "I got you boo."

Im not gone sugar coat this for you Keymah you liked sex with Marcus...and this came about how? See Keymah and Marcus had a cool relationship..sex between them could never be expected.

Flashback
It was a very hot summer day.I mean this was Miami at it's hottest.Keymah had nothing to do that day.She called the boy's house.Marcus Answered and told her he would enjoy her company.Marcus was at the house by his self.Corey and the rest of his brothers were stuck in traffic.Weed was piled to the ceiling..Yeah she came over to smoke.Keymah Looked =AB-AFD-8308R_JET&startColor[]=JET%20JET%20BLACK&dept=shopwomen§ion=shopwomen&category=dresses]cute.
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Shortly after she got ready she was over their.Marcus didnt need to answer the door, he screamed it was open.Keymah Walked In sat on the couch.."What you get all cute for ?"..."Im just cute for no reason." Marcus laughed. "I like confidence."

Keymah and Marcus Took Bud.You know when niggas get high they Think..Damn Look Them Tiddies,Ass fat as hell too,Oooh but her tiddies look so soft...She got body.Now when I get blaze I get horny.I aint gotta to think myself I just Do It.

I Lift My Left leg Over Marcus Thighs I take Lips To neck..and put in work..Marcus Is smoothe.He still took bud..While i put it out the way.He moaned to his plaesure.And when he got done..he did me,as they agresser I kissed his soft lips..(with lust and passion)

"Come on let's go up to my room."

Without a word we went to his room.Wrapped in lust..he hit the door..(stripping)"You Want it in the shower?".."Oooh Yeah."
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The water ran.I got down on my knees..stroked and sucked his big long dick."I aint even gotta ask?" (Marcus) He Threw His Head Back Against The Wall..While my mouth contracted his dick..(strong) thrusts Of My mouth..Caused His Jaws To Clentch "Keep that up you aint gone be there to long."I swallowed..without throwing up..i pulled back..He nutts on my face..i Lick and swallow to his pleasure.
Doin Me..
iN oquired positions he sucked my pussy just right..Usually a man would just lick but this man Sucked.Bein a giirl.I moaned..He Loved Itat a constant..I nutted all over his face..within seconds of his BlowJob..Yeah he licked the NuTT right off his face like icecream.

We Fuck
He was hard i was wet and tight.He picked me up Put me in a sex position.Leg's wrapped around his back.I catch grip..and ride..moaning in a helpless kind of way..i rode Til' i was tired..i flip my hands back."im DoNe." I got on the floor..and he started doin me Real Good..you Could Tell By The Pace Of My Moans.He Was Ridin Good.i Mean I was good But He was great.

He was focused on my faial expression in a sexy way.So Sexy I couldnt bare to look him in his eye..i Mean dont get me wong i have sex all the time..but never have i been able to turn my head in ocer satisfaction.This was a good thing.He scrunch his eyebrows in a serious kind of way..As iF it was important for him to know what his dick was doin to me.We Hit Climax.he collasped on my chess.he stared at the shower floor.And i Stared at the shower ceiling...

As the cold water ran down on us from the shower in Exhaustion...

How Was I???

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damn they was getting it in the shower
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Back to present.
After Marcus walk me to my car I had to go shopping emidiately after.Me and my girl Ta'shawnna was going to another part of Florida..just for fun.So i was getting some things, for the trip..I hit several stores surching for clothes,and beauty products ect.It was hot and,the stores were packed.Shawnna Called.
"Hello."

"Dis Shawnna I Need Some Things."

She Explained.

"Alright.Im Gone Get It Now."

"Alright.Thank You."

"Your Welcome .Where you at now?"

"The House..packing"

"well alright.I see you later then."

"Bye."
I got her the things she'd need'in insurance that she would pay me back.After about two stores and, a bank, it was time to go home.Right now it's 5.I ate some left overs in my fridge.Playing music, I started to clean.Shutting my house before I left.That took a while! Shawnna had just came over.Now were in the dark,on the porch,smokin.


I just got a call from Terrance,cute and lightskin! I told him I had some left overs in the fridge for him,and he was coming to get it.Marcus called! i told him I would call him when I was ready.After me and shawnna got done, with what we was doin, I packed.Terrance came right on time.
"You and shawnna leavin for the week?"

"Yeah."

"Well I catch up with yall when you get back."

"Koo."
That was'nt all we talked about but that's all Im gone write.It had been a while..late.And now Marcus was coming!!!

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When Marcus Shawnna explained that she didnt want to be here tonight,I understood so she stayed over her friend house,and was coming in the morning.I thought it would be stupid but that didnt matter.I got in the tub and,put on this cute outfit

After I did that I turned on the television and,laid in my bed.The doorbell rung and I knew it was time to have fun! I put a robe onand,answered it.I could tell by the expression on Marcus face, he was excited.I was to.I closed the door, heat flooded the room.It felt good on my cold body."Can I see?" (Marcus) I slipt my robe off."You look so pretty."..."Thank you." We couldnt just get straight to it.We watched movies.Under the covers I felt so warm.When I least expect It Marcus moves in on me.I squinch my eyebrows as if I didnt know he was gone something like this.Whatever It was that he was doin made my hips motion up and down.It felt good as hell too! Marcus looked under the covers.Watching my body's reaction.He said it was sexy to see my hips move like this.My moans made it even better.This made him hard.And whenever he was focused on bustin a nut.He would squinch his eyebrow's and,lick his lip's.It had been long enough for me to know this.

When it really got serious.My moans grew at a constant pace.Whatever the stupid shit was that he was doin made me nut, and you could see it too! He pulled my shorts down, put his fingers up my pussy.And with a hand full of nut, He whiped it off.(I know Uhh! right).Now he could fuck me.As soon as he got in he went at a constant pace.I mean we was already feeling good without the fuck so it didnt matter that he went fast.All I know is my head was on his shoulder! my legs was wrapped around his back! And it was at a cute motion! I was moanin good.I could hear his pacing breaths in my ear.He kept going so good.I nutted in no time."Okay you ready for round two?"..."Damn you bounce rite up?"...."Where We gone do this at?"..."On the kitchen counter."I told him to give me a second.He laugh and smiled.I went upstaires to rinse off .Gave myself a second and, came back down.He did the stranges of teqniques.He put butter on the counter used something to lift my back! And layed me down! I thought it was weird.My facial expression explained it all.But he smiled in excitement and satisfaction.My panties was off so all he had to do was fuck me now.He wasn't hard so i jurked it a little bit and i wasn't wet so put a vibrator on it.We was ready to fuck.He humped me til' my eye's rolled into the back of my head.

We washed off and took a brake.Watching television while he held me that night.My room looked like This.As we sat there tention grew.And heat arrosed before I left the next morning.Pleasure I mean Marcus made the bed shake one more time!

Ja'Keyla

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