CAST:
U/Marcus
De'Andre
David
Mimi/Spec
Ariee/Chris
Amber/Diamond
Brooklynn/Trey

U are 21 years old and you have been through hell and back all ur life. u never met ur father and ur mom died when u were 10 after getting brutally raped, then beaten to death by her boyfriend at the time. after she died, u went to live w/ur grandma but u had a hard time cuz u never really got over her death. u were kind of depressed. and at the age of 17 u had ur beautiful son De'Andre. his father left u after he found out u were pregnant which was probably a good thing because all he did was beat u. so ever since u had ur son u have come across men that just used u for sex. they think oh so she has a baby she must be easy. but ur not. u were in love with the men when u gave it up to them and after they left after they hit it, that really hurt u. One guy u said no to and he ended up raping u. u have met a few nice guys but when they found out u had a baby they were gone in a heartbeat. well now ur son is 5 years old and u have just given up on men cuz u can never trust them and u are so tired of putting ur heart out, only to get it stomped on later. But ur hoping to find that one man that knows how to love u right.

This is just the intro more coming later

This message has been edited. Last edited by: ~*dat gurl nicole *~,

bumpz can't wait for da first add!!

ok here's some more!

It is now one day and u are at ur job which is a hairstylist. U are one of the best stylists in the area and u own ur own shop in Miami, which is where u live w/ur son. u do pretty good on ur own and u really don't need or want a man to take care of u. Well ur braiding this gurl's hair right now. Once ur done u see this man walk into the shop(Marcus is the guy) U look @ him cuz u think he is so fine and sexy. he looks ur way and just stares @ u. ur thinking if he's that fine he only wants one thing so u look away. he's still looking at u and u can feel him looking @ u so u look back @ him. He smiles a little bit and walks over to u.
Man- hey. what's up?
U- hi.
Man-what's ur name?
U- y/n what's urs?
Man- Marcus. but some people call me pleasure.
U- oh so ur that type.
Marcus- what type?
U-....look can i help u w/something?
Marcus- yeah i just want a cut.
U- oh ok well i can do u right now.
Marcus- iight. He sits in ur chair and u put a cape thing over him.
U-(starts cuttin' his hair) so u new around here?
Marcus- yeah just moved here last week
U- oh ok.
Marcus- so y/n u got a man?
U- i knew it was coming.
Marcus-(laughin' a lil') sry but u know i had to ask.
U- actually i do. well sort of.
Marcus- sort of?
U- yeah. well um....i have a son and i'm wit his father right now. but we break up so often i barely can say i have a man.
Marcus- oh well that's ok. how old is ur son?
U-he's 5.
Marcus- cool. even though u got a man u want a friend?
U- um... that probably isn't a good idea.
Marcus- why?
U- well David, my boyfriend gets jealous easily.
Marcus- oh ok. U kind of tilt ur head up to stretch and Marcus sees hand marks around ur neck.
Marcus-....how'd u get those hand marks on ur neck?
U-(kind of embarassed) oh um....
Marcus- does ur man beat u y/n?
U-...no. of course not. Just then ur son runs in the shop.
De'Andre- mommy!
U- hey baby! u kneel down to him and u hug him tight and u kiss his cheek.
U- mommy missed u!
De'Andre- i missed u too! David walks in the shop.
David- y/n i got the credit card bill today and it was higher than last month? why?
U- well i bought De'Andre some new clothes. it's not like we're in debt.
David- gurl don't talk back to me.
U- i'm sry baby. i'm sry. i'll just use cash next time ok?
David- yeah u better.
U- awww babe don't be mad @ me. U move close to him and u kiss his cheek.
U- (whisperin' in his ear) i'll make it up to u tonight. He just pushes u away.
David- i'm goin' out tonight.
U- where?
David- none of ur business.
U- David u've gone out every night this week. just stay home w/ me and ur son. plz.
David- i already made plans.
U- ....are u going to see that gurl again?
David- and what if i am? u ain't gon do shyt about it.
U- i told u not to swear in front of De'Andre.
David- and i told u not to talk back to me. U look him in his eyes and he has that look that says "wait til we get home" U look down scared.
U- i'm sry.
David- what? i told u to look @ me when ur talkin' to me.
U-(lookin' @ him) i'm sry.
David- that's better. look i'm leavin' now.
U- what time will u be home?
David- when i feel like coming home. he leaves & u just look @ De'Andre and he looks hurt. he knows how David hurts u and he hates it. u look @ Marcus and he's just lookin' @ u.
Marcus- u deserve better than that y/n.
U- look u barely know me....u don't know what i deserve.
Marcus- well no woman deserves that. i know that much. U just look @ him and u sigh and u finish his cut.
Marcus- how much do i owe u?
U- 10. he pulls out a 10 and hands it to u.
Marcus- thanks y/n.
U- ur welcome.....i guess i should introduce u. Marcus this is De'Andre. De'Andre this is Marcus.
De'Andre- hi Marcus.
Marcus- hey lil' man. how are u?
De'Andre- fine.
Marcus- that's good....well thanks again for the cut.
U- no problem. As he is about to leave he turns and looks @ u and walks back over to u.
Marcus- y/n if u want a real man who gives u real love u should call me. he hands u his card and then leaves. u look @ his card and u put it in ur back pocket. u and De'Andre leave to go home and u fix him dinner @ about 5 after u helped him with his homework. u then give him a bath and put him to sleep @ about 7. u don't even bother waiting up for David and u go to sleep w/Marcus on ur mind.

This message has been edited. Last edited by: ~*dat gurl nicole *~,

AWW TOO CUTE...BUT THAT NIGGA DAVID IS STR8 TRIPPIN!!!
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